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What you need to know before reading: - The protagonist is not super OP, reincarnated with SSS+ talent, he doesn't have a super strong system, he doesn't find a divine artifact that improves his body, he won't be the strongest in the kingdom in chapter 100... The protagonist reincarnates in a body with low talent for magic but, with his superior knowledge of the past life, he will surpass all others. - Because of the above, the pace of the story is a little slow, and that's fine with me. The protagonist's strength building is more realistic. He will also learn new things, after all he now has the theory and practice of magic. - The protagonist's personality is a bit arrogant... ...ok, fine! he is arrogant. But as the chapters go by, this characteristic diminishes and stays at a good level. After all, he reached the top of magical theories in his past life without having magic! So it's normal for him to be a little arrogant, isn't it? - From what I read, I believe that the protagonist is not a good guy and not a bad guy. I think he is aligned with the "neutral". If he has to kill, he will kill, but he's not a psychopath. - At the beginning of the work, the author is a little lacking in the physical descriptions of the characters, making it difficult and even impossible to visualize them mentally. His mother's mental image is a woman with big balloons where she suffocates the mc. Later the author improves in this area, so rest assured. - The protagonist will not be a lone wolf. He will have allies. Stay calm! They will not be burdens. - The writing is good. It is still necessary to know more things about the world... Cultures, regions, religions if they exist... I don't know if there are other races like elves, dwarves, etc, but it's at the beginning of the work so that's for later. - There are some "Slice of Life" parts in the story that are nice and funny. They help you relax a little and not overwhelm readers with information at all times. hmmm I think that's it for now. This review was based up to chapter 150. Keep up the good work, author. ^^
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After clocking over three hundred chapters, I will be giving my novel a Review. Firstly, I would like to say that while I am the author, my opinions on this book isn’t just based on bias. It’s a wonderful and interesting story. I have received a few criticisms, of which I will be addressing here. As readers, you should also be prepared to see these factors. So that you’re not caught off guard, let me explain a few things. [Sp0iler Alert] *Some things mentioned may contain mild sp0ilers* Firstly; The MC acts like a kid even though he’s supposed to be an old sage internally. Secondly; The Academy Arc makes no sense because of how Mc is treated despite being of nobility Thirdly; Cliche routes like Demons and Academy being implemented Fourthly; The reasons behind some of Mc’s seemingly risky/immature actions Lastly; The story’s progression To answer those major criticisms, I have made this Review. Answer 1: If you’ve ever watched Black Clover, or some similar Anime, you tend to notice some old personalities who act immature at times. An example is Julius Novachrono. Thanks to his love of Magic, and his goofy personality, he acts like a child sometimes. However, no one can deny how epic he is when he needs to be. That’s exactly the same as the MC. If you’re patient enough and just accept this aspect of him, you’ll love his character more He’s meant to be more relatable and expressive. Don’t expect an ‘Ayanokoji’ for the MC He behaves childish sometimes, but he really isn’t. Those who have gone further in the story (especially the third arc) can testify to this. Answer 2: Ainzlark Academy is purely meritocratic Even the Prince of the Kingdom attends, and the only reason he’s regarded well is because of his talent for Magic. The MC’s path to success isn’t known by anyone, so they would naturally ostracize him by their standards But, it isn’t permanent, so please… don’t get too annoyed. Answer 3: This novel may seem cliche from the start, but it’s nothing like that at all. Some argue that the Academy was unnecessary, but that’s a lie. If you read the story well, you’ll understand why I went down that route. As for Demons, it’s not as simple as many works have depicted their existence. Again, you need to read the story to find out. Answer 4: The MC is very smart. If you’ve reached the third arc, you’ll understand this perfectly well. Even from the first arc, you begin to see traces of his intelligence. Not just Magic, but strategy and knowledge in other fields. But, some of his actions may seem a little off. Please do not impulsively judge Many people dropped the book at first arc because they were too stuck up with their belief of the MC Unknown to many, in the third arc, the MC explains the rationale behind his seemingly rash action. Everything the MC does has a reason. I don’t mean he’s perfect and he’s always right. But… he’s not stupid. Answer 5: At some point, I changed the POV. Criticisms appeared because I didn’t focus on the MC for some chapters. But, please understand that he’s not the only important person in the story. Other important characters will be introduced. I certainly hope you enjoy this story. Cheers
I realy tried, got about 200 chapters in but ye it just doesn’t get better. The MC is supposed to be this legend in his past life but is incapable of having even a modicum of maturity. He literally acts his age in his current life, whether it be 7 or 12, it’s almost like the Author is still a kid writing this novel, if that’s the case honestly good for you because for a kid it’s not too bad. If you really are a kid writing this novel, it would make sense why you are incapable of writing a character with the perspective of someone who was an old man with an insane amount of knowledge in his past life, and I apologize for even writing this review but if I could give some advice, just try writing a novel with a character around your own age therefor it seems more genuine instead of a reincarnation novel until you have grown up a bit and have some more life experience yourself.
