the most unlikely murder

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whyshouldieven

hello everyone why here to anyone looking to read this novel(in its current state) please try chapter 2 yes chapter 1 is a mess that I would like to hide under my stairs but I'm not at the level required to fix it yet I can promise it gets so much better in chapter 2 and beyond thank you for taking the time to read this and my novel

LV 14

SleepDeprivedSloth

Hmm, so let me start. The first chapter was a mess, like real real mess. too much info dump, Tbh I nearly fell asleep there. please change it a little. There are some minor grammar errors but that is unavoidable, so 4/5 on writing quality. Stability of updates: Well, 3-4 chaps a week is too low for me so, 3/5 there. Story development: Hmm, I have read till the beast tide chapter where the mc just tires himself out before the actual fight begins. The story seems interesting but not much has been done yet, 4/5 Character design: Well, tbh I really don't like the mc, he is too... idk depressed? I mean, just tell that in the synopsis, I don't like reading depressed mcs, my life is already sad enough, wouldn't want to add sadder things to it(but that is just my personal thinking) 3/5 World background: Well, normal apocalypse world, not much has been introduced but it seems okay. People can tame beasts here, so that's cool as well. 4/5 Well, that's it for me, as for the readers reading this, you can try this novel if you want. A cool story.