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A truly refreshing novel to read from the standard novels here on Qidian. The story is interesting and can easily captivate you to read for hours on end. Very intelligent writing from Moloxiv who is obviously a great talent of literature. I of course think of the writing quality as one of the best in all of Qidian, chapters are released at least once a day aswell as extra chapters so nothing to complain about in that category, the story development is fairly fast but it suits the novel very well and the amount of potential is sky high and from reading up to chapter 60 it's clear that there is already a well thought out road for the story to progress, character designs are perfect for me to build up a clear image of each character without overdoing it, the world has been well described and is very unique for world with cultivation and a very clever take on modern attitude implemented no mass hatred and clan extermination just for giving someone a sideways glance. Thank you Moloxiv for this wonderful novel you have created and I wish you success in the future you have my full support.
I've been looking for a good Dungeon Lord themed novel on this site, something similar to 'My House of Horrors'. I finally found one! Thanks for your hard work, dear author! I've never imagined the dungeon lord trope being crossed with the magic shop trope, so this is an incredibly awesome find for me. What's more is that the MC is not an asocial asshole, haha! What makes this different from the average cultivator-system novel? Several things, I imagine. To me, one of its outstanding features is the adoption of mini-arcs for the minor characters. As far as I know, minor character arcs are nearly exclusive to Japanese light novels. Western novels use the technique too but they don't give the same treatment. So, the character development of minor characters in this story is excellent! Even the dungeon monsters have backstories. The dear author may be an otaku, haha! There are a number of references to Japanese fandoms and comparatively fewer to the Chinese side of things. Dear author, Ranma may be the Best but even he will acknowledge the sheer Awesomeness that is Ip Man! Another cool thing: cultivators in NODS are not immortal gods. there are in fact legal and traditional precedents that allow cultivators and non-cultivators to live in open harmony, which includes the fact that everyone in the world is capable of cultivating. Some people just choose not too. I'd almost say this was a way to nerf the traditional cultivator model if the resurrection system had not been included. Yet another cool thing: the NODS shop uses the latest trends in communications like QR codes and NFC protocols. There are a lot of stories that talk about 'latest technology' and yet the most advanced tech they show is WiFi and phone apps. What the hell, right? The NODS shop also talks about store credits, in-store apps, personalized shop rewards and promos, streaming and pay-per-view services...insidious things. No one does consumerism like America! There were even a couple of chapters when the in-store rewards and promos discussion took over the story from the dungeons. Seriously. Maybe not so much description about the shop mechanics and more about the people. Despite shop-filler chapters, the story manages to a modicum of momentum past a hundred chapters, where it again picks up. Ahh, why is the level of tech in this shop not standard worldwide? If this level of functionality can be done with my phone, I will happily never leave my bed again. The initial premise of the story means there's something for every one: monster capturing, system leveling, some food critiquing, some romance, party and raid battling, cultivation, business management, dungeon creation, infinite world theory, etc. The shop logistics is influenced by other store- theme novels here but it manages to exude its own charm. The use of pocket dimensions to expand and include shop services is great! You know, this is the first MC I've read to be smacked down verbally for blindly following missions instead of actively participating in his own life by the shard of his mother's soul animated by the System into being an interface navigation assistant. A hundred and thirty chapters in and no revenge schemes and blood feuds (yet, anyway), which is kind of refreshing. The customers and the dungeon monsters are starting to shine even more. I think some minor characters have more fans than the MC at this point. Definitely a recommended read.
read this completely free until chapter 439 before I had to put down this wretched abomination of a novel. I kept trying to give it a chance but no. Chapter 439 was the final straw.
I haven't read this but I just wanna say its very bold of the author to go and say "read up to ch 300 before judging" like fr that's crazy. Anyway, seems like a fine story, has a panda so probably good.
An enjoyable read with believable personalities involved. I could wish it updated faster so some elements were left hanging for quite so long, but that's just because I'm looking forward to how they are resolved. I'm 1100 of chapters in, and it feel like parts are still laying foundations and world building.