this novel is good i first thought that this was boring or some things were not adding up in around chapter 800 but the story take turn i read it some months ago and now i miss it bcz there are no novels related to pure magic like this the other novels only portray a certain aspects of magic not whole core version or anything like that well what can we say i will just read this novel one more time when i am free
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I’m confused about the lack of 1 stars, does author just remove reviews? Fatal flaws of this novel -Author bastardizes the narrative. Alot of the ideas are good but a lot are too drawn out, too skipped, and author LOVES lying as the narrator. Also the writing of the novel is like the author picking the writing style he likes from 1000 different novels and applying it to a certain specific paragraph each time. Author has no consistent style. Am I getting Japanese Beta MC or Xianxia ruthless psycho this chapter? I don’t know! -The amount of times MC bulges his eyes each chapter. Author must have a kink for bulging eyes. -The amount of people who stutter. A trained assassin stuttering one word? Mc stutters a lot too. -The collosal amount of CRINGE. -The amount of chapters wasted for useless events. Why would they even steal food for WHAT? -Author doesnt build on how to do spells. No explanation just heres a fireball.
This book is honestly amazing. I love the way the MC acts more like what you would expect from someone that has truly gone through a previous life compared to those that seem to truly regress and simply start at a square one in both mentality and intellect. My only complaint which is more of a biased opinion would be that the time progression is incredibly slow making it hard to look at this book as a weak-to-strong type of read. Yes the story of his previous life gives us that but the story of his current life shows that he get OP rather quick and doesn’t have that obscenely hard start of weakness that you would expect. But over all the story is awesome I am already in the mid 300s in chapters and I cannot say there is anything bad about this book. P.S. there seems to be a desire for romance with all these girls that are showing interest in MC and i would love for that to happen but that again comes with the slow time elapsing so it’s understandable just another reason i wish he was already 18+ after reading this far in so i can see these relationships blossom or fall.
Cool novel, at least from what I read. I'm having trouble unlocking chaps even when I have coins. I'll just give my gifts then....... What a drag.......Honestly
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Reaaaaally good....until the bet. No spoilers but it is what it is. Magic is honestly the best selling point of this book not the characters. They aren't bad but not good. Honest opinion.
Excellent writing. Horribly slow story pacing. Character background and development could have used more work. All in all, good.
Has the romance already started? Any lemons in the works? .................................................................................................................................
One of the best , i trully loved thus manhwa , good mc , not too op , smart but what i trully loved was the arc of his past and the arc after that, really good twist , all thanks to the author for this chef d oeuvre
It's a story that starts great, then becomes even better. Great character development and world building, and an author who actively interacts with his readers. I definitely recommend it.
fml yandere? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
I've read about 500 chapters and I gotta say, although its good, it didn't really capture my interest enough to continue reading it. The constant timeskips, especially the 3 year one after the academy arc, really soured things in my opinion. Spending years and years just focused on magic, no wonder he turned out like that. Anyways, it's just whatever now and I have enjoyed at least the first 200 chapters so I have nothing too egregious to say here. Just that it's good, that's all.
I really enjoy reading all of the free chapters. I wish there was a choice were I can buy the whole book instead of buying in pieces/chapters. I would like to give a higher rating but I'm unable to read the further chapter for rating stability. also the action writing in this book make up for the average of description in environment. Still I enjoy this story and hope this one become a free read.[img=recommend]
i'm a type of a person who just read and continue until a hundred or more, so in my opinion some of you reader should try this story. I highly recommended it.!!!
Do you even know what overpowered is?it means he is stronger than his foe.if he gets defeated easily why do put that tag.by what you said you should put the weak to strong tag right?And just to be clear you want to create a novel which is life like and feels real but it feels forced and the mc crying is really petetic .I mean adults can cry but your writing a novel here and by making the mc cry and becoming cuckold it just want be to drop the novel.
