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Everything about this novel is 10/10 and is deserving of any and all praise. This is not an exaggeration. The Arthur gives their heart into the chapters they create which gives each page the polishness that, let's be honest, even some contracted novels lack. Truly, I was bored of the repetitive nonsense that has been accumulating on webnovel recently. All rubbish. Nothing felt fresh, but this, this is fresh. From the easy to understand, pleasant writing to the characters feeling alive. Each side characters has a goal of their own. Rether that be the main character's elder sister wanting to be a top swordsman or the Head maid willing to belittle herself to upton for her mistakes. Did a give a mini spoiler. Oops. Anyway, they all have thoughts of their own and aren't blatantly following the mc nor mindlessly doing things for the convenience of plot. There's few errors and mistakes that won't enact the rage of bad grammar from within you I promise. Personally I enjoyed the journey so far, currently read chapter 50, and I urge you to give it a try for yourself. That is if you're ok with the tags, reread them just Incase. Don't want any nonsense now do we? To the Arthur: I enjoy your work, really, it's great. I know the motivation you've felt at the beginning has dwindled a significant amount, I don't blame ya, there's a lot of nonsense with webnovel user's who give one stars for idiotic reasons and even sometimes no reason at all. However and this may be selfish of me but I urge and encourage you to continue on. Even with your lost of motivation the recent chapters hasn't taken a slump in delivery nor quality. If you have to, take a tiny, tiny, break to recover that lost motivation but I must warn you that webnovel Arthur's have a curse of dropping novels once the Arthur takes a break. Wait this review feels too long, I've started rambling. Too make matters short I love your novel, please continue on with your hardwork. It does not go unnoticed. And if you can why not gain something from it like a Patreon or something. Just see where it goes. I do like reading for free tho, I mean who doesn't, but works like these deserve extra if you know what I mean.
Notice!! [Temporary Review] I've started editing the starting chapters(Done till chapter 7 at the time of writing this) to improve my MC's initial impressions and behavior. Kinda scr#wed it in the first couple of chapters, thinking I was writing "comedy" or whatever, but it was often just plain cringe and/or annoying. It's much more "normal" now, I suppose? (Well, it is what it is. I am not going to make any further changes to it.) Anyway, if you're a new reader who is about to start this story(Hey! Thanks for reading! :D ), you might wanna know that this is happening from 20th Oct 2022 till [undecided]. But don't worry. It won't really affect the latter chapters... like after chapter 20 or something? I'm only going to do it for the first couple of chapters where I was still brand new at writing(still am a noob, btw) and wasn't sure what kind of protagonist I was trying to write. P.S.: Everything else except my MC's reactions and dialogues will stay the same. No changes in the actual plot or storyline!! I am actually fine with what I've created so far. :) P.P.S.: Also, rated it 5 starts, coz why not? XD I deserve it, lol. (Probably not, but I'm fine being a hypocrite or whatever!)
Hallo ich weiß nicht was ich hier sagen soll außer das ich die Geschichte bisher mochte. Somit wäre alles gesagt und ich habe keine Ahnung was ich sonst noch schreiben sollte...
this will be my very first time rating a book so take my words at surface level. writing quality is pretty decent from what I've read, wich is all of it so far. some may disagree with me bit honestly, as long as I dont have a stroke or suicidal thoughts because of reading, means it's good enough. story development.... this ones a hard one. while the general story is quite above average in my not so expert opinion, it does tickle my fancy bone, a bit. I still can't decide on what's been forced through the forging of the wonderful piece, however there is some jumps here and there. over all it's not quite bad, but the author really just pumped out some stuff. I can't tell if they where pressed or not since I'm reading this when on hiatus on chapter 93. but some interactions seemed, whimsical. forcefully pushing the story in a certain way of a mixture of lemons and drama action. note I read this novel for the 18+, if you're doing the same I don't personally recommend reading this... there where like 10-15 lemon scenes, mind you it's also a stretch to really say there lemons. author has a big personality and it shows in their work. there where some very frustrating times during this novel, and I believe made many drop or abandon this work, which is fair. some scenes totally ruined my day, twas terrible. but over all through maybe forced and planed the author got it moving in a somewhat pleasing way. character design, this novel has some heavy drama, kinda. they make some fuss but overall it's not really a main factor from my point of view unother then it guided (unreliable) way to future plot. the character designs themselves have amazing potential, while some proven themselves not just having such potential but filling it out. updating stability, can't answer as said before I'm here reading this when it's on hiatus. world background, it's got some potential that gets filled out pretty reliably, the world background it's self isn't really a big deal for me so don't take my word to strongly, you'll be disappointed (probably). over all as my ratings say it's a solid four.
