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I haven't read it yet but just seeing the cover makes me sigh in awe as seeing a cover as majestic as that which conveyed the whole story in but a simple cover is nothing short of godlike... and so..........5 STARS!!!
Dropped. ............................... .......................... ........ ........................................ ....................... ...................................... ................
This story is very interesting that i finish reading the the first hundred chapter in a day. But, this mister khan is full of vengance I pray lily won't get hurt.
It seems Mc is weak.. I thought at first he is op.. Haixt.. Why authors like fucking making mc OP AT FIRST THEN THEY WILL FUCKING NERF HIM?? REALLY DISSAPOINTING JUST WASTED MY TIME.. I ONLY READ 3 CHAP. THEN JUST READ LAST CHAPTER.. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
This is one of the most wonderful novels .... but alas, it has not been updated for a long time .................................. ....................... and this is a great pity! Author update novel, it would be great !!!!
The most interesting story! Many dynamic events. But there is a huge minus .............................................. .................................................. ............... This is something that history has not been updated for a long time !!!!
The novel is goodπ but when it comes to updating not quite..It's been a while now since the author's last updateπ I'm willing to wait creator TheAdventurerπ Hope you'll update soonπ€
Short and straightforward explanation Old op ancestor guy wakes up from his long slumber finding his sect destroyed and finds his bloodline has deviated, he wants revenge but is too much of a lil btch so do anything and weak af for being a old monster Basically everything except mc is good in this story, probably worth 3.5stars but the mc is absolute trash
This novel has been abandoned so yeah.. just check when he posted the last chapter before you start this This novel has been abandoned so yeah.. just check when he posted the last chapter before you start this
You already know it's good when you see that fake-ass qidian logo.....................................,........................ ...................
I love your cover! π I also like your plot too it's really good...but the FL.... *sigh* Forget it...it's nothing of importance. I will just endure. π’π₯
Best cover ever ... ....,.................... Unwanted giver list test posted to complete the word limit implemented by the app . if you're reading this, sorryπ
The romance is going fast like a shooting star, leaping through the sky Like a tiger, defying the laws of gravity... MC like a *** machine, ready to reload~ like an atom bomb about to Oh, oh, oh, oh, wow explode~
Was looking for Ancient ... (you know ;) ), and stumbled across this. Stayed for the cover. xD ... ... Have I reached one-hundred-and-forty characters yet, huh????
Okay. I was really surprised by this unexpected event. Who knew you were that author. I remember when I first saw that novel on rrl, I thought it was a comedy novel but the content contradict what I thought. Well anyway its a good work! and I hope you make more. Well you sure are good making a lot of hit originals :)
IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM??....tell me author San ..or readers San...plz pledge on Daily of immortality and tell me truth
Although I haven't read it yet (plan to after my current book) this cover really just blows me away like how did you even conceive of such a wonderful cover.
Haber, lo voy a escribir en espaΓ±ol ya que es mi idioma principal y me da pereza escribir en English, Comenzamos con la sino**is, te sugiero que la cambies, no tiene nada que ver con la historia, cuando uno la lee, piensa que va a haber comedia, ya que un ser supremo que se encuentra en el apice, ver cosas que no conoce, recordar gente que no esta a su lado y enfrentar psicologias y entidades moderna, se encuentran oportunidades estupendas para la historia, pero lo que nos encontramos es a una entidad lisiada, denso como una piedra y que se adapta mas rapido que un camaleon, practicamente una historia mas, para el rio de las que ya hay, este mc no se que tomar un proceso largo de adaptarse, ya que esta comenzando desde el comienzo, y tiene que hacerlo en un santiamen ya que si no muere y mas cuando se encuentra desde el principio en el centro de la trama, practicamente para mi fue una desepcion, ya que me esperaba algo mejor y diferente por la sino**is que lei.
MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! pero seryoso maganda ang pagkasulat ng iyong istorya, kala ko nga mga veteran na nga ng webnovel eh, malaking komplimento iyon brad, napakalupit nung nalaman ko na may tagalog dito sa nobela na ito. In short, magaling ka na, kaya bigyan mo na kami ng madaming chapters. -ang leech ng webnovel ΰΈ 'Ο'ΰΈ
Buena pero esta detenida lo cual resta mucho para poder leerla con tranquilidad, solo ver si la vuelven a publicar por lo demΓ‘s todo bien. Creo que tienen que continuar
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the adventurer where is your discord server ? the adventurer where is your discord server ? the adventurer where is your discord server ? the adventurer where is your discord server ?
i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you
I'm sorry I do think your a good writer. But you create a character who is the most amazing guy most powerful guy. Then you take away his power one by one. First he is powerful and cool. Then we find out even though he looks so young he cant cultivate and has withered dantain and ****ed up meridians. If that were true how the **** does he look so young. Second we find out he can be healed but no its not in his spatial ring that would be too f**ing easy. So he goes too find the pill to heal him but guess what 14 chapters and your still waving the carrot of he might get his powers back in the readers face. Sorry i wont wait 20 chapters for something to maybe happen.
