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The story seems very interesting and it has alot of potential.If the story hasn't really started so am pretty hyped too see how he is going to write it.
**Brutal Mode** Engaged Starting a story is easy! Just drown the reader in so much info dumping and exposition that they can’t possibly escape! Once the reader is stuck, then trap them in a series of MC weak to strong building and ass-kicking of arrogant masters. They will never escape then and will be forced to read the rest of your story. . Originality - 0/5 - It's a cultivation novel. No, wait! It's a System novel. Why not throw in naruto fanfic while you're at it? Oh LOL he was watching Naruto! Close enough. Wait Wait. Let me guess his cultivation system will be based on Dragon Ball? That will be the trifecta of Webnovel fads. Please ascend. Story - 2/5 There is a story. There is. This is not a paper on a system cultivator, is it? Am I reading one endless monologue? I am sure this story would be great if I could get past this wall of text hiding Mount Tai. Characters - 1/5 The characters speak to me. Literally. The MC rarely speak to someone else, unless its a cardboard cut out cliche. Parent, Grandpa. Quite literally named Grandpa trope so the author doesn't have to show anything about him to the reader #shortcut #efficientwriting. The reader will know from all the other copy and paste novels who use Grandpa. Teacher - angry and hates MC. Why? Who cares we need people in authority to be irredeemable illogical antagonists so the hero MC can make them look like fools in a few chapters. Flow - 5/5 The flow is excellent. I enjoyed reading this exposition. The Authors note explaining the yet to be introduced system was perfect. Why let the story show the system. Just tell the reader and yeah Authors note works perfectly. Btw When does the story start?
i dont know what to say but i know this when i reading this chapters i cant understand what year is it or whats going on when i am reading the chapter. I thinking “oh maybe they will fight now” but when i go onether chapter no fight and chapter starting like this he is elewen now?..? i cant understand did you deleted some chapter ?
Comments say it good novel so that is why for the rating. I gotta wait till there is more chapter before I get starts on this novel. So... Keep up the good work Author.
Is it a 2 chapter daily update or 2 chapter weekly update ?🤔 Is it 14 chapters weekly update or 14 chapters monthly update ? 🤔 Please dear author , be a little serious with what you promise to do 😯
When did you start writing this novel ? How many chapters are you willing to post weekly (an estimation) ? Are you going to drop this novel in the future like some other annoyed authors ?
Silent sport by void group.... Headed by void_king.. Btw. A good story after a long time from...my dear country india ...jai hind jai Bharat..
I quite enjoyed the previous one, and the only problem with it was the world background, as for the current one, I just hope that we still have the same waifu, and the same backstory on cultivation itself, with him taking the same path in not foregoing being human
Storyline is ok but the world/carecter/time/sideline need to explain properly and the chapter is stuck at 40 for too long period of time and now it restart the story from starting point....
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I wanted to know if his girlfriend is going to be his teacher like last time you wrote the book? BTW i totally support this idea and i hope that his girlfriend is his teacher and the same teacher from first time you wrote the book because if he doesn't then ill think hes cheating on the girl from from the first write and it'll get stuck in my head.(bit selfish of me)
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It’s not that interesting at the moment and a little confusing whit the way he refers to people but I wil come back and try to read later. Keep up the good work. I’m going to put 3 stars in all because I haven’t read enough and I have to put stars so don’t think I’m raising it good or bad.
Why did the chapters disappear? I can only read 2 & last i checked it was more than 10. Novels that has a different nationality of MC aside from usual Chinese are always 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 as it would give it a sense of originality & not a slip shod, run off the mill, mass produced one
hi author here. Sorry for such a mess up. I assure you this story is even better than last time. please do support me by reading this again as i commit myself to atleast 1 chap update
Where did the chapters go? Are you rewriting? I enjoyed the novel so far anyway. Now i’m just waffling on until 140 characters. Still not there yet.
Well its not that bad like people are saying about the grammatical errors i hope he will do something and ya ita much better than mtl translation release chapter a bit fast
An amazing novel, I'm not giving 5 stars basically because of the world building, but I'm loving this novel, it's so refreshing and unique. I need more chapters, like, right now.
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Boy imma whoops your ass if I don't get some updates soon. Like holy ****, your exams are over by now.... gimme my chapters lol. This last bit is to get over 140 characters.
Very 🐌 🐌 updates not to mention sometimes plot don't connect and continue . Overall very promising but lacks effort on part of author. Would like to see more of background development to make story richer otherwise it is just like Dragon blood warrior only focussing on sex Will not get story far one needs balance. Look at mars work and you will know.
Very 🐌 🐌 updates not to mention sometimes plot don't connect and continue . Overall very promising but lacks effort on part of author. Would like to see more of background development to make story richer otherwise it is just like Dragon blood warrior only focussing on sex Will not get story far one needs balance. Look at mars work and you will know.
This story is a banana!! A Banana!!!!A BANANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But really, I like it so far, only complaint is the that I read it to fast and that is a me problem not a story problem.
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Let's see how that ***** shweta brags now huh. Absolutely loving this novel, hopefully you can go all out in production after your exams thanks for the great story
This is an amazing story, i will be waiting for every update, and I really hope that I won’t wait for long. The story covers different kinds of characters with different angles.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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The story seems very interesting and it has alot of potential.If the story hasn't really started so am pretty hyped too see how he is going to write it.
