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Kapitel 25: 2.10 Star Painter

With the memories of their hearts and bodies connected, she would probably leave this world a bit more contented knowing that she actually fell in love and had given herself to her lover before she left. As soon as this thought struck her, she knew what she had to do. But before that, she needed to make this half-brother of hers leave the room first.

"Elder brother, could you let go for a second?" She patted his back while she asked him.

Cheng Da obeyed her wishes and opened the distance between themselves, but his arms didn't let go of her waist while he looked at her, waiting for her speak.

Tian He didn't bother telling him to move his arms since she knew that it was useless seeing that wide happy smile plastered on his face.

She exhaled deeply and began speaking.

"Elder brother, Xiu Ying has a request. I hope elder brother can help me fulfill it." She looked deeply into his eyes to show her seriousness.

Cheng Da was bewildered but he didn't keep her waiting, "Xiu Ying, please tell me. If I can do it, I'll do my best to fulfill it." His arms that were on her waist rubbed it gently while he spoke.

Tian He never left her eyes on him and seriously spoke, "Elder brother, I want you right now."

Cheng Da's arms on her waist almost slipped off and his face expressed surprise, expectation, excitement, and even some nervousness, then his eyes looked intently at hers to confirm whether she was being serious or not. However, seeing the firmness within them, he knew that she meant what she just said. He braced himself and asked her to confirm her request.

"Xiu Ying, are you sure about this? Although I've said I've wanted to possess and make you mine for a while now, I don't want my words to be the factor that triggered this sudden request of yours. It would actually be more appropriate if we were to handle these affairs after we've properly married." Cheng Da wanted to give her a grand wedding and make plenty of preparations for their first time as mutual lovers together but he was really caught off guard with her request this time.

Tian He lifted her hand to touch his right cheek gently and spoke sweetly to him, "I am sure, elder brother. After I freshen up a bit, I want elder brother to take me in your bedroom. Please elder brother, do this for me?" She moved her face closer to his until their noses were almost touching and softly whispered to him while her pleading eyes met his excited yet nervous ones.

Cheng Da only took a moment before responding and nodded his head earnestly. His hand gently touched her right cheek, feeling her shudder slightly, his heart grew content and he smiled softly.

"Xiu Ying, you know that once you agree with this, I won't be able to stop myself if you decide to quit halfway." Although his heart and body wanted her, he didn't want to hurt her either.

"Elder brother, I have never felt this sure about a decision in my life." She was going to treasure this love and time with him.

Searching her eyes for any uncertainties, he finally caved in since he found none. He relaxed his breathing and moved his hand behind her head to slowly bring her forehead close to his lips so he could gently kiss it. He held it for a moment while breathing in her sweet honey scent, finally, he let her go and got up from her bed.

"Xiu Ying, elder brother will now go make preparations for this, meanwhile you can have your midday meal and freshen up, and when you're ready, I'll be waiting for you in my bedroom." He gently said while smiling in expectation at her.

Tian He nodded in response and saw him leave her bedroom, after waiting a while to make sure he had fully left her courtyard, she called out to her Little Stars, she needed his help if she were to go through with this.

After pink particles of light finished gathering and formed a transparent white jade skin baby, she heard his cute yet wronged voice start speaking.

"Host~, you've finally called me after all this time, I was beginning to think that you've forgotten me." Little Stars used his transparent arms to try to wrap them around Tian He but since it just went through her, he opted to just stay near her to complain about his loneliness.

"Little Stars, I'm sorry, it's just that with everything that's been going on, I really didn't need your help but now its different. I require your full support for the task I'm about to complete, I hope you can help me." She softly spoke to Little Stars.

Little Stars lifted his small head from her bosom and curiously asked, "What does Host require my assistance in?"

Tian He breathed out deeply and began telling her request, "Little Stars, since you can manipulate when the original owner's soul comes back into this body and help it receive the memories that I've went through, can you help me erase some of its memories?" She waited with bated breath for Little Stars' answer.

Little Stars was bewildered, "What memories does Host want to prevent the original owner from receiving?"