It's a very nice 👍 m good u say u will be there for me and enjoy every night with money and enjoy your day and blessings to you always have returned my pleasure enjoy every moment and happy to see your life
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I've read up to chapter 80. Chapters are short so it may be why I feel that not much happened. Characters: In my view, they're average. There's no emphasis on a character in particular. Just random characters existing to serve the purpose of the story. Background: the background is interesting. It has much potential but too OP since basically no one else can match the MC's dungeon capabilities. There's no challenge to become the number 1 dungeon supplier if the MC has access to hundreds of alternate worlds and get rewards easily. Plot: that's the main reason why I stopped reading. There's no plot. Maybe in the future there'll be? But by chapters 80, it has only been a slice of life. A simulation of a what a dungeon supplier is like. A sandbox. People compared this novel to My House of Horrors. If the writer wants to improve, he would need to inspire himself of the plot and characters present in that story to improve his own.
This novel is terrible, some people hate the mother character but I don't since we have a beta male mc with no drive to do anything but take the easy way. All in all this novel is terrible with a beta male mc, forced plot, qidian-like conversations, and overall unlikable characters. I swear these novels are getting dumber each day. I'm 112 chapters in and I don't know how i got here back then but I'm disappointed that this has gone from a kingdom(shop) building to an adventure novel with a terrible mc. There's so much wrong with it that even someone like me who enjoys reading a few of those qidian novels with the "not simple" type of grammar, of course I can't stand a lot of them but this is just on a whole new level, they made the mc a beta with no drive, changed it from building a shop to going out to different worlds to train or go to different dungeons, the shop experience stops after 100 and then it's more focused on the mc getting stronger rather than the thing we came for(I don't know for the other chapters but I can't possibly continue reading this trash.)
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(13/8/2020) Author's opinion: At this point, this book had hundreds of chapters worth of content which I had planned for a long time. If you wish to undertake the book and appreciate the story, please read it up till chapter 300s to understand the sudden twist in chapter 100s. this is genuinely all you need to see about the story to know it's pure garbage.
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personally I prefer grizzly bears to panda bears but still it has bears so Instantly five stars so far it's good if a bit heavy on explaining things but it has emotion in it so it's not boring
I really like this book. I would like to finish reading it. It really makes me wonder though that all 1269 chapters are worth 150 dollars though. Has anyone finished this book before they realized how much money it cost?
I love playing this book every time I think it's starting to wind down and they come back with something more amazing than before. Here's hoping for another 1200 chapters[img=recommend]
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
an interesting topic, but there are many such years stupid and not interesting further read the beginning somehow it is not clear@€*÷;$€*#*;#&#£
Average at best. Even the first few chapters have grammatical errors. The start is confusing as well. puta puta putangina140charactersnayanwalaakongmadagdag
So is an Author that delete bad reviews for his ego and convenience ah? take this then, and delete if you want, i can make it again and again.
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This sci fi fantasy shop building novel offer unique experience for it combination of many cool cultivation style which fit the theme of each country and dungeon elements. The world has deep background story and all characters are shown to be smart and calculative, they have their own personality rather than being brainless and arrogant. That make it so that the drama in this story make sense and not forced showing characters ability to learn and adapt. The fight in this story is also very exciting and keep the reader interested as it feature various method such as fighting from land, naval and aerial warfare with various tech and equipment. The exploration of another world and many POV from other characters are great too. Although the early part of the novel maybe boring, the later part are super epic and exciting. The only problem of this novel is that the progression of the story is super slow even though there are many chapters which is common in these kind of shop building novel, for example the restaurant one. Combines that with non daily update speed make it so that there are a lot of things to be waiting for yet this part of the story hasn't even ended yet. Cliffhangerrrr Well, It show that the author has a lot planned for the story development in order to keep the readers excited for the climatic parts but one have to wait for it. Total rating 4.4/5.0 🌟 and 5 Exp getto daze!