The story itself is a good story, overall quality is great, so don't get me wrong with what I'm about to say. The writing style is infuriating. Just to get that "ohh" reaction out of the reader, the author will leave out information that is explained sometimes in the same chapter or even worse just to seem like the MC or sometimes the other points of view are acting. For example if you read chapter 29-37 you will understand what I mean. This style of writing is pervasive throughout the novel. If I wasn't somewhat invested in the story I would have dropped it.
I want to give a 5-star review but I decided not to. I'm afraid the author would be distracted causing delayed chapters.
pros( for me ).~ chapters are short ~ magic is better discussed ~it manage to pull something beyond my prediction ~world background and story development is good.cons( for me)~ relationships are too realistic and i don't like realistic love, ana claim she love jarad but still kissed other guy. i was hoping she won't end up with him and thankfully it didn't .~ characters are somewhat poorly written ~power scaling is too bad.
How does one evolve after reaching the golden core mana level limit without having multiple cores. The special and unlimited core but and the golden core.
mages have increased life expectancy or not they only live a hundred years like any human ...............................................,.................................................
I'd recommend reading this. The start is a bit shaky, but overall it's still enjoyable. Of course, there are still problems with the novel, but I think they are minor enough to ignore. Here are some of my personal things that I find could have been done better. 1. The world is building. I believe the world building had so much more potential. It's not bad, but it could have been way better, I think. 2. The age of the characters. No matter how much I try and imagine it, a bunch of 16-year-olds trying to save the world is ridiculous. Well, this is not much of a problem, but it just felt like that one itch you can't reach. 3. Honestly, the relationships. At one point, they are extremely fickle, but the next, they are so absurdly complicated that you question why they even began. MC and Maria had a good relationship until Succubus had to come in and ruin it. I'm scared my ship might sink. 4. The fights. They were good, but speed was never mentioned, so I always found myself struggling to imagine them properly. As I said, these are my personal problems, and I don't think many people will have a problem with them. Anyway, all in all, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for all the hard work, author, and thanks for the enjoyable novel. I'm going to continue reading this.
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Great story. Post-timeskip is where the story really picks up the pace and gets interesting. Read up to chapter 381 so far, and I’m loving it.
The story is decent. Good writing, well defined concepts and all. The Mc's character is not the one for me. Overall the story is great you might want to give it a try. You might like it or not but it depends from person to person. Not everyone likes tea even though it's better than coffee. @-@ Tea is better than coffee fight me.
This is probably a very good story and such, but I've read so many of these types of stories that I'm kinda up to my limit. And when I find one like this, which seems very promising, I can't really make myself try it. Maybe I'll come back to this, I'll add it to library I guess, but I feel like its just one of those usual mage reincarnation stories, and though I'm pretty sure I'm wrong, I can't do nothing about it. From what I've seen of the reviews, you've written quite a good book, so I might as well compliment you for that. Good day.
i just finished the 3rd arc I think and the world is fascinating. I love how the characters have developed and interact and the writing has been on point since very early on. I highly recommend giving this one a go.
An exceptional story. I started without any expectation and it gripped hard. This is a hidden gem. Very good work mister author. I would love to read more. I wrote this review just because author requested readers to review more in one of the chapters. I hope i can support author as much i can.
Decent concept, Interesting characters that are mostly fleshed out. It has some of the small issues of a boy with the mind of an old man not acting his age from time to time. However overall does an above average portrayal of this compared to most authors. However things very quickly go down hill because the author decides to do a massive time skip. Removing basically any chance the main character has to grow both in power and emotionally. I stuck with it to around chapter 500 because I genuinely enjoyed the beginning and was excited to see the growing phase. Unfortunately the author never really managed to capture my attention again after this. The writing is not very gripping or suspenseful. Like sure there is "supposedly" some sinister plan going on in the background. But there's no sense of urgency. The villains all fall flat, and the author doesn't really do a very good job at holding your interest. The whole novel reads closer to a slice of life with a harem of underage women than anything else. Overall I think boys aged 15 and under would find enjoyment in this story as it reads more like a harem of underage characters than anything deeper. Overall I'd say great characters and world building but terrible execution. Definitely a below average read.
At first when I started reading this novel, I was going in blind, sort off. Only glossed over the synopsis and was interesting enough so I started to read. I was surprised about the subtle plot twists and turns, it betrayed every expectation I had, truly a nice surprise. What I like most about this novel is the suspension, it really held me on the edge of my seat. The MC is also very smart and calculating, another plus. As I'm writing this review from chapter 42, I'm curious to see how this story develops. Anyways author-san, keep up the good work!