I loved this work I found very enjoyable and funny at some parts as well great job and keep up the good work
This is the good stuff, very entertaining. 10/10 Currently at Ch 90 and I NEEEED MOOOAAREEE. One of the best I've read on WN. Brilliant story & character development. I feel that the characters are realistic and I'm invested in their development with our MC. Very well done chapters with brilliant grammar and comedy that I always find myself chuckling to. The comedy aspect goes along with the story and doesn't negatively impact the character of the scenarios. The author places the comedy at well thought out times, there not just jammed in every chapter, it comes and goes. (I write this bc I have ptsd from reading too many Manhwas with slapstick comedy) I am looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the great work Author.
رواية حلوة و رائع🤩 تمتلك امكانيات🥳 جيد أرجو فقط منك أيها المؤلف ألا تدع الرواية تضيع بسبب فقدان شغفك بها😭😭 أرجو من هذا التعليق أن يشجعك على استمرار أتمنى أن يحيى شغفك 🥺🥺🥺😍وتحميل فصول جديد
I really like this story alot. I was late to find this story so it's sad that you've taken a break from writing this story
I don't know about future but as of now I am quiting . Hope you become successful author
I really like this book. At first like many i thought this book will be almost a copy of The Conquerors Path and i should say this honestly I added this book in my collection on 25th of February 2023 and honestly i always just reading little bit closes this book, but whenever i am extremely bored i always open this book as i Never removed it from my library. and finally after 10 chapters i could read this book with excitement After that only i realised this book is not the same as The Conquerors Path. And i was feeling regretful for not giving this book more chances but now i will read it completely and hopefully will always wait for updates and for that author-san has to work hard. Sorry Author-san for my bias and Thanks for this wonderful book and please in future there might be many who will criticize this book who will be The Conquerors Path's loyal fans but please persist through.
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the story was kinda slow at the start and felt like a slice of life novel but its getting good now one of the best story i read the "love" is kinda forced? but its fine for me
Absolutely love this. Very professionally written for a first time writer. Certainly better than mine. Though, the updates aren't quite as frequent. Love Alex's development, it was slow but steady. others like Emma were nice too.
I think it is one of the best novels after conq. p., so keep it going author. As for me, you have a talent at writing. Желаю тебе побольше вдохновения и времени для писательства. :3
Unfortunately, I don't like this job. Especially because of the main character. He's an idiot and it's clear from the first chapters. He views girls as tools and not as personalities or a typical issekai hero. nothing new or eye-catching.
😄 I love this novel so much if you're reading my review please read this novel you love it
Was kind of on edge on if I should read this or not since the author is new but I’m glad I did. this novels has been very entertaining so far and I’m currently binge reading it. Just hope that since the author is new he doesnt drop it as I’ve seen that happen a few times for other novels. The grammar is really good, Havent seen any major spelling mistakes or anything and the overall story is enjoyable 👍
writing quality is good not the best i can say but yes, it improves in latter parts so that's good. i like it at the very least because it's not totally into 'LEMON' area but provides good world building and character background and their thoughts. Author is good at giving POV's of characters and general areas, well that's what i think anyways i only gotta say it was good and i read all(currently released) chapters in one go and waiting for more. i haven't read the story where author keeps saying it's inspired from amd gonna give it a go. hehe, thanks author-san for the story.