Very good book, characters are very good and plot is original unlike most books these days[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
As a prior note i'm note at the forefront of the novel as it currently is but are at the halfway point but a few things that have start to annoy me as the book is going on. The first thing is that i feel the need to point out i like the book despite what downsides that have stood out to me, and the only reason i've decided to write a review now is get the downsides out while i still find it relevent. The first downside is the inconsistency in the book the book goes from having the shop start out each dungeon being at if i remeber correctly 245 yaun in a dungeon with the price dropping to then 40 which just seems like a massive jump in price and from what i know of chinese currency 10 yaun is somewhere around £1 meaning it goes from £25 to £2.50 or their by equilevent and while this is a book and in this version of earth the exchange rate may or may not be the same it needs to be said that from how the book shows the dungeons their meant to be along the lines of an escape room in a modern sense, on which £25 per dungeon while expensive is still an expected price. But with a drop to £2.50 equilvent is makes this not only rather cheap and a bit out of place even with with others methods that the book implemented to make the price make more sense it still even till this day seems out of place to me. The second problem i have with the book is the blatent ingornace and what amounts to disgrimanation towards other countries in the book, in the modern chapters it makes the the price in yuan the same as in every other currency which considering the context it shows is soley targeted at europe and ammerica with the example being it making a german group pay €5 for a dungeon that in cost 5 yuan to which the reasoning given that the german group would only being paying €0.63 despite the higher costs in germany, ignoring the fact that the amount the chinese are paying has the same purchasing power. For anyone who can't get the problem this policy would meant that someone paying in iraian rial which has the lowest purchasing power of any currency would be paying an amount which most currency's do not even support. I don't know why the author put this in the book it seems extremly out of place and stupid to have in the book.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I have read till 110 chap till now story becomes extremely annoying at 105-110 chapters starting was actually good, it had comedy and good dungeon building but later they unnecessary made the plot dark and brought a very cliché part lemme explain the cliché plot... the mc (Jin) was told to kill a person by the system, when he was abt to kill, his friend told him it is a bad thing to do... and u will regret it... and so on, then he become boodha mood and starts bit*going abt killing is bad and then even the person(Yun) who asked him to kill, will be like "this was a test to see if u really follow everything the system says or u will decide to own life and blah blah blah.." I got annoyed by that cliché plot so I dropped it was good till 100 chap tho
I was curious when I first started read this novellas I love a good starting story that pulls you in but I did not expect to be so expectant for the next chapter. I truly enjoy reading this book, I only wish that more chapters were available so that I could continue reading. Keep up the good work!!
This story is simply amazing, I can truly see the world or should I say worlds you are creating. I look forward to seeing more!! Please keep up the good work.
It's amazing and I couldn't ask for anything more. The story help pass the time and can easily keep your attention, it's great for sitting on the couch, chilling on your bed or even if you are on a long car ride.
After reading over 500 chapters it is starting to lose my interest already. The story itself isnt bad but It just doesnt have that ability to make myself to want to read more that is why cliffhangers exist. Although overusing it is also bad, using too less of it also feels like u can stop anywhere. Maybe you need a proofreader or something that can help you? Idk just my opinion Tldr More major arcs and less or shorter minor arcs. Your buildup takes like 100 chaps of small arcs with mc out of the story but the finale is only 10 chaps which the mc also not doing much. The best part of the story imho is actually the parts where mc gets more powerful altho this is a shop type of story but at the same time it is a cultivation novel
This is a great combo of Action and Kingdom (well, shop) Building, with a lighter theme. Well, so far. The MC doesn't have any real antags yet, except his bickering with Yun and the System. Their back and forths are great. I feel this novel's main draw is not placed solely on Jin's back, he's got a good selection of Supporting Characters, some of which are clichés (unavoidable as there has been almost every type of character) that move the story. And you get to see their views and a small glimpse of what makes them want to visit his store. Even if it's for band name clothes. This, so far, is a novel with great supporting cast that manages not to overshadow our panda, a decent relationship between Jin and his system, and light comedy. And we are definitely not left wanting on those action scenes. Overall, a favorite novel, amongst translated and originals.
