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cultivation novel hide in dragonball broly childish naive stupid . I dont care about harem but this like a chinese cultivation novel.
well i really enjoy this story. more i need more stories like this any recommendations?
I hate when people that don’t know dragon ball write a story about drgaon ball lol nerfed to the extreme and made him brain dead. Don’t bother reading this trash
I read this whole book in less than 3 days and really love how Mr. Author Draugzel write. 5 star review and a little bit of love from me. take it, take it!
Finally, someone has written the Story of the Real warrior Sayan(Google Translator)..............................
Esto no es una reseña es sólo para conseguir una placa interesante historia es todo bay :v -------------------------------‐--‐-------‐------------------------------- Sexooooooooø
Average to bad.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
I feel like it doesn't deserve such a high rating so I'm gonna tone it down.. Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background
read the story from beginning to end in a Sprint, did not like only a couple of chapters that did not like the world building, the rest of the story was enjoyable.
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
It was really good but it was weird how as broly he had to get new forms to contend when as lssj he should be able to destroy anyone with just a little training
is there a love interest?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I love how this story even include characters from both the movies and video games, glad the Author has started another novel can't wait to see how that plays out.
It's good l enjoy reading it hahahahahahajahajahaajjaajhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahaahahahahahahah heheheheheheheheehheheeheeheheeheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheeheehehhehhehhehhehehehehehehheejehehhehehehehehehehheheeh
This story feature a weak half hearted nerfed broly full of nonsense OC’s that are there to ‘match’ the LEGENDARY Super Saiyan just for the plot. You would hardly think this was an SI Broly with how he is portrayed in this fic…… Also this fic mentions some culivation nonsense…. barely feels like a DBZ. Definitely not worth investing time into, this fic is very very mid.
Truly a gem. Even though there were a few typos here and there, I have enjoyed it thousands of times more than I enjoyed the literature that I was forced to read in school. Your story seems way more professional than those stories of tragedy and drama writers like Goethe and Shakespeare who are being worshipped for their "great" creations. Keep up your great work and I wish you all the best!
dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....
worth reading, spend some time bulding the world a d the characters which is important also interactions between them looks amazing, takes while to reach the most important arks, but it's worth it and the invention with plot and fabulous story!
This novel is the best Dragon ball fanfic ever!!!. It has everything I wanted in a dragonball fanfic i.e a saiyan ruler and conqueror, interesting fight scenes and a right amount of 18+ moments and also a reasonable well planned harem and ending. Highly recommend and I hope The Author continues his good work. Thank you. 😭😭😭😭😭😭✌✌✌✌👌
I greatly enjoyed this normally I don't read dragon ball fics.howerev I was bored and came across this fic.I started reading and couldn't stop doing so. thank you for writing this I will certainly check out your other fics.
This story was really good, I love how he actually struggled to breakthrough and I love how you wrote that ending. You developed the outside world and developed Characters who usually wouldn’t be developed since it’s not their story. Loved it. W story.
is this a harem???????????🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
This fic is TRASH. 1. Misleading title, the mc is not broly just some random saiyan 2. The setting is not even dbz universe it some chinese cultivation world. 3. Too much nonsense chapter.
This is freaking good aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
awesome read I hope all will enjoy this as much as I did...highly recommended highly recommended..... highly recommended.....highly recommended .....
Spoiler enthüllen
Truly the beat DB fic im this site. Author-san don't listen to those haters. You have a great fanfic here and probly one of the most underrated fic in this site.
If you told me that a child wrote it with his feet, I would believe you. What a pointless and absurd plot. It was so difficult to put a Broly in the original world and that's it? Who thought this whole plot was a good idea?
cultivation novel hide in dragonball broly childish naive stupid . I dont care about harem but this like a chinese cultivation novel.
well i really enjoy this story. more i need more stories like this any recommendations?
I hate when people that don’t know dragon ball write a story about drgaon ball lol nerfed to the extreme and made him brain dead. Don’t bother reading this trash
I read this whole book in less than 3 days and really love how Mr. Author Draugzel write. 5 star review and a little bit of love from me. take it, take it!
Finally, someone has written the Story of the Real warrior Sayan(Google Translator)..............................
Esto no es una reseña es sólo para conseguir una placa interesante historia es todo bay :v -------------------------------‐--‐-------‐------------------------------- Sexooooooooø
Average to bad.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
I feel like it doesn't deserve such a high rating so I'm gonna tone it down.. Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background
read the story from beginning to end in a Sprint, did not like only a couple of chapters that did not like the world building, the rest of the story was enjoyable.
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
It was really good but it was weird how as broly he had to get new forms to contend when as lssj he should be able to destroy anyone with just a little training
is there a love interest?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I love how this story even include characters from both the movies and video games, glad the Author has started another novel can't wait to see how that plays out.
It's good l enjoy reading it hahahahahahajahajahaajjaajhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahaahahahahahahah heheheheheheheheehheheeheeheheeheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheeheehehhehhehhehhehehehehehehheejehehhehehehehehehehheheeh
This story feature a weak half hearted nerfed broly full of nonsense OC’s that are there to ‘match’ the LEGENDARY Super Saiyan just for the plot. You would hardly think this was an SI Broly with how he is portrayed in this fic…… Also this fic mentions some culivation nonsense…. barely feels like a DBZ. Definitely not worth investing time into, this fic is very very mid.
Truly a gem. Even though there were a few typos here and there, I have enjoyed it thousands of times more than I enjoyed the literature that I was forced to read in school. Your story seems way more professional than those stories of tragedy and drama writers like Goethe and Shakespeare who are being worshipped for their "great" creations. Keep up your great work and I wish you all the best!
dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....dissapointed....
worth reading, spend some time bulding the world a d the characters which is important also interactions between them looks amazing, takes while to reach the most important arks, but it's worth it and the invention with plot and fabulous story!
This novel is the best Dragon ball fanfic ever!!!. It has everything I wanted in a dragonball fanfic i.e a saiyan ruler and conqueror, interesting fight scenes and a right amount of 18+ moments and also a reasonable well planned harem and ending. Highly recommend and I hope The Author continues his good work. Thank you. 😭😭😭😭😭😭✌✌✌✌👌
I greatly enjoyed this normally I don't read dragon ball fics.howerev I was bored and came across this fic.I started reading and couldn't stop doing so. thank you for writing this I will certainly check out your other fics.
This story was really good, I love how he actually struggled to breakthrough and I love how you wrote that ending. You developed the outside world and developed Characters who usually wouldn’t be developed since it’s not their story. Loved it. W story.
is this a harem???????????🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
This fic is TRASH. 1. Misleading title, the mc is not broly just some random saiyan 2. The setting is not even dbz universe it some chinese cultivation world. 3. Too much nonsense chapter.
This is freaking good aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
awesome read I hope all will enjoy this as much as I did...highly recommended highly recommended..... highly recommended.....highly recommended .....
Spoiler enthüllen Truly the beat DB fic im this site. Author-san don't listen to those haters. You have a great fanfic here and probly one of the most underrated fic in this site.
If you told me that a child wrote it with his feet, I would believe you. What a pointless and absurd plot. It was so difficult to put a Broly in the original world and that's it? Who thought this whole plot was a good idea?