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Writing Quality: it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole. Story Development: I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it. Character Design: The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits. Updating Stability: Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged. World Background: For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
one of the best book on this platform by far the world building is top notch along with just rt pace for the story all characters are unique and charecter development is excellent exept rt at the start where ryu charecter takes a sudden shift but it's not that problematic the side side charecter also hv their own life stories and u can feel they hv been built up with care and a lot of thinking the suspence in the story is quite good and the author is very profound in touching the rt emotion at the rt time am so glad I came across this bk ;) am still having some confusion about the mate bond stuff but ig it'll get explained later on the only dissapointment is the update stability I hv finished reading all the chs for almost 3 weeks but still no new chs author if u hv dropped the bk plz let me know tho its such a shame for such an awesome bk🥺
it was somewhat nice novel. great world building, the author make an interesting world. the main character start as weak character, but I really dint mind that because the author give a good development to the mc. keep writing, author.
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I found the novel very interesting indeed, please keep posting. It's been 2 months and I don't know if the Author dropped. Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
i hate you i hate Cecilia i hate your entire freakin concept Threw in the towel at chap 45, started skimming chapter after around chap 10, basically skipped entire chapters after 25 VERDICT: One of the best authora out here, i just hate your guts, it aint for me
Great character development throughout the book, all the interactions between the different characters are amazing and the plot and world building are one of the most interesting ive read.
Okay so I read 23 chapters, and a few reviews. And being a slave.. no thanks, you can say 'will be a turning point' and bs like this. Okay read it for 300 chapters and it would maybe be good, but I won't torture myself for what, 200 chapters?
Very good story...........,.,.,.,.,.,,,,,,,..,.,.,...,.,.....,,.,,...,,,,..,,,..,,........,,,..,,...,,,..,.,..,....,,......,..........,,,,......,,
so Basically MC is servant of rich lady. The master can basically kill her servant with a thought. I'm not reading this😂. ....................
hi author I hope you read this 😃 please....but anyways I love 💕 this book so much😄...but😐Ryu's mate is such a turn off TBH...I know things might change cause am still in volume one and the story goes on but whenever I read this book Cecily mistreats Ryu and she even hit Ferris for like helping hime why can't Ryu break the mate bond or something at least Ferris would deserve it unlike Cecily 😃it's such a good book but UHM Cecily doesn't deserve Ryu and the way Ryu blamed Ferris for saving that chic that she killed I honestly feel😐...can I say kinda betrayed that he sided with Cecily and not Ferris the person who ever cared enough about him🌄🥺
Enjoyable read however, people may get turned off from the beginning. MC has problems with his slavery and mate pairing to an unlikeable character(not main FMC). This is only prominent within the first volume and even after 20 chapters from the start, it lessens a considerable amount and was quite tolerable. The mate idea so far is a subplot to many different characters and doesn't entirely effect MC's decision making. It is well worth it to push onto Vol 2 and 3. *For people who don't like her, she hasn't been the main focus nor frequently appearing in vol 2 and 3.* The story itself is well written and fight scenes are good. There is a lot of gore and dark elements in the story. World building is slowly built and explained through conversations. There's not much info dumping if any. Some POV changes but not much for people who don't like them still good providing other characters thoughts. