Zusammenfassung
The main character reincarnates like every other MC and Gains a system.
A person is betrayed by his girlfriend (Cliche), he tries to fight the person that she cheated on him and when he gets into a fight with the person he dies with one punch.
When he dies our Mc Ed takes over his body with a system that can buy anything.
some extra information
the system can be upgraded to buy anything from any world or fiction
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionPls update more chapter!!! Can't wait to read next chapter.......... .........................................................................................
Pls update more chapter!! Cant wait to read more chapter.. ...............................................................................................
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Novel is nearly trash, it's extremely badly translated, it's a weaboo mess, the MC get op for no real reason, he doesn't even have a real goal, there nothing more cliché, seriously i can't find one good point.
This barely counts as a story, there is no plot, no character development and world development, writing quality is the golden standard for webnovel so it wouldn't pass on other sites like the hive of mediocre sjw's that is FF.net. The name for this should be changed to Training: The Montage. 'cause that's all there is to this,, fk he rarely uses the damned system this fic is named after.
The story is very decent so far so I recommend reading it however you're going to be pest with the status pages that are mixed into the chapters in the middle or the beginning of the chapters which makes his chapters Shorter and unfeeling I mean it's not like I hate the story I gave it 4 stars but I'm not going any higher 4 stars is already generous if hes gonna put the status pages in the beginning or middle I'm just gonna stop reading because this is absolute ****en ridiculous All status pages should be at the bottom and not be counted towards the chapter count. Have the main character turn off the notifications and check them after a fight after your story of the chapter is done because I am will drop this story if that happens again. That is something you don't do I look forward to reading a full chapter I don't wanna ****en read his entire status is line by line and then have maybe half a paragraph Up story do that again I'm dropping story no ifs no ands no but I will rate your story to ****
So good this is probably the best thing I’ve read on here and I’ve been around the writing style from the Beginning to end is the best and I love how he just keeps getting stronger
A história é super rasa, os personagens não são desenvolvidos, felizmente ou infelizmente o MC fica forte muito rápido. A história tinha tudo para dar certo, mas meeeeeh.
really like the concept of this novel and really hope u can continue this novel and release it daily if so believe that maybe will have a lot of people that are intrested in it ~
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Pls update more chapter!!! Can't wait to read next chapter...... .............................................................................
I'm quite excited to know the story development, over all it's quite the same with previous novel wrote by the writer but in the different perspective and i like it... Couldn't wait for the newest update
MC Gains a system. Take place of A person is betrayed by his girlfriend, tries to fight the person that she cheated on him and when he gets into a fight with the person he dies with one punch. When he dies our Mc Ed takes over his body with a system that can buy anything. the system can be upgraded to buy anything from any world or fiction. I love story like that because it does not get all cultivation and boring. But Un fortunaltly 11 month and no update. Droped ):
Pls update more chapter!! Cant wait to read more chapter.. ...............................................................................................
Exp sect guest elder. Don’t pay attention to those who criticize for the heck of it. Just keep writing and ignore them. If there’s some people who don’t like your writing, there’re plenty of others who do.
I have to go to the store? What I will be doing? What I will do it tomorrow? What time are we could do a good time for your way back to the house and get it back to the airport
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Do not ignore the fact that I five starred my own novel. Hello people Any ideas you guys want to include just comment it here. I might pick it and put in the story, remember I said ”MIGHT”