"I want every moment I've spent with the Wang clan's leader erased, starting from the first time I met him in the Wang clan's Main Dining Hall and ending when I leave this world. As for the other memories of practicing painting and entering the Arts Contest, the original owner may keep those. It's better for the both of us if these memories are erased, or else it will only confuse and place the original owner in an awkward position." She couldn't force the original owner to retain these memories since they all led up to her half-brother and her falling in love, forcing these feelings onto her wasn't right.

"Host, are you sure?" Little Stars wanted to confirm her answer.

"Yes, I'm sure Little Stars, please erase them for me." Tian He nodded seriously towards Little Stars.

"If that is what Host wants, then Little Stars will erase those memories retained in this body before the original owner can receive them." Little Stars said determinedly.

"Thank you, Little Stars. Also, I want to purchase something from the system's store with the energy I've received from the last world's mission." Since she was going to give herself to her half-brother using this body, she needed to consume a pill to prevent her from getting pregnant.

Although she was sorry for taking this body's virginity away, she wanted an everlasting memory with the person she loves, and knowing how possessive her half-brother is, she was sure that even if she was gone, he would never let anyone touch the original owner, so the original owner will probably never find out that her virginity had been loss.

She solemnly promised herself that she will only be selfish just this once. After all, when she leaves, she'll never see him again.

Unnoticeably, Tian He's eyes started to become moist and small drops of tears began to stream down her pale white face. She was so thankful for his love and for teaching her how to love, she never realized it would be this wonderful.

She loved his laughter, his care and gentleness, his playfulness towards her, she loved the times they've spent together these past two weeks, just feeling that someone loved and accepted her was something so comforting and pleasant that it made her heart feel so at peace. These emotions that were all new to her felt so unreal and beautiful that she wanted to hold onto to them forever.

However, just thinking about never seeing him again, she didn't know what to feel. Her heart that she thought was empty had finally found love and acceptance but knowing that it was so short-lived was causing it to throb painfully, this feeling felt so suffocating and heavy that it was making it difficult for her to breathe. She didn't want to think about this, she wanted to embrace him with happiness and joy.

Oh, god. She wanted much more than just this short-lived happiness, she was a selfish person to begin with, if it would make her happy and she liked it, she would immediately pursue it, but this time was different from the rest, this time she didn't have a choice.

"Host~, what's wrong?" Little Stars was taken aback by his Host's sudden cries.

Tian He looked up from her bed at Little Stars, her vision was a bit blurry due to the tears that crowded her eyes, after wiping them away with her hands, she took a deep breath and calmed herself.

Since she had the luck to meet someone and share mutual feelings with, she was going to make the best experience out of it. If she couldn't stay with him for a lifetime, she'll take the memories of him with her. The memories will help her live through this, she couldn't be more grateful for them.

She turned her attention to Little Stars and asked him to bring out the list of items from the store. After exchanging a pill to prevent her pregnancy, she felt that some of the soul energy within her was taken away and in her hand was a tiny white pill.

She immediately swallowed it with water, then she bid Little Stars goodbye and got off the bed to start her preparations for meeting with her half-brother. Since she wanted this night to be perfect, she wanted to look her best.

While Tian He was busy getting ready, Cheng Da who was in his bedroom was also getting ready, he already gave orders for the servants to purchase some necessary items for his Xiu Ying's first time and had his bedroom sheets replaced with brand new rosy red ones. The thought of having his Xiu Ying's naked body lay atop of it with her pale white skin increased his passions and excitement for her.

After arranging everything and he himself finished bathing, he placed the items his Xiu Ying was going to need for her first time near the bedside and had the servants lit some red candles and soothing incense to help create a relaxing atmosphere.

And just when he was about to call a servant to ask whether the Young Miss has arrived yet, he heard them announce her arrival and he naturally gave her permission to enter his bedroom. When he saw her come through his bedroom doors, his heart started to crazily pound, and he stood frozen due to the blooming charm she was emitting. Her crimson red outfit with golden specks and rosy red colored face mask that covered only half of her face was making her look extremely tempting and seductive. All of her long black hair was let down and she only had on a simple golden pin with a small white pearl at the end of it for decoration. Her pale white face and those clear bright eyes that stared at him with the same excitement created an illusion of a beautiful dream that even he was finding hard to believe.

