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[BL] SYSTEM, WTF!!!(Hiatus)
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10/07/2018
(This is an original story that came from my wild imagination.)
I will be posting this story at Royalroad.
I am Riku Minaru, 50 years old and died with a tumor, I had died with no regret, hoping for a peaceful rest.
But before my life fades away I heard a voice.
[System initiating a connection to the host, processing complete]
HUH?! WAIT! WHAT? SYSTEM? WTF!
( Author: This story is full of nonsense so if you want to read then read in your own risk, and I might add up that English is not my first language so please if there's an error don't hate me.) ;p
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A wonderful BL comic and Cait wait to read more.................................................. ............................................................................................ ......
Cliffhanger huhuhu pls update immediately pls. I'm gonna go crazy now. It is good to read. understable. Pls,Pls, update now. But if you don't want to its OK take your time. I just here to support the author no matter what happens.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I really love it especially their personalieties And i am really excited for the upcoming chapters in the Future.🤩🤩🤩❤❤
It is a great novel you can get invested in. The emotions the author expresses can make you very fond of the MC. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
I love your enthusiasm keep up the spirit and push forward. you seem like you would be a fun person, and I can't wait for more chapters to come out so I can find out what happens to the main character.
Hahaha the MC is cute childish and hilarious plus full of vulgarities. Not even acting his age at all. I actually cringe at certain parts of the story but it wasn’t horrible compared to the story description. Keep it up and make ur readers laugh more.
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The chapters are too short and the story lines could be much better . I feel that something is amiss in the story , while reading I get this feeling that instead of reading a complete chapter I am only reading a preview.
The grammar is sometime a little bit off, its a little bit messy cuz of to many pov however the story is quite enjoyable... The character has quite an interesting characteristic which is kind of different from other characters..and the system is just like the title suggest... The storyline although kinda rush but it give a good amount of satisfaction...it is wrap up nicely until the cliffhanger is not seen much.... Im giving the author thumbs ups and great encouragement cuz they obviously can grow a lot better💪💪💪👍👍👍😙😙😙😙
stunning novel i say ,the mc is just so sweet, no wonder the c.prince wants to eat him up (❁´◡`❁),god bless you dear author i just wish for more updates like a lot ,you can't possibly drop or go hiatus right?!! ,you won't want to torture our poor soul(´；д；`)i know you wont be that cruel you're a good author ,good authors don't make their readers crie
This story has a fairly good hook, but the execution is kinda sloppy. I like the idea of a system and all it entails. I even like that the MC is so far out of his comfort zone, but he's a little hard to get a solid grip on when he's terrified of the prince one moment then glaring at him the next.
I enjoyed the story so far but I cannot help but wish that the chapters was a bit longer and that it was updated a bit faster even though I know how hard it is to write a story and keep it entertaining when you are not inspired.
So far all the characters are so fun to read about! I absolutely love the protagonist's story. Most of the time it's a young or middle-aged person who barely has any life. But the protagonist being older than normal really makes the story fun to read. I love seeing his reactions to our prince's harassment because they're so over the top and fun. Even if it's not the most literary story it's easy to find what the author is trying to explain. I really enjoy reading this story and have already recommended it to some friends.
This story is so entertaining. The MC got above average skill of cursing showing you how much he was abused. but nah, he just so unlucky. I hope the MC got his own foot in the future. Looking forward 4 the continuation. *note: sometimes the grammar is confusing, it is not a serious problem though, still readable*
I love this! I love the wild and arrogant Prince! Give me more!!! Please? 😶 Grammer is not perfect, but generally understandable. Recommend!!!!👍
Its an amazing story! I can wait to read more! I cant wait to see what our precious MC will do to help the Prince! Seriously a very captivating story that many will love to read.
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Good story with enjoyable caracters a complete page turner and well planed plot and characters entices you from the very beginning unique design and worthy to recommend.