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Very interesting by mixing modern magic with traditional cultivation. character's personalities are well thought out and keeps the reading wanting more. love your work, keep it up :)
in the seas of high quality covers, i see supremacy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job for the cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job for the cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First off, thank you author for sharing your work. I think the world you built is pretty interesting and the premise is as well. Unfortunately the characters are super thin especially the female lead. The writing quality is mediocre as well. The biggest issue however, is the female lead and her interactions with mc. Without developing a real relationship or at least a believable one, she becomes an integral part of his life and plot. Her character and mcβs reactions to her make me cringe. This story would be a 3.5 or 4 if she was removed.
I havenβt read the story yet but 5 stars just for the cover. Good job ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
The best cover art and cool story ................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story has a good start and it is a new idee which I din't read befor also in the beginning the Charakter was beliveable. The best I find the idea of the Story But first: why the heck do you need a VR part in this story its too munch. second: I belive he is mentaly an *****, so why the hell is he behaving like a teenager as soon as he is in the city and not like either low key how he wanted or at least not stir trouble everywhere he goes. third: so next I read this in sooooo many novels but the story isn't better if you write many *** scenes one time okay but here it is to munch in a short time like he is a rabbit. fourth: I know that the hero istn't able to use his full power but why is it that every time he fights he faints. In the beginning it was nice to read but know I have to say that the story is like many other storys out there. It had the potential to be better is what I think. p.s. For the Author thank you for trying
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I'll write this review solely for the cover! Haha! Love it very much...author is quirky and funny! Oh, the content is on unexplainable good as well woohoo! Nice plot and beginning chapters hehe.
I haven't read it yet but just seeing the cover makes me sigh in awe as seeing a cover as majestic as that which conveyed the whole story in but a simple cover is nothing short of godlike... and so..........5 STARS!!!
Dropped. ............................... .......................... ........ ........................................ ....................... ...................................... ................
This story is very interesting that i finish reading the the first hundred chapter in a day. But, this mister khan is full of vengance I pray lily won't get hurt.
It seems Mc is weak.. I thought at first he is op.. Haixt.. Why authors like fucking making mc OP AT FIRST THEN THEY WILL FUCKING NERF HIM?? REALLY DISSAPOINTING JUST WASTED MY TIME.. I ONLY READ 3 CHAP. THEN JUST READ LAST CHAPTER.. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
This is one of the most wonderful novels .... but alas, it has not been updated for a long time .................................. ....................... and this is a great pity! Author update novel, it would be great !!!!
The most interesting story! Many dynamic events. But there is a huge minus .............................................. .................................................. ............... This is something that history has not been updated for a long time !!!!
The novel is goodπ but when it comes to updating not quite..It's been a while now since the author's last updateπ I'm willing to wait creator TheAdventurerπ Hope you'll update soonπ€
Short and straightforward explanation Old op ancestor guy wakes up from his long slumber finding his sect destroyed and finds his bloodline has deviated, he wants revenge but is too much of a lil btch so do anything and weak af for being a old monster Basically everything except mc is good in this story, probably worth 3.5stars but the mc is absolute trash
This novel has been abandoned so yeah.. just check when he posted the last chapter before you start this This novel has been abandoned so yeah.. just check when he posted the last chapter before you start this
You already know it's good when you see that fake-ass qidian logo.....................................,........................ ...................
I love your cover! π I also like your plot too it's really good...but the FL.... *sigh* Forget it...it's nothing of importance. I will just endure. π’π₯
Best cover ever ... ....,.................... Unwanted giver list test posted to complete the word limit implemented by the app . if you're reading this, sorryπ
The romance is going fast like a shooting star, leaping through the sky Like a tiger, defying the laws of gravity... MC like a *** machine, ready to reload~ like an atom bomb about to Oh, oh, oh, oh, wow explode~
Was looking for Ancient ... (you know ;) ), and stumbled across this. Stayed for the cover. xD ... ... Have I reached one-hundred-and-forty characters yet, huh????
