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The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
Its a worthless "with a system" story. I don't know what else there is to say. System stories make no sense, are unoriginal and overall pointless. Does anyone really believe that all those pointless numbers really matter in the end? Its simply a game of play pretend where the MC has unlimited power but doesn't want the reader to know.
dude come on I have been waiting quite some time so I need you to update more so that I can have fun man. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AND MAKE IT GOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
every thing about this novel is good but the only reason it didnt attract more audience is because of its cover... and only readers attracted were assholes like i am too cool and with sofisticated test to give five star hahahaha.. my only reason for reading so late because i underestimated the novel coz of dull cover(when its an old saing dont judge a book by its cover)
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I Love it and I hope you keep up the good work pal. HHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Damn it. Your intro got me hook and then you just had to introduce a system. I'm tired of system novels. They're so overused. But I wish you the best of luck.
MAN PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE THE YOUR NOVEL TOO GOOD AND IM CRAVING TO READ MORE PLEASE :)= --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please make more chapters so we can enjoy it sadsadsaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!"!!!!skkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkakmskkccccccccccccccccc
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Pls more chapters ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
UPDATE MORE U PIECE OS SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
cooooooooollllll ssssssstorrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy--------------------- moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss hahahahha
Good story line.............................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................
Muito bom, recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ..... ...... .. ......... .. ...... .........................................................................
Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you write more ...................................................................................................................................................
Hoho.. That was scary . Mamamaammammamammaamammamammmamamamamamamammamamammamamamama. A. A. Aa. A. A.. Amamamamamammaammamamamammamamamammama
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
Its a worthless "with a system" story. I don't know what else there is to say. System stories make no sense, are unoriginal and overall pointless. Does anyone really believe that all those pointless numbers really matter in the end? Its simply a game of play pretend where the MC has unlimited power but doesn't want the reader to know.
dude come on I have been waiting quite some time so I need you to update more so that I can have fun man. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AND MAKE IT GOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
every thing about this novel is good but the only reason it didnt attract more audience is because of its cover... and only readers attracted were assholes like i am too cool and with sofisticated test to give five star hahahaha.. my only reason for reading so late because i underestimated the novel coz of dull cover(when its an old saing dont judge a book by its cover)
Strongest and now in prison lol,chapter to short, trash marvelfic😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@-zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
pls release more chapters HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!biggie
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I Love it and I hope you keep up the good work pal. HHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Damn it. Your intro got me hook and then you just had to introduce a system. I'm tired of system novels. They're so overused. But I wish you the best of luck.
MAN PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE THE YOUR NOVEL TOO GOOD AND IM CRAVING TO READ MORE PLEASE :)= --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please make more chapters so we can enjoy it sadsadsaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!"!!!!skkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkakmskkccccccccccccccccc
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Spoiler enthüllen Pls more chapters ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
UPDATE MORE U PIECE OS SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story and the world are amazing, also the power the protagonist has is original, the only problem i have with the story are the updates that are slow................................................................. .....
cooooooooollllll ssssssstorrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy--------------------- moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss hahahahha
Good story line.............................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................
Muito bom, recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ..... ...... .. ......... .. ...... .........................................................................
Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!Cool Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!______________!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_______!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you write more ...................................................................................................................................................