What you need to know before reading: - The protagonist is not super OP, reincarnated with SSS+ talent, he doesn't have a super strong system, he doesn't find a divine artifact that improves his body, he won't be the strongest in the kingdom in chapter 100... The protagonist reincarnates in a body with low talent for magic but, with his superior knowledge of the past life, he will surpass all others. - Because of the above, the pace of the story is a little slow, and that's fine with me. The protagonist's strength building is more realistic. He will also learn new things, after all he now has the theory and practice of magic. - The protagonist's personality is a bit arrogant... ...ok, fine! he is arrogant. But as the chapters go by, this characteristic diminishes and stays at a good level. After all, he reached the top of magical theories in his past life without having magic! So it's normal for him to be a little arrogant, isn't it? - From what I read, I believe that the protagonist is not a good guy and not a bad guy. I think he is aligned with the "neutral". If he has to kill, he will kill, but he's not a psychopath. - At the beginning of the work, the author is a little lacking in the physical descriptions of the characters, making it difficult and even impossible to visualize them mentally. His mother's mental image is a woman with big balloons where she suffocates the mc. Later the author improves in this area, so rest assured. - The protagonist will not be a lone wolf. He will have allies. Stay calm! They will not be burdens. - The writing is good. It is still necessary to know more things about the world... Cultures, regions, religions if they exist... I don't know if there are other races like elves, dwarves, etc, but it's at the beginning of the work so that's for later. - There are some "Slice of Life" parts in the story that are nice and funny. They help you relax a little and not overwhelm readers with information at all times. hmmm I think that's it for now. This review was based up to chapter 150. Keep up the good work, author. ^^
Reveal Spoiler After clocking over three hundred chapters, I will be giving my novel a Review. Firstly, I would like to say that while I am the author, my opinions on this book isn’t just based on bias. It’s a wonderful and interesting story. I have received a few criticisms, of which I will be addressing here. As readers, you should also be prepared to see these factors. So that you’re not caught off guard, let me explain a few things. [Sp0iler Alert] *Some things mentioned may contain mild sp0ilers* Firstly; The MC acts like a kid even though he’s supposed to be an old sage internally. Secondly; The Academy Arc makes no sense because of how Mc is treated despite being of nobility Thirdly; Cliche routes like Demons and Academy being implemented Fourthly; The reasons behind some of Mc’s seemingly risky/immature actions Lastly; The story’s progression To answer those major criticisms, I have made this Review. Answer 1: If you’ve ever watched Black Clover, or some similar Anime, you tend to notice some old personalities who act immature at times. An example is Julius Novachrono. Thanks to his love of Magic, and his goofy personality, he acts like a child sometimes. However, no one can deny how epic he is when he needs to be. That’s exactly the same as the MC. If you’re patient enough and just accept this aspect of him, you’ll love his character more He’s meant to be more relatable and expressive. Don’t expect an ‘Ayanokoji’ for the MC He behaves childish sometimes, but he really isn’t. Those who have gone further in the story (especially the third arc) can testify to this. Answer 2: Ainzlark Academy is purely meritocratic Even the Prince of the Kingdom attends, and the only reason he’s regarded well is because of his talent for Magic. The MC’s path to success isn’t known by anyone, so they would naturally ostracize him by their standards But, it isn’t permanent, so please… don’t get too annoyed. Answer 3: This novel may seem cliche from the start, but it’s nothing like that at all. Some argue that the Academy was unnecessary, but that’s a lie. If you read the story well, you’ll understand why I went down that route. As for Demons, it’s not as simple as many works have depicted their existence. Again, you need to read the story to find out. Answer 4: The MC is very smart. If you’ve reached the third arc, you’ll understand this perfectly well. Even from the first arc, you begin to see traces of his intelligence. Not just Magic, but strategy and knowledge in other fields. But, some of his actions may seem a little off. Please do not impulsively judge Many people dropped the book at first arc because they were too stuck up with their belief of the MC Unknown to many, in the third arc, the MC explains the rationale behind his seemingly rash action. Everything the MC does has a reason. I don’t mean he’s perfect and he’s always right. But… he’s not stupid. Answer 5: At some point, I changed the POV. Criticisms appeared because I didn’t focus on the MC for some chapters. But, please understand that he’s not the only important person in the story. Other important characters will be introduced. I certainly hope you enjoy this story. Cheers
I realy tried, got about 200 chapters in but ye it just doesn’t get better. The MC is supposed to be this legend in his past life but is incapable of having even a modicum of maturity. He literally acts his age in his current life, whether it be 7 or 12, it’s almost like the Author is still a kid writing this novel, if that’s the case honestly good for you because for a kid it’s not too bad. If you really are a kid writing this novel, it would make sense why you are incapable of writing a character with the perspective of someone who was an old man with an insane amount of knowledge in his past life, and I apologize for even writing this review but if I could give some advice, just try writing a novel with a character around your own age therefor it seems more genuine instead of a reincarnation novel until you have grown up a bit and have some more life experience yourself.
