The Archaic Dragon Mage

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Braiden_Hawkins_5082

Im going to be Honest right know this book is good Wait No amazing out of the books ive read online and ofline this book full put all of what i wanted normally in a book you would not like all of it like some parts are bad some Are good but this it like a perfect book i only have one problem with i and it dose Not involved the stars it that there is not enough chapters Ps great Job hope you keep up the good work

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BloodFistLord

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Linus_3489

I thought the story will be very cool because its about a dragon which i think is really cool and amazing. That he can camouflage is awsome too and its good that his power gets reduced as he is in his human form. That was the good part till chapter 17 so far. But now to my not so overly good rating. And its about his bonding system which makes no sense at all and i dont like the interaction between himeself and that dimwit Ethan. In this interaction i think there is missing a charakteristic which i think is the best of a dragon the arrogance and being proud but well not every one think of a dragon as i do. And second of all a bonding system which does no sense to me as the system says its a manifastion of his power but why can he bond whitout even giving his consent because that leads me to think he isnt even in controll over his own power. Another thing i dont like at all is that he can share his power a little bit which utterly disappoints me in some way. Like he needs to do everything and the other completly weeklings can just grow with him. Not to mention the weird way of interacting between those two.

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Lyric_Drake

I love this story! I really love dragons so the general theme of this story is amazing, and he doesn't just start out and bang bang look he is the most powerful being in existence, there is actual progression, near death experiences, and all kinds of things that make the story amazing! My biggest problem with it that is just a side effect of being impatient is I read fast so I'm going to have to wait at least four or five days for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! ( I promise I will buy the books later on when I have the money )

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Lavolpe3

Very good story I could not stop reading I do have a question is the book on here ahead of the ones on Amazon and if so what is the difference between the two?

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Andreas_Matei_4020

An enjoyable novel to read through, i recommend reading it if you already havent. Though in some places the story is a little slow or forced it is overall very fun to read.

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NLinCH

I started reading three days ago and am at 32X now. A bit slow paced but a great personality for a human turned dragon in human environment. I’m unsure if it’s better to wait a for few chapters every now and then or if you can read them every day. (because slow pace)

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Daoistnkwe1r

It’s a great story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Shepalonious

Does he have wings? Or Is his wings his front claws?————-—— /- -//—-——-—-—-Alos i really like the Story so far! Good job! ////////:/://////////

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KingNitro

Does he get a permanent form anytime soon. I’m on chapter 22 and I dont like how he has to transform and hide it everytime. At least make it so he has his actual stats all the time.

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abd_pd

how in the world is this book not in the top ten this is super good and is on par if not better then my vampire system which at the time of writing this is number 1 please read this book do NOT miss out on something this good althou the chapter updates have slowed from what i can see but i could not put down my phone to stop reading this until i read all 110 chapter that at the time of this reveiw this has my highest praise and no as far as ive read this does not have bl and it does not look like it will in the future

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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dragon_Individual

more more more more more More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more More more more more more

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Meradith_Bennett

this of one of the best books In reading right now. I would suggest this to any fantas lovers because it is absolutely my thing and it has lots of action.

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dragonfinatic

finished the book loved it but now ive got to go find the new book that continues this story hopefully that book will be longer and just as good if not better than this one which would be hard to do but knowing this author it cam be done

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Blindmonkeey

new reader and curious why many novels similar in genre or style have to begin with setting up the most pathetic & arduous of beginnings? is this a competition on who can create the most abject difficulty for the protagonist? Can a person be considered interesting or successful only IF they have faced such impossible circumstances? sometimes it seems like the only actual antagonist to the mc is the horrendous beginnings. anyway just a few questions I'd been curious about.

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NLinCH

Thanks for the chapters. Always feels good to come back to your book. Though it can be difficult to get back into after a 1/2 year break, it keeps on giving. The story that isn’t cut down into chapters per se; that is what makes it unique, easy to keep reading and always in motion. I have difficulty finding stop moments, since you don’t even notice changing chapters. A critique in most storys without chapter titles; a feature of this one. I also love the character development; there are vew shifts with most changes not being described directly, but being felt over the story, percieved in their actions. From what I percieved with your comment/ personal story in winter, this story may be a way for you to flee from reality, taking your readers with you and by doing so leaving an imprint on reality it is something you may never forget to be proud about. The joy to loose once self in this fantasy world, this story, other universe, is something I am amazed by, am thankful to you for sharing it with us. I've read ca.130 chapters in less than 48 hours and will likely have another look at the end of this arc. That, to end this with, would be my suggestion to make the story better. It may be helpful to have titles for the big arcs; shool, (excursion, shool II,) werewolf Island, lizzard plannet, Greenland, freeing slaves. Thanks for writing through out everything that is gooing on with you, Thanks for offering an unobstructed path to fantasy, Thanks for this amazing story, And good luck, with it and you Thanks (I noticed that this is really mor of a reviw than a comment, so I added it here as well.)

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Lavolpe3

I love this book and I hope it gets updated soon please come back