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this dope man keep up the good work buddy! the story background is amazing !!! can’t wait for the NEXT CHAPTERRRR :) story development is great too. how did you come up with this story?? asking for a friend
great idea I loved the beautiful writing background development can come in many forms which makes it a mystery in history d
This is good I like he not a sayian but I hope his growth rate is the same or faster man was that overload cheap he only gave him double the growth rate thanks for the story
Hi im the author i gave myself 3 and a half because i know im not the best my update will be 4 chapters a week minimum with 6 being the most not including bonus chapters which is 250 power stones the max will be 3 bonuses per week thanks for reading
A very promising start to a dbz/system novel; the choice of starting race is also very entertaining as it adds some diversity between this dbz/system novel, and others. I would highly recommend at least giving this a try
this dope man keep up the good work buddy! the story background is amazing !!! can’t wait for the NEXT CHAPTERRRR :) story development is great too. how did you come up with this story?? asking for a friend
great idea I loved the beautiful writing background development can come in many forms which makes it a mystery in history d
This is good I like he not a sayian but I hope his growth rate is the same or faster man was that overload cheap he only gave him double the growth rate thanks for the story
Hi im the author i gave myself 3 and a half because i know im not the best my update will be 4 chapters a week minimum with 6 being the most not including bonus chapters which is 250 power stones the max will be 3 bonuses per week thanks for reading
A very promising start to a dbz/system novel; the choice of starting race is also very entertaining as it adds some diversity between this dbz/system novel, and others. I would highly recommend at least giving this a try