this novel is good i first thought that this was boring or some things were not adding up in around chapter 800 but the story take turn i read it some months ago and now i miss it bcz there are no novels related to pure magic like this the other novels only portray a certain aspects of magic not whole core version or anything like that well what can we say i will just read this novel one more time when i am free
Reveal Spoiler I’m confused about the lack of 1 stars, does author just remove reviews? Fatal flaws of this novel -Author bastardizes the narrative. Alot of the ideas are good but a lot are too drawn out, too skipped, and author LOVES lying as the narrator. Also the writing of the novel is like the author picking the writing style he likes from 1000 different novels and applying it to a certain specific paragraph each time. Author has no consistent style. Am I getting Japanese Beta MC or Xianxia ruthless psycho this chapter? I don’t know! -The amount of times MC bulges his eyes each chapter. Author must have a kink for bulging eyes. -The amount of people who stutter. A trained assassin stuttering one word? Mc stutters a lot too. -The collosal amount of CRINGE. -The amount of chapters wasted for useless events. Why would they even steal food for WHAT? -Author doesnt build on how to do spells. No explanation just heres a fireball.
This book is honestly amazing. I love the way the MC acts more like what you would expect from someone that has truly gone through a previous life compared to those that seem to truly regress and simply start at a square one in both mentality and intellect. My only complaint which is more of a biased opinion would be that the time progression is incredibly slow making it hard to look at this book as a weak-to-strong type of read. Yes the story of his previous life gives us that but the story of his current life shows that he get OP rather quick and doesn’t have that obscenely hard start of weakness that you would expect. But over all the story is awesome I am already in the mid 300s in chapters and I cannot say there is anything bad about this book. P.S. there seems to be a desire for romance with all these girls that are showing interest in MC and i would love for that to happen but that again comes with the slow time elapsing so it’s understandable just another reason i wish he was already 18+ after reading this far in so i can see these relationships blossom or fall.
Cool novel, at least from what I read. I'm having trouble unlocking chaps even when I have coins. I'll just give my gifts then....... What a drag.......Honestly
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Reaaaaally good....until the bet. No spoilers but it is what it is. Magic is honestly the best selling point of this book not the characters. They aren't bad but not good. Honest opinion.
Excellent writing. Horribly slow story pacing. Character background and development could have used more work. All in all, good.
Has the romance already started? Any lemons in the works? .................................................................................................................................
One of the best , i trully loved thus manhwa , good mc , not too op , smart but what i trully loved was the arc of his past and the arc after that, really good twist , all thanks to the author for this chef d oeuvre
It's a story that starts great, then becomes even better. Great character development and world building, and an author who actively interacts with his readers. I definitely recommend it.
fml yandere? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
I've read about 500 chapters and I gotta say, although its good, it didn't really capture my interest enough to continue reading it. The constant timeskips, especially the 3 year one after the academy arc, really soured things in my opinion. Spending years and years just focused on magic, no wonder he turned out like that. Anyways, it's just whatever now and I have enjoyed at least the first 200 chapters so I have nothing too egregious to say here. Just that it's good, that's all.
I really enjoy reading all of the free chapters. I wish there was a choice were I can buy the whole book instead of buying in pieces/chapters. I would like to give a higher rating but I'm unable to read the further chapter for rating stability. also the action writing in this book make up for the average of description in environment. Still I enjoy this story and hope this one become a free read.[img=recommend]
i'm a type of a person who just read and continue until a hundred or more, so in my opinion some of you reader should try this story. I highly recommended it.!!!
Do you even know what overpowered is?it means he is stronger than his foe.if he gets defeated easily why do put that tag.by what you said you should put the weak to strong tag right?And just to be clear you want to create a novel which is life like and feels real but it feels forced and the mc crying is really petetic .I mean adults can cry but your writing a novel here and by making the mc cry and becoming cuckold it just want be to drop the novel.