So I just finished Volume 1 (About 70 Chapters worth) and thought it would be best to give my thoughts on this novel. Let's start with the bad cause there were some things that bothered me that the author probably mentioned in his comments somewhere. For one I was rather disappointed at the behavior of the MC during the mid-late point of the novel. He had an inventory which he didn't even bother to include weapons, food, clothing and other basic necessities from outside his regular storage device. The main character is naive, I get that but even an idiot would know to pack at least food or weapons in his other storage devices. Besides this it was using a skill's name from another novel. I know he changed it to something else but if in the future you ever need to use a skill you like from another novel, the best thing would be to change the name entirely that makes it not so on the nose for your readers to know. Like "Monarch's Apathy" is still pretty on the nose. Atleast change the word for Monarch. Alas besides some small grammar errors there's nothing else that outright bothered me. Well except the MC oogling his mom, that was a bit weird knowing his body is still blood related to her. (But I'll let it slide) Now onto the good. I like where you're going with the story. Albeit it's not original it's a tale I feel can stand on its own. I won't say your story is the best of the best but it certainly has it's charm. Keep it up. I'm sure you'll surprise us the readers.
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i like your story, i found your story in other list and when i read the synopsis i feel like want to try it and yeah even you said this have inspiration from Conquerer Path im not read that yet so i dont know but i will read it after this, i want to know how your novel compare to that but i certainly sure you've create amazing story
good story until now i read it without break it is good great potential let see what will happen later
This novel is a gem when you first read the title you think it will be a common s*xual novel that focuses only on s*x but no the author makes the story so much more and actually makes the relationships feel somewhat normal I cant give enough praise it's an amazing novel that you should read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story is funny, well written with good characters and not too much cliche. I don’t really have a bad word to say about the book and am looking forward to future chapter. Thanks author 🙏
Honestly I'm not much of a reviewer, but here I go. I really like the story, it's easy to read and my mother tongue the whole volume one and I sincerely hope it continues. Thanks Author-san for the story (note: I'm using Google translator English is not my mother tongue so sorry for mistakes. Ps: First time doing a review too. XD)
As is the norm, I'll be rating it 5 stars, since I'm proud of what I have created so far. Hope you'll find it good as well. :) Don't forget to review and comment. You support is the only other thing that'll help me keep going, the first being my creativity.
Everything about this novel is 10/10 and is deserving of any and all praise. This is not an exaggeration. The Arthur gives their heart into the chapters they create which gives each page the polishness that, let's be honest, even some contracted novels lack. Truly, I was bored of the repetitive nonsense that has been accumulating on webnovel recently. All rubbish. Nothing felt fresh, but this, this is fresh. From the easy to understand, pleasant writing to the characters feeling alive. Each side characters has a goal of their own. Rether that be the main character's elder sister wanting to be a top swordsman or the Head maid willing to belittle herself to upton for her mistakes. Did a give a mini spoiler. Oops. Anyway, they all have thoughts of their own and aren't blatantly following the mc nor mindlessly doing things for the convenience of plot. There's few errors and mistakes that won't enact the rage of bad grammar from within you I promise. Personally I enjoyed the journey so far, currently read chapter 50, and I urge you to give it a try for yourself. That is if you're ok with the tags, reread them just Incase. Don't want any nonsense now do we? To the Arthur: I enjoy your work, really, it's great. I know the motivation you've felt at the beginning has dwindled a significant amount, I don't blame ya, there's a lot of nonsense with webnovel user's who give one stars for idiotic reasons and even sometimes no reason at all. However and this may be selfish of me but I urge and encourage you to continue on. Even with your lost of motivation the recent chapters hasn't taken a slump in delivery nor quality. If you have to, take a tiny, tiny, break to recover that lost motivation but I must warn you that webnovel Arthur's have a curse of dropping novels once the Arthur takes a break. Wait this review feels too long, I've started rambling. Too make matters short I love your novel, please continue on with your hardwork. It does not go unnoticed. And if you can why not gain something from it like a Patreon or something. Just see where it goes. I do like reading for free tho, I mean who doesn't, but works like these deserve extra if you know what I mean.