**Brutal Mode** Engaged Starting a story is easy! Just drown the reader in so much info dumping and exposition that they can’t possibly escape! Once the reader is stuck, then trap them in a series of MC weak to strong building and ass-kicking of arrogant masters. They will never escape then and will be forced to read the rest of your story. . Originality - 0/5 - It's a cultivation novel. No, wait! It's a System novel. Why not throw in naruto fanfic while you're at it? Oh LOL he was watching Naruto! Close enough. Wait Wait. Let me guess his cultivation system will be based on Dragon Ball? That will be the trifecta of Webnovel fads. Please ascend. Story - 2/5 There is a story. There is. This is not a paper on a system cultivator, is it? Am I reading one endless monologue? I am sure this story would be great if I could get past this wall of text hiding Mount Tai. Characters - 1/5 The characters speak to me. Literally. The MC rarely speak to someone else, unless its a cardboard cut out cliche. Parent, Grandpa. Quite literally named Grandpa trope so the author doesn't have to show anything about him to the reader #shortcut #efficientwriting. The reader will know from all the other copy and paste novels who use Grandpa. Teacher - angry and hates MC. Why? Who cares we need people in authority to be irredeemable illogical antagonists so the hero MC can make them look like fools in a few chapters. Flow - 5/5 The flow is excellent. I enjoyed reading this exposition. The Authors note explaining the yet to be introduced system was perfect. Why let the story show the system. Just tell the reader and yeah Authors note works perfectly. Btw When does the story start?
i dont know what to say but i know this when i reading this chapters i cant understand what year is it or whats going on when i am reading the chapter. I thinking “oh maybe they will fight now” but when i go onether chapter no fight and chapter starting like this he is elewen now?..? i cant understand did you deleted some chapter ?
Comments say it good novel so that is why for the rating. I gotta wait till there is more chapter before I get starts on this novel. So... Keep up the good work Author.
Is it a 2 chapter daily update or 2 chapter weekly update ?🤔 Is it 14 chapters weekly update or 14 chapters monthly update ? 🤔 Please dear author , be a little serious with what you promise to do 😯
When did you start writing this novel ? How many chapters are you willing to post weekly (an estimation) ? Are you going to drop this novel in the future like some other annoyed authors ?
Silent sport by void group.... Headed by void_king.. Btw. A good story after a long time from...my dear country india ...jai hind jai Bharat..
I quite enjoyed the previous one, and the only problem with it was the world background, as for the current one, I just hope that we still have the same waifu, and the same backstory on cultivation itself, with him taking the same path in not foregoing being human
Storyline is ok but the world/carecter/time/sideline need to explain properly and the chapter is stuck at 40 for too long period of time and now it restart the story from starting point....
Spoiler enthüllen I wanted to know if his girlfriend is going to be his teacher like last time you wrote the book? BTW i totally support this idea and i hope that his girlfriend is his teacher and the same teacher from first time you wrote the book because if he doesn't then ill think hes cheating on the girl from from the first write and it'll get stuck in my head.(bit selfish of me)
Spoiler enthüllen It’s not that interesting at the moment and a little confusing whit the way he refers to people but I wil come back and try to read later. Keep up the good work. I’m going to put 3 stars in all because I haven’t read enough and I have to put stars so don’t think I’m raising it good or bad.
Why did the chapters disappear? I can only read 2 & last i checked it was more than 10. Novels that has a different nationality of MC aside from usual Chinese are always 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 as it would give it a sense of originality & not a slip shod, run off the mill, mass produced one
hi author here. Sorry for such a mess up. I assure you this story is even better than last time. please do support me by reading this again as i commit myself to atleast 1 chap update
Where did the chapters go? Are you rewriting? I enjoyed the novel so far anyway. Now i’m just waffling on until 140 characters. Still not there yet.
Well its not that bad like people are saying about the grammatical errors i hope he will do something and ya ita much better than mtl translation release chapter a bit fast
An amazing novel, I'm not giving 5 stars basically because of the world building, but I'm loving this novel, it's so refreshing and unique. I need more chapters, like, right now.
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Boy imma whoops your ass if I don't get some updates soon. Like holy ****, your exams are over by now.... gimme my chapters lol. This last bit is to get over 140 characters.
Very 🐌 🐌 updates not to mention sometimes plot don't connect and continue . Overall very promising but lacks effort on part of author. Would like to see more of background development to make story richer otherwise it is just like Dragon blood warrior only focussing on sex Will not get story far one needs balance. Look at mars work and you will know.
Very 🐌 🐌 updates not to mention sometimes plot don't connect and continue . Overall very promising but lacks effort on part of author. Would like to see more of background development to make story richer otherwise it is just like Dragon blood warrior only focussing on sex Will not get story far one needs balance. Look at mars work and you will know.
This story is a banana!! A Banana!!!!A BANANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But really, I like it so far, only complaint is the that I read it to fast and that is a me problem not a story problem.
Spoiler enthüllen Let's see how that ***** shweta brags now huh. Absolutely loving this novel, hopefully you can go all out in production after your exams thanks for the great story
This is an amazing story, i will be waiting for every update, and I really hope that I won’t wait for long. The story covers different kinds of characters with different angles.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?