A truly refreshing novel to read from the standard novels here on Qidian. The story is interesting and can easily captivate you to read for hours on end. Very intelligent writing from Moloxiv who is obviously a great talent of literature. I of course think of the writing quality as one of the best in all of Qidian, chapters are released at least once a day aswell as extra chapters so nothing to complain about in that category, the story development is fairly fast but it suits the novel very well and the amount of potential is sky high and from reading up to chapter 60 it's clear that there is already a well thought out road for the story to progress, character designs are perfect for me to build up a clear image of each character without overdoing it, the world has been well described and is very unique for world with cultivation and a very clever take on modern attitude implemented no mass hatred and clan extermination just for giving someone a sideways glance. Thank you Moloxiv for this wonderful novel you have created and I wish you success in the future you have my full support.
I've been looking for a good Dungeon Lord themed novel on this site, something similar to 'My House of Horrors'. I finally found one! Thanks for your hard work, dear author! I've never imagined the dungeon lord trope being crossed with the magic shop trope, so this is an incredibly awesome find for me. What's more is that the MC is not an asocial asshole, haha! What makes this different from the average cultivator-system novel? Several things, I imagine. To me, one of its outstanding features is the adoption of mini-arcs for the minor characters. As far as I know, minor character arcs are nearly exclusive to Japanese light novels. Western novels use the technique too but they don't give the same treatment. So, the character development of minor characters in this story is excellent! Even the dungeon monsters have backstories. The dear author may be an otaku, haha! There are a number of references to Japanese fandoms and comparatively fewer to the Chinese side of things. Dear author, Ranma may be the Best but even he will acknowledge the sheer Awesomeness that is Ip Man! Another cool thing: cultivators in NODS are not immortal gods. there are in fact legal and traditional precedents that allow cultivators and non-cultivators to live in open harmony, which includes the fact that everyone in the world is capable of cultivating. Some people just choose not too. I'd almost say this was a way to nerf the traditional cultivator model if the resurrection system had not been included. Yet another cool thing: the NODS shop uses the latest trends in communications like QR codes and NFC protocols. There are a lot of stories that talk about 'latest technology' and yet the most advanced tech they show is WiFi and phone apps. What the hell, right? The NODS shop also talks about store credits, in-store apps, personalized shop rewards and promos, streaming and pay-per-view services...insidious things. No one does consumerism like America! There were even a couple of chapters when the in-store rewards and promos discussion took over the story from the dungeons. Seriously. Maybe not so much description about the shop mechanics and more about the people. Despite shop-filler chapters, the story manages to a modicum of momentum past a hundred chapters, where it again picks up. Ahh, why is the level of tech in this shop not standard worldwide? If this level of functionality can be done with my phone, I will happily never leave my bed again. The initial premise of the story means there's something for every one: monster capturing, system leveling, some food critiquing, some romance, party and raid battling, cultivation, business management, dungeon creation, infinite world theory, etc. The shop logistics is influenced by other store- theme novels here but it manages to exude its own charm. The use of pocket dimensions to expand and include shop services is great! You know, this is the first MC I've read to be smacked down verbally for blindly following missions instead of actively participating in his own life by the shard of his mother's soul animated by the System into being an interface navigation assistant. A hundred and thirty chapters in and no revenge schemes and blood feuds (yet, anyway), which is kind of refreshing. The customers and the dungeon monsters are starting to shine even more. I think some minor characters have more fans than the MC at this point. Definitely a recommended read.
read this completely free until chapter 439 before I had to put down this wretched abomination of a novel. I kept trying to give it a chance but no. Chapter 439 was the final straw.
I haven't read this but I just wanna say its very bold of the author to go and say "read up to ch 300 before judging" like fr that's crazy. Anyway, seems like a fine story, has a panda so probably good.
An enjoyable read with believable personalities involved. I could wish it updated faster so some elements were left hanging for quite so long, but that's just because I'm looking forward to how they are resolved. I'm 1100 of chapters in, and it feel like parts are still laying foundations and world building.