Tian He saw her half-brother who stood frozen in place while looking at her with his scorching gaze. It felt like his eyes could really eat her whole and she couldn't help but shiver in nervousness for what's about to happen. She thought she had enough resolved for this but witnessing his beast like stares was making her feel extremely small and prey-like. Her body was also frozen in place and unnoticeably she even took a small step backwards but before she could move even more, she saw him rushed towards her and picked her up easily from where she stood.

"Eeep." She let out a small scream while she clung to his neck and let him carry her towards his bed.

Her eyes darted across the new rosy red sheets in even more nervousness, her body was also shivering slightly from thinking about the things that were going to be done to her later. Suddenly, her back was to the mattress and the new rosy red bed curtains fell down from its place, shielding them from the outside.

The candle lights in the room were only small glows behind those curtains, creating a dreamy yet beautiful scene. When she looked up, she saw her half-brother on top of her, staring at her with those same beastly eyes that held desire, passion, excitement, and joy. It looked like he was trying to imprint the scene of her laying on his bed into his mind. He wasn't touching her, but his stares were already enough to make her feel nervous yet excited.

Her body couldn't help but squirm a bit, she was hoping that her efforts would put off his passionate momentum that was slowly emitting out from his body.

Finally, when she couldn't take any more of his fiery gaze, she spoke.

"Elder brother, please stop staring at me like that, it's making me feel really nervous." No joke, those burning eyes of his were causing her heart to loudly pound and she could feel her body shake in trepidation from it.

Cheng Da teasingly smiled at her request and lifted his right hand to touch her left cheek that was hidden due to the rosy red face mask.

"Xiu Ying, you're exceptionally beautiful today. Did you dress yourself up just for me?" He already knew that she did it for this special night with him, but he wanted to hear her say it.

Tian He felt his warm fingers tickle her cheek and her heartbeat sped up while she blushed after hearing his question. This idiot half-brother of hers, it was obvious that she did it because she wanted to look her best for him, but he really is shameless enough to ask her to say it.

She glared at him a bit before replying, "Elder brother, since you already know then why do you still ask?" Honestly, she didn't feel like giving in to his shamelessness.

Cheng Da chuckled at her semi-angry tone and expression, "But Xiu Ying, elder brother wants to hear you say it, please?" Not waiting for her answer, he leaned down his head and gently kissed her on her left cheek then he moved and kissed her right cheek.

Feeling the warm touch of his lips on her cheeks, she felt her face flush even more and her hands automatically moved to push his chest away. But since she was weaker than him to begin with, they did nothing to stop his movements and he continued to kiss her cheeks. Suddenly, she felt his tongue lick them through her face mask and she felt a small shock course through her body.

His gentle warm kisses were causing a weird feeling to well up inside her body. All of a sudden, she felt the absence of them from her cheeks but before she could relax, she felt his rough warm tongue lick the side of her neck and her body shivered in response. Her hands were still clutching onto his clothes while her eyes that were beginning to turn moist looked at him with a bit of a wronged expression.

Cheng Da saw her eyes and used hand to touch them, feeling her eyelashes tickle his skin, his heartbeat couldn't help but speed up and he smiled widely before speaking.

"Xiu Ying, it's fine if you don't want to say it, but I wonder how long you can last?" Cheng Da teasingly said.

Tian He didn't understand what he meant by that but soon she didn't have the freedom to even think any more because she saw him remove her face mask and before she could say anything, he opened her mouth and drove his hot tongue inside of it.

"Mmm!" She could feel his tongue try to reach her throat, it was going in too deep!

Her hands continued to clutch at his front shirt while he madly kissed her. She felt his need and excitement from the plundering actions his tongue was performing inside her mouth. Her body couldn't help but heat up and her legs started squirming from the weird feelings his constant thrust and tangle of his hot fast tongue was causing to her body.

Her chin was being held tightly by him, preventing her from escaping his merciless tongue and his other hand was beginning to remove the articles of clothing she had. She felt her shoulders and chest become bare and her heartbeat sped up even more at the chill she was exposed to.

Suddenly, her left breast was squeezed roughly by his large hand, the abruptness of this caused her body to heat up even more and her legs increased its movements. His constant kneading of her breasts and repetitive ravaging of her mouth was making a huge heat source develop underneath her belly area. She could feel that her breathing was coming out fast, and trickles of saliva were leaking down her neck thanks to his rude advances in her mouth.

And just when she thought she was going to stop breathing from his kissing, he lifted his mouth from hers and she was free to breathe out from her mouth again.

However, she didn't get to catch her breath when she felt him use his teeth to forcefully bite onto her right nipple.

"Ah!" It hurts.

Some tears leaked out of her eyes because of the sudden pain she felt.

"Ah…aa…" His teeth were nibbling and sucking on her right nipple while his strong fingers pinched her left nipple. The two stimuli were causing waves of shock to run through her body and her hands wanted to push his head away, but he just continued to ruthlessly bite and squeeze her nipples while strongly kneading her breasts. Her legs were squirming more now, and an uncomfortable warm feeling was starting to well up near her core area.

"Elder brother…wait." He was moving too fast that her body couldn't withstand all these sensations.

Cheng Da looked up from the biting of her nipple and smiled evilly.

"Xiu Ying, it looks like you weren't able to last that long, do you want me stop touching your breasts that badly?" He grinned while playfully kneading her breasts with his large hands and gazed at her for her answer.

His warm hands that directly touched the skin on her sensitive breasts while his heated gaze stared at her was too much for her to handle so she immediately replied without thinking.

"Yes…please…" Her breathing was still erratic because his movements on her breasts never stopped.

He grinned even wider after hearing her reply.

"Since that is the case, elder brother will not touch Xiu Ying's breasts for now." He sat up from his position and reached over to the bedside stand where he placed the item he had purchased for her earlier.

Tian He saw him hold a small wooden circle-shaped container, after he opened it, he generously took some of a white colored cream out and gently placed it all around her breasts and nipples. She felt a cold sensation on her exposed skin and wondered what exactly he put on her.

Suddenly, she saw him take off her skirt and the rest of clothing she had on. Her whole body was bare naked as it rested on the rosy red bed sheets, she couldn't help but move her hands and legs to cover up the embarrassing parts of her body. Although he had already seen her naked, she still felt a bit shameful when he looked at her exposed parts with such a heated gaze.

Cheng Da took a moment to admire her beautiful body on the new red bedsheets and he felt his desire for her rose up. He rapidly took a scoop of the white cream and placed it on her belly, inner thighs, and finally, he scooped a bunch and slowly spread it on her pulsing core area.

When Tian He felt the coldness of the cream on her skin, she couldn't help but shiver a bit, but she didn't get a chance to ask what he put on her because she felt his rough fingers glide across her core area with that cold cream.

"Ah. What…" The cold cream on her core area caused her legs to shiver uncontrollably.

"Xiu Ying, this cream will help you feel less pain later on, bear with it for now." Since it was her first time, it was going to hurt her if he didn't prepare her properly like this. This cream will help her heighten her senses and make her feel pleasure more quickly.

Tian He heard his explanation and nodded her head in compliance. She knew that a virgin would feel the most pain for their first experience, but she didn't really understand what exactly will cause the pain since her imperial mother deemed her much too young to learn such information, she only knew that having a man take a woman's body would lead to pregnancy. Her knowledge of a wedding night only went up to the man touching and kissing the woman, and something about her core area, so it was good to know that this half-brother of hers was considerate enough to have something to help her for this pain she'll feel.

"Xiu Ying, I'm going to start preparing you now." He looked at her for confirmation to continue and seeing her agree, he started to slowly use his large fingers to gently massage her core area, the cream he placed around there had quickly made the area moist. He lightly pressed on a spot then moved his fingers in a circular motion around that spot.

Tian He felt his cold fingers touch her sensitive core area and her body shuddered in response. When he began his slow massage with his large fingers on a certain spot, she couldn't help herself from moaning.

"Aaa…" His rubbing of that spot was causing a weird burning sensation to well up beneath her belly.

Suddenly, she felt his rubbing become faster and more forceful, his large fingers were moving so quickly and with so much strength that the burning sensation she felt earlier increased to such a height that her head was starting to feel dizzy and her voice involuntarily came out.

"Ah…mm…" She shook her head while trying to stop herself from opening her mouth, she didn't know she could make such embarrassing sounds.

