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Kapitel 1: A Lost Soul

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*Void Realm Time/Date: Unknown*

I have been here in this void for what feels like millennia and at the same time, it seems like yesterday, I have long forgotten my name and those of my family and friends. The only thing that keeps me going is my memory of anime and light novels and that this feels like a reincarnation troop I have read while I was alive. Oddly enough I still feel like I have a body but no hunger or thirst means I must be dead I don't remember my death but that is probably a good thing as I doubt dying is ever a good memory.

Even though I keep holding onto the hope of meeting a ROB and getting to have some wishes and reincarnating into the world of my choosing. I feel close to the breaking point and sooner or later I will forget even those wonderful dreams, and memories. It seems the longer I am here the more the void takes from me.

When I feel like I am just moments from finally giving up I notice there is a change instead of the long expanse of darkness I seem to have been brought to a meeting room. I look around and notice a blurry figure in a white tux sitting across from me looking through some documents. I am thinking this is finally it. I am going to be reincarnated all that wait was finally worth it all the agony of utter darkness and nothingness. As I get ready to ask him a question he looks up and speaks.

"Well, hello lost one took a while but we finally found you, before you ask yes you are going to be reincarnated, no you cannot know my name it is not translatable to mortal tongue just think of me as another man. And finally yes I know your wishes already and where you would like to go but first and foremost, we need to figure out how many wishes you would receive."

(How will you decide that?) my curiosity evident on my face.

The man beings to explain with a serious tone "You have two options; Karma exchange you get to use your positive karma in exchange for boons or wishes for your next incarnation. Otherwise, you may choose the Wheel of Wishes which can get you no wishes or up to 100, it depends on your luck Karma and strength of will. Choose wisely as this is final."

I can feel the finality of that last comment and contemplate for a moment. (Honestly, I never thought of myself as a good person so I doubt my Karma is very high let's go with the Wheel.) I sigh as I finish saying such.

"Now that you have chosen, I can say that is a good choice" He smiles as he mentions this with a knowing smirk. He then motions with his hand beside him and I notice an object that looks like the wheel of fortune but made of gold with what looks like diamonds inlaid on it in the shape of numbers. He then looks back to me and says "Ready when you are"

I look at it for a second reaffirm my resolve and with all of my being pray for the best result then nod. As soon as I do the wheel spins all I see is sparkles from the diamonds it's going too fast to even tell what the numbers are now. He then says "When your ready just will it stop and your fate is set."

I stare at the wheel as it spins send a prayer to whoever will listen one last time then put all of my hope, and dreams into my emotions and will the wheel to stop. It instantly stops as I gaze at it surprised at the suddenness, I see it has the number 6 written on the spot. After seeing this all the stress leaves me and I feel relief. With six wishes I should be able to get all I want and still have a single wish leftover in case there is something in those wishes I need to cover for.

As I am contemplating this he says "Congratulations seems that your will carried you through and you have gotten more than you had hoped!" I look up at him with gratitude in my eyes and say (Thanks, now what do I need to do?) He shows a wide smile and says "Even though I know your wishes already I will need for you to voice them out as those are required for this process to work"

I mull in silence on the proper phrasing of my wishes and look him in what I believe is his eyes and say (First I would like to reincarnate into Irregular of Magical High school as the younger twin of Shiba Tatsuya I will look Similar to him but more attractive.) He gently nods and waves for me to go on with the next wish. (Second, I would like to have all of Tatsuya's talent and ability without his drawbacks like emotional issues and his inability to use systematic magic as well as a stronger version of Miya's Mental Design Interference Magic.)

After this wish, I look up and he stares at me for a while I wince a bit thinking this is too much but he slowly nods and finally says. "close but still within the available workings of the wish proceed." I gently sigh in relief and continue with my third wish. (Ability to put a lock on my abilities like Miyuki does to Tatsuya but I control it like a switch in my mind I can also turn of my emotions the same way can be explained with Miya's Magic.)

He shrugs and gestures for me to continue. (I wish to change some of the origin stories of Maya but not have it affect the canon storyline, Maya will not be raped or lose her ability to have children but she will have been experimented on and still have her mind altered by Miya to protect her from that torture as she was a child and those memories would have broken her mind.)

After saying this wish I look up finally at the being in front of me I am unsure if this one is possible as this has to do with the foundation of the world but I want this to work even if I have to use my last 2 wishes for this alone. He looks me in the eye and nods firmly while saying "It can be done though you will have to see how this will affect you in the future no spoilers" he ends with a grin or what I assume is as his whole face is blurry but I can somewhat hear the amusement in his tone.

"Now for your last wish I assume you would like to save it right?" he looks at me inquisitively awaiting my response. I nod and say (Yes, I would like to save it there may be a situation I need it in the future since I plan to step in some places and I am unsure how this could affect the story I would like the added insurance.) He nods and says "It is doable but there will be restrictions and if you ask for too much it will be exhaust the chance with no effect to be careful."

I nod one last time and thank him for everything he shakes his head and says "There is one final thing to do before your able to be sent away." I look at him quizzically he chuckles and says "Character Creation", I look at him in amusement at the reference and mild anticipation. A model of a boy comes into view and I intuitively know how to work the tools to adjust his looks. I think back on all the anime character I can think of and one comes to mind Killua from HXH I immediately get to work on designing him as my base and adjust it just a bit to make sure I look a little better with brighter blue eyes, a little taller than him and mildly more defines muscles.

After what must have been hours spent on editing my looks from a boy to an adult I finally press accept and sigh in relief. That had been very tedious but I feel very relieved to know I will be well endowed in many physical aspects! I look across from me and see him looking back nodding then says

"With that, you finished now you will need to know you will not be able to remember anything until you are old enough and it will be as if one day you just remember your memories and being here and what you had wished for. At the time of your memories awakening, you will integrate all your knowledge and experience as if it was originally such think of it as a small favor from me."

I bow my head and thank him, he nods and with a snap of his fingers, my vision blurs...


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Alright there is a little teaser chapter I have never written a story before let me know what you all think would love some constructive criticism.

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