Aka Manto

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Giver123

An amazing novel. i love the story as well as the lore. I'm only on the 5th chapter but I see thatif you keep this up, you'll do very well! Keep on going! You got this!

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tort34

This is an awesome light novel! I honestly can't think of anything bad to say about it. From what I can see, Japan has influenced you quite a bit. I like thos type of vibe that has been added to the story! Gambate!

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powerkinger

Everything is great! You just have to work on your update consistency.Normally I would have rated this 4.5 stars however I'll give you an extra for motivation. Don't make me disappointed! So update regularly!

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lowe56

I've read the other reviews and they pretty much have got a basic grasp of the novel. Everything is absolutely brilliant, however you just have to work on your update speed.

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MadamShiela

Very Interesting Concepts, I like the opposite comparisons you put there. Light and darkness. Life and death. Wich both happen to start with L and D, I wonder if you did that on purpose. Overall very good book, I really enjoyed it.

LV 2

MMJLS

I love the lore to this, it really works well with the whole setting of hell. Judging by the lore it seems you've also done your research. I also think that your update game is very strong! The world background is also very grand. However, sometimes I feel like the story development changes speed every now and then, other than that it's pretty good.

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WebnovelistUsernam

Veery factual in terms of mythology, I double checked your information and it turned out mostly correct, with the spells you just made up, which is very reasonable. However, with all the demonic religious based stuff, you did not get anything incorrect, you have my props.

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Popular56

Brilliant outline and planning, great characters, very good plot. Loved pretty much the entire novel, thank you for the hard work! Keep it up!

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HellionHell

This was a very good book, I like the lore, the way you layout the world, it's all very interesting and unique, well done honestly I don't see how I would write anything near to that level, to be honest. Also, it seems you had a lot of fun making this.

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PewPieBroDie1

Great Story. Great Presentation. Great Wordplay. Great Plot. Great Character Development. Great Lore. So I'm giving you a great score. Enjoy! ^_^

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DaoistLikeaboss

I think what everyone saying here is the same thing, Nice lore, nice sentence structure. Nice pace. nice character development. You definitely have Asian influence inside there somewhere and overall a very good job.

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HieloMaaFwen

It's clear to see that you're quite new to this as you're not using techniques a novelist would normally use. Though, that may add the spice of freshness that people might be attracted to.

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ElectricDragonKing

Wtf is this.....….................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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xsavannahx

I thought it was really good nothing bad to say about it really well research . Enjoyed all the little details !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👍👍

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LiaFeil

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