It's a very nice 👍 m good u say u will be there for me and enjoy every night with money and enjoy your day and blessings to you always have returned my pleasure enjoy every moment and happy to see your life
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I've read up to chapter 80. Chapters are short so it may be why I feel that not much happened. Characters: In my view, they're average. There's no emphasis on a character in particular. Just random characters existing to serve the purpose of the story. Background: the background is interesting. It has much potential but too OP since basically no one else can match the MC's dungeon capabilities. There's no challenge to become the number 1 dungeon supplier if the MC has access to hundreds of alternate worlds and get rewards easily. Plot: that's the main reason why I stopped reading. There's no plot. Maybe in the future there'll be? But by chapters 80, it has only been a slice of life. A simulation of a what a dungeon supplier is like. A sandbox. People compared this novel to My House of Horrors. If the writer wants to improve, he would need to inspire himself of the plot and characters present in that story to improve his own.
This novel is terrible, some people hate the mother character but I don't since we have a beta male mc with no drive to do anything but take the easy way. All in all this novel is terrible with a beta male mc, forced plot, qidian-like conversations, and overall unlikable characters. I swear these novels are getting dumber each day. I'm 112 chapters in and I don't know how i got here back then but I'm disappointed that this has gone from a kingdom(shop) building to an adventure novel with a terrible mc. There's so much wrong with it that even someone like me who enjoys reading a few of those qidian novels with the "not simple" type of grammar, of course I can't stand a lot of them but this is just on a whole new level, they made the mc a beta with no drive, changed it from building a shop to going out to different worlds to train or go to different dungeons, the shop experience stops after 100 and then it's more focused on the mc getting stronger rather than the thing we came for(I don't know for the other chapters but I can't possibly continue reading this trash.)
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(13/8/2020) Author's opinion: At this point, this book had hundreds of chapters worth of content which I had planned for a long time. If you wish to undertake the book and appreciate the story, please read it up till chapter 300s to understand the sudden twist in chapter 100s. this is genuinely all you need to see about the story to know it's pure garbage.
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personally I prefer grizzly bears to panda bears but still it has bears so Instantly five stars so far it's good if a bit heavy on explaining things but it has emotion in it so it's not boring
I really like this book. I would like to finish reading it. It really makes me wonder though that all 1269 chapters are worth 150 dollars though. Has anyone finished this book before they realized how much money it cost?
I love playing this book every time I think it's starting to wind down and they come back with something more amazing than before. Here's hoping for another 1200 chapters[img=recommend]
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
an interesting topic, but there are many such years stupid and not interesting further read the beginning somehow it is not clear@€*÷;$€*#*;#&#£
Average at best. Even the first few chapters have grammatical errors. The start is confusing as well. puta puta putangina140charactersnayanwalaakongmadagdag
So is an Author that delete bad reviews for his ego and convenience ah? take this then, and delete if you want, i can make it again and again.
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This sci fi fantasy shop building novel offer unique experience for it combination of many cool cultivation style which fit the theme of each country and dungeon elements. The world has deep background story and all characters are shown to be smart and calculative, they have their own personality rather than being brainless and arrogant. That make it so that the drama in this story make sense and not forced showing characters ability to learn and adapt. The fight in this story is also very exciting and keep the reader interested as it feature various method such as fighting from land, naval and aerial warfare with various tech and equipment. The exploration of another world and many POV from other characters are great too. Although the early part of the novel maybe boring, the later part are super epic and exciting. The only problem of this novel is that the progression of the story is super slow even though there are many chapters which is common in these kind of shop building novel, for example the restaurant one. Combines that with non daily update speed make it so that there are a lot of things to be waiting for yet this part of the story hasn't even ended yet. Cliffhangerrrr Well, It show that the author has a lot planned for the story development in order to keep the readers excited for the climatic parts but one have to wait for it. Total rating 4.4/5.0 🌟 and 5 Exp getto daze!