Cheng Da heard her moans and he grinned happily while using more strength to rub her sensitive spot in her core area even faster. He could feel her body shudder constantly under his touch and her legs were trembling so badly that he had to use his other hand to hold one of them to keep it away so that he could continue pleasuring her core area. Finally, as he felt her about to climax, he rapidly plunged two of his fingers inside her opening on her core area.

"Ah!" She felt her body get electrocuted by his sudden thrust into her, the sensations all over her body was heightened causing her body to arch up and her core area rapidly twitched before she felt something warm rapidly spurt out from her core area, causing her mind to blank out for a second.

Finally, the twitching from her core area calmed down and her body fell back down her the bed. Her breathing was coming out fast, her body felt exhausted and weak from the all these sensations his rubbing of her core area has caused.

However, before she could gather herself, she saw out of the corner of her eyes that he started stripping off his clothes. Eventually, she saw those powerful muscles on his abdomen and arms again, but when she continued her gaze downwards, she saw something unbelievable.

"Elder brother…what is…that on you?" She was still trying to catch her breath when she questioned him about a huge long object tautly stretched out from underneath his belly. It was so big and round that she was certain that her hand couldn't encase the whole thing if she held it.

Cheng Da laughed playfully at her naivety, he wasn't surprised that she didn't know what his object was since his parents had sheltered her most of her life and there wasn't anyone around to teach her. It would have shocked him instead if she knew what it was, if that happened, he wouldn't resist the urge to get rid of that person for contaminating his cute Xiu Ying's ears.

"Xiu Ying, this is elder brother's assistance in helping you become mine." Since he had already finished preparing her, he was now going to slowly claim her.

Tian He was bewildered, how was this going to help her become his?

Cheng Da caught the question in her eyes and he couldn't help but chuckle softly in amusement, why are her expressions always so cute?

"Xiu Ying, it's alright. I'll slowly teach you right now." He gradually brought his large object near the opening on her core area and gently rubbed it against that opening spot with the warmness of his object.

Tian He felt the tip of that hot huge object rub against a spot in her core area and her body shuddered uncontrollably in response. She started feeling weird from his consistent grinding with his hot object, that spot was particularly sensitive as she felt it twitch with every rub he did, an uncomfortable warm sensation started welling up around that area and she couldn't help but move her legs to try to stop that feeling.

Cheng Da saw her legs moving and knew that she was starting to feel heated due to his continual rubbing on her sensitive opening. He looked at the squirming Xiu Ying and moved up to hold her chin so that his lips could seal hers. His tongue gently caressed hers while his other hand never stopped moving the tip of his object on her moist opening in her core area.

Tian He felt his large warm tongue stretch its way into her mouth again, but this time it was more gentle than the first, his tongue lightly caressed hers while she felt the area beneath her belly get warmer and more uncomfortable as he kept rubbing against that same spot in her core area.

Her hands were holding onto his shoulders while the speed of his rubbing abruptly increased, and she felt a strong heat source gather near her core area, her body was now madly trembling, and she felt the same twitching from before, as if her core area was getting ready to erupt and sprout out its warm liquid again. His tongue was plundering deep within her mouth, she could feel him try to reach the depths of it and a shudder would run down her spine each time he licked around that area.

When she felt that her core area's heat was going to reach its max again, she suddenly felt the tip of his hard hot object thrust into that spot that he been continually rubbing, and her hands immediately grabbed onto his shoulders tighter as she felt an immense tearing pain come from that area, it was so painful that she couldn't help screaming.

"Mmmm!" She was shaking her legs frantically to try to push that object out of her.

Cheng Da saw her distress and used his hands to gently massage her breasts to get her to relax herself while he worked on kissing her to distract herself from the pain. Finally, he felt her insides relax a bit and he removed his lips from hers. He watched her gaze at him with tearful eyes and he wanted to reassure her.

"Xiu Ying, relax your body and bear with the pain for a bit, it will feel better soon." He swore that this was the last time he'll let her feel pain, after this, it will be more enjoyable.

"Elder brother…" She really couldn't stop her body from shaking, especially her lower body as she felt the sharp tip of his hot object inside of her.

Cheng Da leaned down his head again to kiss her softly on her forehead before moving back and used his hands to bring up her legs to widen her opening and when he felt it was enough, he rapidly thrusted all of his long hot object inside of her, going as far in as his large object could reach.

"Ah!" His sudden strong thrust was too much, she felt it go inside of her deeply, it was so hot and full that it was making her mind dizzy and all she could do was grab onto the bed sheets with her hands to withstand the scorching and penetrating feeling of his large object inside of her throbbing hole.

Cheng Da felt her warm insides wrapping around his object so tightly that it felt like they were millions of tongues sucking at it, it caused him to grunt and he couldn't control himself any longer. He raised her legs and placed them on top his shoulders while he held her waist with his hands and quickly pulled it even closer to himself so that the remainder of his huge object finally entered her moist opening.

"Ahh!" She felt that his long hot object had hit something inside of her and it was causing her to madly shudder.

"Xiu Ying." Cheng Da's desire filled voice called out to her before reaching out his hands to join with hers.

Tian He clutched onto his hands while she looked at his face that was close to hers. She saw his eyes display passion and excitement that was mixed in with joy and satisfaction. Automatically, she opened her mouth and his tongue naturally came in with the invitation. With the help of his gentle kisses, she relaxed a bit of her body and immediately, she felt him pull out his large hot object and thrust back hard in again. This rhythm of thrusting and pulling out started out mildly at first but it wasn't long before she felt the speed of his thrusts increase and his ravaging of her insides became rougher and wilder.

"Mmmn!" No, he was going too fast, the feeling of his hot object constantly rubbing against her insides was making her dizzy and she felt so many sensations on her body that she was literally going to drown in it.

Cheng Da felt her insides heat up and decided to thrust in and out even faster, his large tongue fiercely ravaged her mouth while he moved one of his hands to strongly knead her breasts. He kept this fast thrusting rhythm because her insides were just too pleasurable.

"Mmmm." No, it was too quick. She felt that his constant speedy thrusts were rapidly heating up her insides.

When he felt her body heat up even more, he removed his mouth from hers and gripped her legs to raise her hips and when he got the angle right, he plunged his hard hot object even deeper into her dripping hole.

"Ahh!" She felt his sharp hot tip strongly hit something within her.

"Ah…a…ah…ah…" His wild thrusting movements were causing his hard tip to constantly impact that area, she felt her body shudder even more, a huge heat source was rapidly building up in her core area and she felt something was going to burst soon.

Cheng Da felt the intense heat inside of her and knew that their climax was getting nearer. He renewed his efforts to penetrate her hole with fiercer and faster thrusts, and just when before he was going to climax, he brought up her body so that she was now sitting up and his arms that were around her waist pushed her body downwards to let her pulsing hole meet his hard object once more.

"Ah!!" No, this time she felt his sharp hot tip plunge into her so deeply that she felt like she might break.

"Ah..no…too..much…" She tried to get him to slow down his rough thrusts, but he didn't listen because she felt his grip on her waist tighten and his large hot object thrusted in even faster and stronger.

"No…slow…down…ah…" She clung onto his neck while her body forcibly rocked in rhythm with his wild thrusting movements.

Cheng Da felt the strong heat source within her and with one swift motion, he madly pushed her waist further downwards while his hips rose to let his hard object impact her more deeply and he growled before letting out his hot liquid desire fill up her tight insides.

"Ahhhh!" She felt a lava like liquid splash all around her insides, affecting her body and causing it to crazily twitch before she arched her back and she felt her core area squirt out a warm liquid. It caused her body to madly tremble and her mind blanked out.

When her core area finally finished releasing its liquid, her now weak body slumped back down on the bed while she felt his large object finally remove itself from her insides and he joined her laying down. Their breathing was coming out fast and her body was still shuddering from the after effects of it, suddenly, she felt his large warm hands hug her body while his legs crossed over too to encase her in his embrace. Her head lay comfortably on his arm while she watched him gaze lovingly at her before her eyelids became heavy and she let sleep take over.

Cheng Da saw her close her eyes and he reached out his hand to sooth her forehead to help her sleep better.

"Xiu Ying, my Xiu Ying, you have finally become mine." He smiled happily while thinking about this fact and wrapped his arms around her to bring her even closer to him, smelling the sweet honey scent she emitted, his heart became relaxed and eventually, he joined her in slumber.


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Hello everyone, this is actually my first time writing about this kind of scene, please let me know if it's good or not. Any advice is appreciated because I hope to improve, thank you!

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