Notice!! [Temporary Review] I've started editing the starting chapters(Done till chapter 7 at the time of writing this) to improve my MC's initial impressions and behavior. Kinda scr#wed it in the first couple of chapters, thinking I was writing "comedy" or whatever, but it was often just plain cringe and/or annoying. It's much more "normal" now, I suppose? (Well, it is what it is. I am not going to make any further changes to it.) Anyway, if you're a new reader who is about to start this story(Hey! Thanks for reading! :D ), you might wanna know that this is happening from 20th Oct 2022 till [undecided]. But don't worry. It won't really affect the latter chapters... like after chapter 20 or something? I'm only going to do it for the first couple of chapters where I was still brand new at writing(still am a noob, btw) and wasn't sure what kind of protagonist I was trying to write. P.S.: Everything else except my MC's reactions and dialogues will stay the same. No changes in the actual plot or storyline!! I am actually fine with what I've created so far. :) P.P.S.: Also, rated it 5 starts, coz why not? XD I deserve it, lol. (Probably not, but I'm fine being a hypocrite or whatever!)
Hallo ich weiß nicht was ich hier sagen soll außer das ich die Geschichte bisher mochte. Somit wäre alles gesagt und ich habe keine Ahnung was ich sonst noch schreiben sollte...
this will be my very first time rating a book so take my words at surface level. writing quality is pretty decent from what I've read, wich is all of it so far. some may disagree with me bit honestly, as long as I dont have a stroke or suicidal thoughts because of reading, means it's good enough. story development.... this ones a hard one. while the general story is quite above average in my not so expert opinion, it does tickle my fancy bone, a bit. I still can't decide on what's been forced through the forging of the wonderful piece, however there is some jumps here and there. over all it's not quite bad, but the author really just pumped out some stuff. I can't tell if they where pressed or not since I'm reading this when on hiatus on chapter 93. but some interactions seemed, whimsical. forcefully pushing the story in a certain way of a mixture of lemons and drama action. note I read this novel for the 18+, if you're doing the same I don't personally recommend reading this... there where like 10-15 lemon scenes, mind you it's also a stretch to really say there lemons. author has a big personality and it shows in their work. there where some very frustrating times during this novel, and I believe made many drop or abandon this work, which is fair. some scenes totally ruined my day, twas terrible. but over all through maybe forced and planed the author got it moving in a somewhat pleasing way. character design, this novel has some heavy drama, kinda. they make some fuss but overall it's not really a main factor from my point of view unother then it guided (unreliable) way to future plot. the character designs themselves have amazing potential, while some proven themselves not just having such potential but filling it out. updating stability, can't answer as said before I'm here reading this when it's on hiatus. world background, it's got some potential that gets filled out pretty reliably, the world background it's self isn't really a big deal for me so don't take my word to strongly, you'll be disappointed (probably). over all as my ratings say it's a solid four.
I loved this work I found very enjoyable and funny at some parts as well great job and keep up the good work
This is the good stuff, very entertaining. 10/10 Currently at Ch 90 and I NEEEED MOOOAAREEE. One of the best I've read on WN. Brilliant story & character development. I feel that the characters are realistic and I'm invested in their development with our MC. Very well done chapters with brilliant grammar and comedy that I always find myself chuckling to. The comedy aspect goes along with the story and doesn't negatively impact the character of the scenarios. The author places the comedy at well thought out times, there not just jammed in every chapter, it comes and goes. (I write this bc I have ptsd from reading too many Manhwas with slapstick comedy) I am looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the great work Author.
رواية حلوة و رائع🤩 تمتلك امكانيات🥳 جيد أرجو فقط منك أيها المؤلف ألا تدع الرواية تضيع بسبب فقدان شغفك بها😭😭 أرجو من هذا التعليق أن يشجعك على استمرار أتمنى أن يحيى شغفك 🥺🥺🥺😍وتحميل فصول جديد
I really like this story alot. I was late to find this story so it's sad that you've taken a break from writing this story
I don't know about future but as of now I am quiting . Hope you become successful author
I really like this book. At first like many i thought this book will be almost a copy of The Conquerors Path and i should say this honestly I added this book in my collection on 25th of February 2023 and honestly i always just reading little bit closes this book, but whenever i am extremely bored i always open this book as i Never removed it from my library. and finally after 10 chapters i could read this book with excitement After that only i realised this book is not the same as The Conquerors Path. And i was feeling regretful for not giving this book more chances but now i will read it completely and hopefully will always wait for updates and for that author-san has to work hard. Sorry Author-san for my bias and Thanks for this wonderful book and please in future there might be many who will criticize this book who will be The Conquerors Path's loyal fans but please persist through.
