Ultimate Legend Of Dragon Ball

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nadijr

love how you're building it up, not just going straight for the reincarnation, hope you can make the character fuse the martial arts of his wold and with the dragon ball universe

LV 13

icecranium

Given the way you are slowly developing the MC prior to reincarnating him Rather than jumping straight in and expecting everyone to buy that somebody from earth had these sort of abilities I expect this story to develop nicely in the long term. That is, if you get into the long term. One problem with slow pacing like this is the writers of the stories have a tendency to become bored of writing their own work. That’s why you see so many horribly paced shot shows where the main character is given 12 or more super amazing abilities within the first chapter without and work whatsoever. Authors of these stories tend to be impatient and try to realize their ultimate vision for the character way too fast. Based on how you’ve done this so far I don’t expect you to do any of that but try not to quit half way. That’s way too common on a site like this. Hell, even I’m guilty of it.

LV 12

NineTailsOfTheVoid

11 chapters to reincarnate, 27 chapters of interactions between Mc and Jewel If you come looking for action, I'm sorry, but it's not your fanfic, almost all are useless conversations that take away your patience.

LV 14

Primordiaux

Finally waiting for someone to reincarnet to broly instead of just another saiyan. Level up hitman is good but this is better. Hopefully you make this first priority.

LV 5

boob

Boring you should drop that. A good start but for using the legendary supa saiyan for write another harem ****. As a dbz and broly fan I am truly disappointed, don't forget that dragon ball is about fight and fight will continue to surpass limits and re-define the boundaries of what's possible. Write a real thing or drop that ****

LV 15

Adramelech

I only put story development at 3 stars cause it’s not going anywhere cause there’s no new chapters. Been a month or more since the last update which is why the 1 Star is there for update stability. Yo author where’d you go? Did you just stop or something? Or did you go to a different novel app or website? If you’re dead or ill the sorry to whoever is able to read this who personally knows the author. But with the whole disappearance act with no heads up, not cool. Don’t know what to think now. I mean such a cool story with soo much potential just wasted. It pains me soo much. 😭 it hurts soo much 😭 😭 😭 even more so cause even though I know it’s most likely never going to update, I’m still hoping that it does.

LV 14

Primordiaux

How long are updates? I keep giving stones every time I get. I think more people should support this story. Would be one of the best if finished.

LV 5

S_Lord

I hope you can keep it up as it is only fan-fiction which to me felt can easily surpass 1000 chapters like in "The strongest legend of dragon ball". It would be good if you could make the DB characters interaction and Dragon ball wishes more interesting. Can you please increase the chapter release frequency upto 5-6 chapters per week? Because honestly in my opinion this novel can easily get 5 stars if not for such low frequency of chapter release.

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MemePathGuImmortal

Keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up

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Lucifero

Good Story keep it up 👍.

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Native

I only have one major issue with this story its too good you make me want more i hate having to wait for chapters lol. keep up the good work. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 13

funmaxwell

Hm I like this novel but their are some things that bother me about it though. 1. The Mc cultivation method is basically aphrodisiac to opposite ***. I think instead of the cultivation method being aphrodisiac to opposite *** could he have not been in just incredibly good shape and as side effect it made him more desirable to opposite ***. 2. The story describes the mc *** life. Which i really didn't want to know. 3. The mc starts a harm with not 2 not 3 but 12 women and some how he ends up pounding them every night for year's and they never get pregnant buy like some type accident up until last two chapters or so. I guess the reason i don't like the harm is because i don't think it love if it's between so many other women and like him. Also these women only like him because of the cultivation method he is using. The things that i liked about this novel was. 1. Grandmaster Long Fandom. 2.the Author seems to be trying to not rush the story like so many others. Seeing as it seems that first 11 chapter's is just the prolog. I hope see more chapters soon.

LV 5

Javlin2

Really enjoyed this story so far, has lots of potential and started off well hopefully the author will continue it sooner rather than later

LV 5

avi

bro where is the update , we like your story , keep it coming pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee , dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 5

CrimsonDragonKing

Sadly, as of July 24, this story was already dropped. If people want to read a cohesive completed story turn back now. As I'm writing this, the story is 24 chaps in.

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Supreme_Leader

More chapters please 😭

LV 12

Supreme_Leader

Both your novels are great, I like both of them but like the ultimate legend of dragon ball a bit better because I always wanted to read the manga from brolly's pov. Although I loved Dragon ball series. I have outgrown the shounen genre and with reading all these novels about Cultivation and Immortals slaughtering people and scheming etc Goku became too dumb for my taste, So I like this novel since I get to read Dragon ball with an intelligent MC and I hope smaller fight scenes 😅 Hope you keep the chapters coming and don't drop the novel. I wish this one had more chapter like level up hitman

LV 15

Adramelech

Everything about this story (except for the updates) is great. Nice background on the mc and his first world life and explained how he can do what he able to do. Had a harem before he died and gave an explanation to that that would make it seem like he wouldn’t need to have one later in the story but that’s up to the author’s discretion. It’s been up for like 2 weeks I think and the author still hasn’t got an update schedule down for it yet so expect some sporadic updates that range from 2-4-7 days apart. Also if you’re a major fan of Broly from DBZ and you wanted them to do more with him, just read this story once it has enough chapters(100 at least pls) Now the part where the story is at now isn’t too far into the broly arc. He just got born so no major events yet. But read it if this review has given you a good enough impression on the story.

LV 5

Zeno

In my opinion this story is much better than Level-up Hitman, but it's your story, so you should focus on what you enjoy writing more . He manages to control all his power and not lose consciousness thanks to the desire he made to the dragon god, and would he look like that? without being a clear destroyer god? and with its tail able to split planets in half with a ****** burst https://pre00.deviantart.net/e99c/th/pre/i/2016/305/8/5/broly_god_ssj_rose_by_diegoku92-dan0nvj.jpg thx

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Kaiser0000

Great story ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................