Okay. I was really surprised by this unexpected event. Who knew you were that author. I remember when I first saw that novel on rrl, I thought it was a comedy novel but the content contradict what I thought. Well anyway its a good work! and I hope you make more. Well you sure are good making a lot of hit originals :)
IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM?? IS THIS HAREMMM??....tell me author San ..or readers San...plz pledge on Daily of immortality and tell me truth
Although I haven't read it yet (plan to after my current book) this cover really just blows me away like how did you even conceive of such a wonderful cover.
Haber, lo voy a escribir en espaΓ±ol ya que es mi idioma principal y me da pereza escribir en English, Comenzamos con la sino**is, te sugiero que la cambies, no tiene nada que ver con la historia, cuando uno la lee, piensa que va a haber comedia, ya que un ser supremo que se encuentra en el apice, ver cosas que no conoce, recordar gente que no esta a su lado y enfrentar psicologias y entidades moderna, se encuentran oportunidades estupendas para la historia, pero lo que nos encontramos es a una entidad lisiada, denso como una piedra y que se adapta mas rapido que un camaleon, practicamente una historia mas, para el rio de las que ya hay, este mc no se que tomar un proceso largo de adaptarse, ya que esta comenzando desde el comienzo, y tiene que hacerlo en un santiamen ya que si no muere y mas cuando se encuentra desde el principio en el centro de la trama, practicamente para mi fue una desepcion, ya que me esperaba algo mejor y diferente por la sino**is que lei.
MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! MASPOGINAGPOSTNITO! pero seryoso maganda ang pagkasulat ng iyong istorya, kala ko nga mga veteran na nga ng webnovel eh, malaking komplimento iyon brad, napakalupit nung nalaman ko na may tagalog dito sa nobela na ito. In short, magaling ka na, kaya bigyan mo na kami ng madaming chapters. -ang leech ng webnovel ΰΈ 'Ο'ΰΈ
Buena pero esta detenida lo cual resta mucho para poder leerla con tranquilidad, solo ver si la vuelven a publicar por lo demΓ‘s todo bien. Creo que tienen que continuar
Spoiler enthΓΌllen the adventurer where is your discord server ? the adventurer where is your discord server ? the adventurer where is your discord server ? the adventurer where is your discord server ?
i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you i am here for the cover of the year ! 5 star for you
I'm sorry I do think your a good writer. But you create a character who is the most amazing guy most powerful guy. Then you take away his power one by one. First he is powerful and cool. Then we find out even though he looks so young he cant cultivate and has withered dantain and ****ed up meridians. If that were true how the **** does he look so young. Second we find out he can be healed but no its not in his spatial ring that would be too f**ing easy. So he goes too find the pill to heal him but guess what 14 chapters and your still waving the carrot of he might get his powers back in the readers face. Sorry i wont wait 20 chapters for something to maybe happen.
Spoiler enthΓΌllen Very interesting by mixing modern magic with traditional cultivation. character's personalities are well thought out and keeps the reading wanting more. love your work, keep it up :)
in the seas of high quality covers, i see supremacy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job for the cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job for the cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First off, thank you author for sharing your work. I think the world you built is pretty interesting and the premise is as well. Unfortunately the characters are super thin especially the female lead. The writing quality is mediocre as well. The biggest issue however, is the female lead and her interactions with mc. Without developing a real relationship or at least a believable one, she becomes an integral part of his life and plot. Her character and mcβs reactions to her make me cringe. This story would be a 3.5 or 4 if she was removed.
I havenβt read the story yet but 5 stars just for the cover. Good job ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
The best cover art and cool story ................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story has a good start and it is a new idee which I din't read befor also in the beginning the Charakter was beliveable. The best I find the idea of the Story But first: why the heck do you need a VR part in this story its too munch. second: I belive he is mentaly an *****, so why the hell is he behaving like a teenager as soon as he is in the city and not like either low key how he wanted or at least not stir trouble everywhere he goes. third: so next I read this in sooooo many novels but the story isn't better if you write many *** scenes one time okay but here it is to munch in a short time like he is a rabbit. fourth: I know that the hero istn't able to use his full power but why is it that every time he fights he faints. In the beginning it was nice to read but know I have to say that the story is like many other storys out there. It had the potential to be better is what I think. p.s. For the Author thank you for trying
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I'll write this review solely for the cover! Haha! Love it very much...author is quirky and funny! Oh, the content is on unexplainable good as well woohoo! Nice plot and beginning chapters hehe.