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It's a good plot. Football (*ahem* soccer *ahem*) plus system is a good combination. Writing quality is good as well, no errors that will disrupt the reading experience. But the story feels a bit rushed, like the author is trying to cram everything into one chapter. It is detailed yet very fast-paced. I don't get much breathing room with one action after another. The plot device is forced as well. No mother in the world would take the words of her six-year-old child seriously, especially if it involves his future. I understand the plot won't go forward if it's not done this way but I just have a hard time accepting that. World building is Earth so there's no flaw to point out. Character design is decent as well. Overall, this is a good novel, I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of developments the author would show later.
This story is highly amusing and pretty f*cking funny. The characters are consistent and the plot is fascinating. Vocabulary use is overall okay, but the writing style makes up for it as it is amausing in its own right. Additionally, I noticed a lot of competitor sport stories in the category tend to lack in the actual competitive sports department, but this story remains true and keeps the sports as the main plot device. Some people may say frequent updating is necessary, but the way I see it, I rather have good content every few weeks than a poorly developed chapter everyday. Keep up the great work!
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I'm your fan PureOtaku another acc....would you mind explaining me why there's no update yet? 😪😪::........–---------------------------------------------
Wow what a novel reminiscent of an older man who has been in a game that is not to be said that he's not she or he is a good person to get to the same sherpas bretty goo
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This is GOLD!just with few chapters dang it!WELL what i meant is plz update more coz we deserve more and dont make MC too OP for god sa*e and i lobe u author 😂
Great story, I was really surprised as how good it is. The description said system and we have system, it said sport we have sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good! read "Be happy with sports" a very cool novel about basketball and life
Great story! Keep up the good work. Always love a good sports novel but there just aren't enough of them out there, hoping you'll continue with this one.
started reading it a few days ago, the story is good, liked the novel but I have seen that there aren't any updates, is the novel been dropped?
Is this American football or what? Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond
Man, this novel is awesome. I always love novel with a system in it. But this novel really make me interested in it. Good job for the author!
Great story, great MC, great everything! Only the Updates are bad, and with bad I mean TWO WEEKS without one. I really hope the author starts updating again.
It's good but you have to update atleast 1 chapter everyday to interest the readers . Don't introduce props as it will not be his strength
What a great piece of art. This novel inspires me to write about football related novel. good luck n thanks. ,...............................
Great story, I was really surprised as how good it is. The description said system and we have system, it said sport we have sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good!
The language (English) is bad, but you can force yourself to read it. Then you get a little story which is not too bad. There are some books which you really can't read because of the bad English, this is not that bad. Nearly that bad, but not yet. If you have an alternative, read that. If you are very bored, try this.
Man, I really like this one. I have been looking for a good modern times system novel that could last a long time and still be interesting. The idea and layout are great now I just need to sit back and watch the authors execution.
Finally a novel about sports! Literally been waiting for one forever. This is also pretty interesting! I need my chapters faster!! Also it’s dope that they are building the character backgrounds nicely
a good novel about sport finally . big expectations and hopes to continue its progress more chapters please 😊😊😊😊😊😊 ⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽
Come for Aoyama-kun cover, stay for the great story. Man, this novel is awesome. I always love novel with a system in it. But this novel really make me interested in it. Good job for the author! Just read it, it's a great story!
5* because I like it :D But gonna read it later when it has moaahhh chapters. :) I still need some character to reach 140 xd Still not enough!
6th chapter in and I’m hooked. Love the setting of the story and would definitely love to see how this story further develops! Keep up the good work.
Love this novel definitely looking forward to more chapters and seeing how it will progress! Well here I'm trying to type 140 characters
A few spelling errors here and there but a great, warm and fuzzy story about a kid with good heart and great ambitions. Worth the read. . . . .
This is really good and interesting! Before I realized, I was already making a picture of the little kid scoring a goal , in my head. Great novel and I am hoping to read more and more!
