Journey Of The Bright Immortal

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SmilingBlueWolf

Hi, author here. I'm a beginner in the Dao of Shamelessness, but I have to improve my game. I'd like to thank you for giving this novel a chance. Journey Of The Bright Immortal is Ming Ren's journey, but also about a world of cultivation and the Dao, and how righteousness can still exist even where power means everything. I do not post daily. Chapters will be released in a book format, meaning mass releases, as soon as I am happy with the result. I only promise that this novel will not be left unfinished. Please support this novel by leaving reviews and telling your friends.

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Avalondra

If I haven't known it is an original story I would have thought that it was one of the Chinese novel that got a translator and editor. It was like written by a professional writer. I strongly recommend it as there were a lot of new ideas that you haven't see in cultivations. I would like to read more and more. Waiting for more chapters (≧▽≦)

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vincesocoo

Pretty interesting start. I was surprised seeing emojis in chapter 2 though, not sure if that was intended. The first few chapters definitely got me hooked.

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Heaven_Dream

It was great. I couldn't believe it is an original novel. There were little to none writing mistakes. The Character development is good too, I like the MC's attitude. World building is good too but author-san should put some description or details about some places to make the readers be more immersed in the story. All in all, the novel was great! Keep it up!

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Nightmare_weaver

It's a pretty good novel with everything realistic. Many novels claim to be realistic but only a few are able to properly pull it off and this novel does it. Waiting for the second book.

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Arkinslize

To be honest, i am really surprised. I read 6 chapters in a row for something that should have been a simple review swap. Added to my collection. First chapter has some info dumps, but i consider it is necessary to set the background. This story is a standard eastern fantasy in many aspects, especially the beginning, but take a different turn i haven't seen yet from the 3rd chapter on that is very refreshing. Grammar seems good to me. Maybe some weird sentences time to time but i'm not a native english so i could be just totally ignorant. Promising novel. I would just add that wuxia/eastern webnovel translated or original are legion on Webnovel. It will be very tough to find your place among them without having a very high release rate to get attention. Some very good wuxia webnovels have far fewer views compared to what they deserve.

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bemajushira

All i can say is this novel is perhaps one of the best cultivation novels i have come across in with just the 30 something chapter put out. MC not really OP but has inherited alot of knowledge from his clans ancestor, already seens two goals so far that can keep the book intresting and also the MC is not all about me me me he seems to understand that even with all the power in the world just having strength alone isn't enough. Shown by the effort he put into helping the forest clan. Novel would be rated higher but to the instability of chapters can't do so he even though i really love the novel.

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Cataporozo

I dont know how to write reviews, so i'm just trying to help the author a bit, give the novel a chance, it is really well written. the MC is not that op, he has knowledge, which can make him op in the future.

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xicath

i cant imagine how stupid our MC is, he know he is walking treasure and the wanted person with weak cultivation but he casualy throw his name out and even meedle in other bussiness rather than find the survivor and family of his clan. in ch 34 he can escape from forest but he just throw in to show he has big ball, now he is getting hunted hahaaaa and another thing i dont like our mc got a lot of treasure that he even dont know, something like ancient body and heaven-defiying art, and its only chapter 33??

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Kamatis

Well, as part of review swap,here I am now. Don't expect expert advice since I'm Not really an editor. First of all, I didn't saw any wrong grammar and typo good job. The story is quite interesting and a bit refreshing. Keep up the good work.