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The inserts about how games are made seem unnecessary, alien, out of place, and out of place. And remembering how many threats there are in the world, it's dangerous and stupid. It looks like a simple placeholder. If you throw out this strange insert and the canon of the world, you'll be left with a hero who hangs around like... in an ice hole, sometimes sticking somewhere. (And his plans, of course, always go as they should) The hero's story itself is pathetic, if there is one, of course. What's the conflict, where's the personal plot?
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The story is about Venom and the DC Universe, but you don't want or have the ideas to write so you're stuffing the game industry. You should call the story a remake of the games in another universe.
Enjoying it so far. Loved smallvillè as well. The story entertains the idea of being a symbiote in a mixed dc universe yet being a former modern person(isekai/reincarnated). Its interesting to see him obtain powers not for the purpose of fighting but enjoying life and surviving
A fanfic tá muito bom mas acho que vc deveria tentar fazer mais capítulos e desenvolver mais o personagem por enquanto parece que ele só está seguindo o roteiro com os outros personagens.
MC focuses on video games and minimal interference on major dc events. Slow progression style story and no evil psycho mc's here. $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Im in love, its not cringy he's not trying to ruin the hero's origin story and he wants them to learn and improve and he not evil. let me say it again he is not EVIL, do you realize how much scrum i have to shift through to find diamonds like this to much i tell you please friend author dont abandon us so many great novels just disappear suddenly
Enjoying it so far. Loved smallvillè as well. The story entertains the idea of being a symbiote in a mixed dc universe yet being a former modern person(isekai/reincarnated). Its interesting to see him obtain powers not for the purpose of fighting but enjoying life and surviving
wish that you can put the Marvel Characters in this series. Let's see: -Spiderman (Miles Moralles) in Gotham. -Tony Stark will get ring lantern. -Steve Roger having role like Night Fury -ect.
ok this is something different i like it. as it is still early to give a full review I'll leave it here for the time being. i recommend giving a Try
decent story so far, hope it gets better from here, this has made me want to see how much of a beast batman would be with a symbiote that actually fully bonds with him would be so if anyone writes a story like that or has written a story like that please let me know
Love the storyline and character development. Enjoy how the write has include some of my favorite dc series. Like he fact the story is more about the MC enjoying and taking advantage of his second life, and being more grounded, then OP. Wish the writer would continue and finish the story.
The inserts about how games are made seem unnecessary, alien, out of place, and out of place. And remembering how many threats there are in the world, it's dangerous and stupid. It looks like a simple placeholder. If you throw out this strange insert and the canon of the world, you'll be left with a hero who hangs around like... in an ice hole, sometimes sticking somewhere. (And his plans, of course, always go as they should) The hero's story itself is pathetic, if there is one, of course. What's the conflict, where's the personal plot?
Reveal Spoiler The story is about Venom and the DC Universe, but you don't want or have the ideas to write so you're stuffing the game industry. You should call the story a remake of the games in another universe.
Enjoying it so far. Loved smallvillè as well. The story entertains the idea of being a symbiote in a mixed dc universe yet being a former modern person(isekai/reincarnated). Its interesting to see him obtain powers not for the purpose of fighting but enjoying life and surviving
A fanfic tá muito bom mas acho que vc deveria tentar fazer mais capítulos e desenvolver mais o personagem por enquanto parece que ele só está seguindo o roteiro com os outros personagens.
MC focuses on video games and minimal interference on major dc events. Slow progression style story and no evil psycho mc's here. $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Im in love, its not cringy he's not trying to ruin the hero's origin story and he wants them to learn and improve and he not evil. let me say it again he is not EVIL, do you realize how much scrum i have to shift through to find diamonds like this to much i tell you please friend author dont abandon us so many great novels just disappear suddenly
Enjoying it so far. Loved smallvillè as well. The story entertains the idea of being a symbiote in a mixed dc universe yet being a former modern person(isekai/reincarnated). Its interesting to see him obtain powers not for the purpose of fighting but enjoying life and surviving
wish that you can put the Marvel Characters in this series. Let's see: -Spiderman (Miles Moralles) in Gotham. -Tony Stark will get ring lantern. -Steve Roger having role like Night Fury -ect.
ok this is something different i like it. as it is still early to give a full review I'll leave it here for the time being. i recommend giving a Try
decent story so far, hope it gets better from here, this has made me want to see how much of a beast batman would be with a symbiote that actually fully bonds with him would be so if anyone writes a story like that or has written a story like that please let me know
Love the storyline and character development. Enjoy how the write has include some of my favorite dc series. Like he fact the story is more about the MC enjoying and taking advantage of his second life, and being more grounded, then OP. Wish the writer would continue and finish the story.