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Great book to bad doesn't update. Author wrote a good story.**********************************************************************************
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In the beginning I Loved the Story but then more and more Deus ex machina happened... Pleased Slow down the pacing a Bit. Aside Front that the Tao Beast Plot ist a bit top much
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Itโs the same old levelling up system. It has quite a lot of grammatical errors which makes it quite frustrating to read. I have only read a few chapters, so it might have improved in the later chapters. Donโt let my review put you off reading it.
This transmigration is a original story. The main character went from trash to an OP Mc. I like the story line that he goes through with the family ; because a lot of reincarnation and transmigration stories the Mc kind of put to much trust in family. Eventually the Mc ends up being betrayed . Another aspect I like are the characters names are original for story characters.
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Novel has acceptable plot but Grammer mistakes so bad that it feels like machine translated some times. Also there is annoying female character and stupid plotholes.
there are some grammar mistakes here and there but overall it s a good story to pass time and laugh while reading. good job ๐ there are some grammar mistakes here and there but overall it s a good story to pass time and laugh while reading. good job ๐
was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases?
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I hope he wins the war and ends up controlling everything. But I'm worried about that devouring domain demon. What if he ends up becoming a puppet after all and gets controlled by that thing? What about his supposed friends and allies will they still support him? I mean its human nature to fear and hate the unknown ur things you dont understand. I hope he will be alright.
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This is very pleasing and interesting to read, though a little hard to comprehend the writing style of the story. The novel is good, nothing more, nothing else.
I'll say thanks for the novel as a whole although you are going to be finishing it soon but I'm also looking forward to your continued work with ZWJ as the MC again. I'm thinking about your future ZWJ base books like a ZWJ series. Keep it up.
Its not bad, good enough for you to kill time. Not great, decent enough to read. The concept is pretty much taken from another novel which i dont hate but if the story goes differently maybe I'll like it more, its just preference i guess
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Writing quality: The quality is ok, though some descriptions can "twisty" at times and end up not saying anything and just leaving the reader scratching their head. Story development: It feels really random and can abruptly change with no real reason. It feels like the author panics when the story isn't moving or forgets where they where going and makes up something new to make the story move along. The cultivating aspect of the is bad the speed of its stops and starts when the mc is getting to close to the line for something new. Character Design: Downward slope. There is very little development of the side characters and they tend to phase out of existence when they aren't needed for the plot. And now the mc... he was clever at the beginning and had a firm grip of his abilities. But his intelligence to a hard hit and started falling into a pit in the second arc. Forgetting his upgrade ability whenever it looks like a good idea to use it (example: the tyrant material body technique)... World Background: Standard but well executed most of the time. In summary, it felt like the novel had real promise for the first arc and looked to be a really good novel but panic and forgetfulness destroyed the foundation. Leaving a brain dead mc with problems that keep cropping up in his charter when convenient for the story that went present before.
Author needs a new translator or editor or both. Ive tried reafing this story multiple times but that horrible writing makes me cringe inside.
interesting story but the writing and gramma is a little lacking, so if you dont mind the occasional broken sentence you will enjoy this novel!
Writing quality: Acceptable, but could be better. Story development: really random... Feels like author forgets the story and makes up something new to make the story move along. Forgetting part of the story in the progress. Worst of all, I feel the author messed up the cultivating aspect of the story really badly, be it the speed of cultivating or the system behind it (tend to change from time to time)... Character Design: bad, i don't really see much "development" of the characters and they tend to disapear from time to time when not needed. The main character is stupid... and forgets his upgrade ability whenever it looks like a good idea to use it (example: the tyrant material body technique)... World Background: not anything special, not good, not bad. All in all, it is not a good novel in my eyes, but it has potential and i had a good time reading it. The author, in my eyes, have no need to drag out the chapters like he does -.- waaaaay too much useless information that i really did not care about...
