Reviews of The Curse of Time (Harry Potter Fanfic) by The_Absolu - Webnovel

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kurotsuki007

I like the concept behind the character but I wish the author took more time to humanize the AI prompts. The flow is okay but sometimes it suddenly jumps from one thought to another. The dialog is where you can really feel the lack of a human touch. The interaction between different characters feels of like it doesn’t really belong to the story even though the words themselves fit.

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SirWolfT1

ingenious and creative, not what i was expecting and quite engaging, i love the mc's quirks and would love to see how the story unfolds and ends

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kurotsuki007

I like the concept behind the character but I wish the author took more time to humanize the AI prompts. The flow is okay but sometimes it suddenly jumps from one thought to another. The dialog is where you can really feel the lack of a human touch. The interaction between different characters feels of like it doesn’t really belong to the story even though the words themselves fit.

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SirWolfT1

ingenious and creative, not what i was expecting and quite engaging, i love the mc's quirks and would love to see how the story unfolds and ends

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