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the story was kinda slow at the start and felt like a slice of life novel but its getting good now one of the best story i read the "love" is kinda forced? but its fine for me
Absolutely love this. Very professionally written for a first time writer. Certainly better than mine. Though, the updates aren't quite as frequent. Love Alex's development, it was slow but steady. others like Emma were nice too.
I think it is one of the best novels after conq. p., so keep it going author. As for me, you have a talent at writing. Желаю тебе побольше вдохновения и времени для писательства. :3
Unfortunately, I don't like this job. Especially because of the main character. He's an idiot and it's clear from the first chapters. He views girls as tools and not as personalities or a typical issekai hero. nothing new or eye-catching.
😄 I love this novel so much if you're reading my review please read this novel you love it
Was kind of on edge on if I should read this or not since the author is new but I’m glad I did. this novels has been very entertaining so far and I’m currently binge reading it. Just hope that since the author is new he doesnt drop it as I’ve seen that happen a few times for other novels. The grammar is really good, Havent seen any major spelling mistakes or anything and the overall story is enjoyable 👍
writing quality is good not the best i can say but yes, it improves in latter parts so that's good. i like it at the very least because it's not totally into 'LEMON' area but provides good world building and character background and their thoughts. Author is good at giving POV's of characters and general areas, well that's what i think anyways i only gotta say it was good and i read all(currently released) chapters in one go and waiting for more. i haven't read the story where author keeps saying it's inspired from amd gonna give it a go. hehe, thanks author-san for the story.
So I just finished Volume 1 (About 70 Chapters worth) and thought it would be best to give my thoughts on this novel. Let's start with the bad cause there were some things that bothered me that the author probably mentioned in his comments somewhere. For one I was rather disappointed at the behavior of the MC during the mid-late point of the novel. He had an inventory which he didn't even bother to include weapons, food, clothing and other basic necessities from outside his regular storage device. The main character is naive, I get that but even an idiot would know to pack at least food or weapons in his other storage devices. Besides this it was using a skill's name from another novel. I know he changed it to something else but if in the future you ever need to use a skill you like from another novel, the best thing would be to change the name entirely that makes it not so on the nose for your readers to know. Like "Monarch's Apathy" is still pretty on the nose. Atleast change the word for Monarch. Alas besides some small grammar errors there's nothing else that outright bothered me. Well except the MC oogling his mom, that was a bit weird knowing his body is still blood related to her. (But I'll let it slide) Now onto the good. I like where you're going with the story. Albeit it's not original it's a tale I feel can stand on its own. I won't say your story is the best of the best but it certainly has it's charm. Keep it up. I'm sure you'll surprise us the readers.
Reveal Spoiler i like your story, i found your story in other list and when i read the synopsis i feel like want to try it and yeah even you said this have inspiration from Conquerer Path im not read that yet so i dont know but i will read it after this, i want to know how your novel compare to that but i certainly sure you've create amazing story
good story until now i read it without break it is good great potential let see what will happen later
This novel is a gem when you first read the title you think it will be a common s*xual novel that focuses only on s*x but no the author makes the story so much more and actually makes the relationships feel somewhat normal I cant give enough praise it's an amazing novel that you should read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story is funny, well written with good characters and not too much cliche. I don’t really have a bad word to say about the book and am looking forward to future chapter. Thanks author 🙏
Honestly I'm not much of a reviewer, but here I go. I really like the story, it's easy to read and my mother tongue the whole volume one and I sincerely hope it continues. Thanks Author-san for the story (note: I'm using Google translator English is not my mother tongue so sorry for mistakes. Ps: First time doing a review too. XD)
As is the norm, I'll be rating it 5 stars, since I'm proud of what I have created so far. Hope you'll find it good as well. :) Don't forget to review and comment. You support is the only other thing that'll help me keep going, the first being my creativity.