This book is amazing, keep going!ย ย Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Great book to bad doesn't update. Author wrote a good story.**********************************************************************************
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In the beginning I Loved the Story but then more and more Deus ex machina happened... Pleased Slow down the pacing a Bit. Aside Front that the Tao Beast Plot ist a bit top much
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Itโs the same old levelling up system. It has quite a lot of grammatical errors which makes it quite frustrating to read. I have only read a few chapters, so it might have improved in the later chapters. Donโt let my review put you off reading it.
This transmigration is a original story. The main character went from trash to an OP Mc. I like the story line that he goes through with the family ; because a lot of reincarnation and transmigration stories the Mc kind of put to much trust in family. Eventually the Mc ends up being betrayed . Another aspect I like are the characters names are original for story characters.
Spoiler enthรผllen Novel has acceptable plot but Grammer mistakes so bad that it feels like machine translated some times. Also there is annoying female character and stupid plotholes.
there are some grammar mistakes here and there but overall it s a good story to pass time and laugh while reading. good job ๐ there are some grammar mistakes here and there but overall it s a good story to pass time and laugh while reading. good job ๐
was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases? was this novel dropped or just slow releases?
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I hope he wins the war and ends up controlling everything. But I'm worried about that devouring domain demon. What if he ends up becoming a puppet after all and gets controlled by that thing? What about his supposed friends and allies will they still support him? I mean its human nature to fear and hate the unknown ur things you dont understand. I hope he will be alright.
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This is very pleasing and interesting to read, though a little hard to comprehend the writing style of the story. The novel is good, nothing more, nothing else.
I'll say thanks for the novel as a whole although you are going to be finishing it soon but I'm also looking forward to your continued work with ZWJ as the MC again. I'm thinking about your future ZWJ base books like a ZWJ series. Keep it up.
Its not bad, good enough for you to kill time. Not great, decent enough to read. The concept is pretty much taken from another novel which i dont hate but if the story goes differently maybe I'll like it more, its just preference i guess
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Writing quality: The quality is ok, though some descriptions can "twisty" at times and end up not saying anything and just leaving the reader scratching their head. Story development: It feels really random and can abruptly change with no real reason. It feels like the author panics when the story isn't moving or forgets where they where going and makes up something new to make the story move along. The cultivating aspect of the is bad the speed of its stops and starts when the mc is getting to close to the line for something new. Character Design: Downward slope. There is very little development of the side characters and they tend to phase out of existence when they aren't needed for the plot. And now the mc... he was clever at the beginning and had a firm grip of his abilities. But his intelligence to a hard hit and started falling into a pit in the second arc. Forgetting his upgrade ability whenever it looks like a good idea to use it (example: the tyrant material body technique)... World Background: Standard but well executed most of the time. In summary, it felt like the novel had real promise for the first arc and looked to be a really good novel but panic and forgetfulness destroyed the foundation. Leaving a brain dead mc with problems that keep cropping up in his charter when convenient for the story that went present before.
Author needs a new translator or editor or both. Ive tried reafing this story multiple times but that horrible writing makes me cringe inside.
interesting story but the writing and gramma is a little lacking, so if you dont mind the occasional broken sentence you will enjoy this novel!
Writing quality: Acceptable, but could be better. Story development: really random... Feels like author forgets the story and makes up something new to make the story move along. Forgetting part of the story in the progress. Worst of all, I feel the author messed up the cultivating aspect of the story really badly, be it the speed of cultivating or the system behind it (tend to change from time to time)... Character Design: bad, i don't really see much "development" of the characters and they tend to disapear from time to time when not needed. The main character is stupid... and forgets his upgrade ability whenever it looks like a good idea to use it (example: the tyrant material body technique)... World Background: not anything special, not good, not bad. All in all, it is not a good novel in my eyes, but it has potential and i had a good time reading it. The author, in my eyes, have no need to drag out the chapters like he does -.- waaaaay too much useless information that i really did not care about...
This book is amazing, keep going!ย ย Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?