Not a bad concept looking forward to this story. Something completely different from the fighting stories. I am looking forward to how the characters will bw developed and how the MC will relate to the rest of the world as he has lived this life before as opposed to be reincarnated in another world
It's a good plot. Football (*ahem* soccer *ahem*) plus system is a good combination. Writing quality is good as well, no errors that will disrupt the reading experience. But the story feels a bit rushed, like the author is trying to cram everything into one chapter. It is detailed yet very fast-paced. I don't get much breathing room with one action after another. The plot device is forced as well. No mother in the world would take the words of her six-year-old child seriously, especially if it involves his future. I understand the plot won't go forward if it's not done this way but I just have a hard time accepting that. World building is Earth so there's no flaw to point out. Character design is decent as well. Overall, this is a good novel, I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of developments the author would show later.
This story is highly amusing and pretty f*cking funny. The characters are consistent and the plot is fascinating. Vocabulary use is overall okay, but the writing style makes up for it as it is amausing in its own right. Additionally, I noticed a lot of competitor sport stories in the category tend to lack in the actual competitive sports department, but this story remains true and keeps the sports as the main plot device. Some people may say frequent updating is necessary, but the way I see it, I rather have good content every few weeks than a poorly developed chapter everyday. Keep up the great work!
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Good good good good good Good good good good good Good good good good good Good good good good good Good good good good good Good good good good good
I'm your fan PureOtaku another acc....would you mind explaining me why there's no update yet? 😪😪::........–---------------------------------------------
Wow what a novel reminiscent of an older man who has been in a game that is not to be said that he's not she or he is a good person to get to the same sherpas bretty goo
Spoiler enthüllen This is GOLD!just with few chapters dang it!WELL what i meant is plz update more coz we deserve more and dont make MC too OP for god sa*e and i lobe u author 😂
Great story, I was really surprised as how good it is. The description said system and we have system, it said sport we have sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good! read "Be happy with sports" a very cool novel about basketball and life
Great story! Keep up the good work. Always love a good sports novel but there just aren't enough of them out there, hoping you'll continue with this one.
started reading it a few days ago, the story is good, liked the novel but I have seen that there aren't any updates, is the novel been dropped?
Is this American football or what? Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond
Man, this novel is awesome. I always love novel with a system in it. But this novel really make me interested in it. Good job for the author!
Great story, great MC, great everything! Only the Updates are bad, and with bad I mean TWO WEEKS without one. I really hope the author starts updating again.
It's good but you have to update atleast 1 chapter everyday to interest the readers . Don't introduce props as it will not be his strength
What a great piece of art. This novel inspires me to write about football related novel. good luck n thanks. ,...............................
Great story, I was really surprised as how good it is. The description said system and we have system, it said sport we have sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good!
The language (English) is bad, but you can force yourself to read it. Then you get a little story which is not too bad. There are some books which you really can't read because of the bad English, this is not that bad. Nearly that bad, but not yet. If you have an alternative, read that. If you are very bored, try this.
Man, I really like this one. I have been looking for a good modern times system novel that could last a long time and still be interesting. The idea and layout are great now I just need to sit back and watch the authors execution.
Finally a novel about sports! Literally been waiting for one forever. This is also pretty interesting! I need my chapters faster!! Also it’s dope that they are building the character backgrounds nicely
a good novel about sport finally . big expectations and hopes to continue its progress more chapters please 😊😊😊😊😊😊 ⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽⚽
Come for Aoyama-kun cover, stay for the great story. Man, this novel is awesome. I always love novel with a system in it. But this novel really make me interested in it. Good job for the author! Just read it, it's a great story!
5* because I like it :D But gonna read it later when it has moaahhh chapters. :) I still need some character to reach 140 xd Still not enough!
6th chapter in and I’m hooked. Love the setting of the story and would definitely love to see how this story further develops! Keep up the good work.
Love this novel definitely looking forward to more chapters and seeing how it will progress! Well here I'm trying to type 140 characters
A few spelling errors here and there but a great, warm and fuzzy story about a kid with good heart and great ambitions. Worth the read. . . . .
This is really good and interesting! Before I realized, I was already making a picture of the little kid scoring a goal , in my head. Great novel and I am hoping to read more and more!
Not a bad concept looking forward to this story. Something completely different from the fighting stories. I am looking forward to how the characters will bw developed and how the MC will relate to the rest of the world as he has lived this life before as opposed to be reincarnated in another world