Very good book, characters are very good and plot is original unlike most books these days[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
As a prior note i'm note at the forefront of the novel as it currently is but are at the halfway point but a few things that have start to annoy me as the book is going on. The first thing is that i feel the need to point out i like the book despite what downsides that have stood out to me, and the only reason i've decided to write a review now is get the downsides out while i still find it relevent. The first downside is the inconsistency in the book the book goes from having the shop start out each dungeon being at if i remeber correctly 245 yaun in a dungeon with the price dropping to then 40 which just seems like a massive jump in price and from what i know of chinese currency 10 yaun is somewhere around £1 meaning it goes from £25 to £2.50 or their by equilevent and while this is a book and in this version of earth the exchange rate may or may not be the same it needs to be said that from how the book shows the dungeons their meant to be along the lines of an escape room in a modern sense, on which £25 per dungeon while expensive is still an expected price. But with a drop to £2.50 equilvent is makes this not only rather cheap and a bit out of place even with with others methods that the book implemented to make the price make more sense it still even till this day seems out of place to me. The second problem i have with the book is the blatent ingornace and what amounts to disgrimanation towards other countries in the book, in the modern chapters it makes the the price in yuan the same as in every other currency which considering the context it shows is soley targeted at europe and ammerica with the example being it making a german group pay €5 for a dungeon that in cost 5 yuan to which the reasoning given that the german group would only being paying €0.63 despite the higher costs in germany, ignoring the fact that the amount the chinese are paying has the same purchasing power. For anyone who can't get the problem this policy would meant that someone paying in iraian rial which has the lowest purchasing power of any currency would be paying an amount which most currency's do not even support. I don't know why the author put this in the book it seems extremly out of place and stupid to have in the book.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I have read till 110 chap till now story becomes extremely annoying at 105-110 chapters starting was actually good, it had comedy and good dungeon building but later they unnecessary made the plot dark and brought a very cliché part lemme explain the cliché plot... the mc (Jin) was told to kill a person by the system, when he was abt to kill, his friend told him it is a bad thing to do... and u will regret it... and so on, then he become boodha mood and starts bit*going abt killing is bad and then even the person(Yun) who asked him to kill, will be like "this was a test to see if u really follow everything the system says or u will decide to own life and blah blah blah.." I got annoyed by that cliché plot so I dropped it was good till 100 chap tho
I was curious when I first started read this novellas I love a good starting story that pulls you in but I did not expect to be so expectant for the next chapter. I truly enjoy reading this book, I only wish that more chapters were available so that I could continue reading. Keep up the good work!!
This story is simply amazing, I can truly see the world or should I say worlds you are creating. I look forward to seeing more!! Please keep up the good work.
It's amazing and I couldn't ask for anything more. The story help pass the time and can easily keep your attention, it's great for sitting on the couch, chilling on your bed or even if you are on a long car ride.
After reading over 500 chapters it is starting to lose my interest already. The story itself isnt bad but It just doesnt have that ability to make myself to want to read more that is why cliffhangers exist. Although overusing it is also bad, using too less of it also feels like u can stop anywhere. Maybe you need a proofreader or something that can help you? Idk just my opinion Tldr More major arcs and less or shorter minor arcs. Your buildup takes like 100 chaps of small arcs with mc out of the story but the finale is only 10 chaps which the mc also not doing much. The best part of the story imho is actually the parts where mc gets more powerful altho this is a shop type of story but at the same time it is a cultivation novel
This is a great combo of Action and Kingdom (well, shop) Building, with a lighter theme. Well, so far. The MC doesn't have any real antags yet, except his bickering with Yun and the System. Their back and forths are great. I feel this novel's main draw is not placed solely on Jin's back, he's got a good selection of Supporting Characters, some of which are clichés (unavoidable as there has been almost every type of character) that move the story. And you get to see their views and a small glimpse of what makes them want to visit his store. Even if it's for band name clothes. This, so far, is a novel with great supporting cast that manages not to overshadow our panda, a decent relationship between Jin and his system, and light comedy. And we are definitely not left wanting on those action scenes. Overall, a favorite novel, amongst translated and originals.