The story itself is a good story, overall quality is great, so don't get me wrong with what I'm about to say. The writing style is infuriating. Just to get that "ohh" reaction out of the reader, the author will leave out information that is explained sometimes in the same chapter or even worse just to seem like the MC or sometimes the other points of view are acting. For example if you read chapter 29-37 you will understand what I mean. This style of writing is pervasive throughout the novel. If I wasn't somewhat invested in the story I would have dropped it.
I want to give a 5-star review but I decided not to. I'm afraid the author would be distracted causing delayed chapters.
pros( for me ).~ chapters are short ~ magic is better discussed ~it manage to pull something beyond my prediction ~world background and story development is good.cons( for me)~ relationships are too realistic and i don't like realistic love, ana claim she love jarad but still kissed other guy. i was hoping she won't end up with him and thankfully it didn't .~ characters are somewhat poorly written ~power scaling is too bad.
How does one evolve after reaching the golden core mana level limit without having multiple cores. The special and unlimited core but and the golden core.
mages have increased life expectancy or not they only live a hundred years like any human ...............................................,.................................................
I'd recommend reading this. The start is a bit shaky, but overall it's still enjoyable. Of course, there are still problems with the novel, but I think they are minor enough to ignore. Here are some of my personal things that I find could have been done better. 1. The world is building. I believe the world building had so much more potential. It's not bad, but it could have been way better, I think. 2. The age of the characters. No matter how much I try and imagine it, a bunch of 16-year-olds trying to save the world is ridiculous. Well, this is not much of a problem, but it just felt like that one itch you can't reach. 3. Honestly, the relationships. At one point, they are extremely fickle, but the next, they are so absurdly complicated that you question why they even began. MC and Maria had a good relationship until Succubus had to come in and ruin it. I'm scared my ship might sink. 4. The fights. They were good, but speed was never mentioned, so I always found myself struggling to imagine them properly. As I said, these are my personal problems, and I don't think many people will have a problem with them. Anyway, all in all, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for all the hard work, author, and thanks for the enjoyable novel. I'm going to continue reading this.
Reveal Spoiler Great story. Post-timeskip is where the story really picks up the pace and gets interesting. Read up to chapter 381 so far, and I’m loving it.
The story is decent. Good writing, well defined concepts and all. The Mc's character is not the one for me. Overall the story is great you might want to give it a try. You might like it or not but it depends from person to person. Not everyone likes tea even though it's better than coffee. @-@ Tea is better than coffee fight me.
This is probably a very good story and such, but I've read so many of these types of stories that I'm kinda up to my limit. And when I find one like this, which seems very promising, I can't really make myself try it. Maybe I'll come back to this, I'll add it to library I guess, but I feel like its just one of those usual mage reincarnation stories, and though I'm pretty sure I'm wrong, I can't do nothing about it. From what I've seen of the reviews, you've written quite a good book, so I might as well compliment you for that. Good day.
i just finished the 3rd arc I think and the world is fascinating. I love how the characters have developed and interact and the writing has been on point since very early on. I highly recommend giving this one a go.
An exceptional story. I started without any expectation and it gripped hard. This is a hidden gem. Very good work mister author. I would love to read more. I wrote this review just because author requested readers to review more in one of the chapters. I hope i can support author as much i can.
Decent concept, Interesting characters that are mostly fleshed out. It has some of the small issues of a boy with the mind of an old man not acting his age from time to time. However overall does an above average portrayal of this compared to most authors. However things very quickly go down hill because the author decides to do a massive time skip. Removing basically any chance the main character has to grow both in power and emotionally. I stuck with it to around chapter 500 because I genuinely enjoyed the beginning and was excited to see the growing phase. Unfortunately the author never really managed to capture my attention again after this. The writing is not very gripping or suspenseful. Like sure there is "supposedly" some sinister plan going on in the background. But there's no sense of urgency. The villains all fall flat, and the author doesn't really do a very good job at holding your interest. The whole novel reads closer to a slice of life with a harem of underage women than anything else. Overall I think boys aged 15 and under would find enjoyment in this story as it reads more like a harem of underage characters than anything deeper. Overall I'd say great characters and world building but terrible execution. Definitely a below average read.
At first when I started reading this novel, I was going in blind, sort off. Only glossed over the synopsis and was interesting enough so I started to read. I was surprised about the subtle plot twists and turns, it betrayed every expectation I had, truly a nice surprise. What I like most about this novel is the suspension, it really held me on the edge of my seat. The MC is also very smart and calculating, another plus. As I'm writing this review from chapter 42, I'm curious to see how this story develops. Anyways author-san, keep up the good work!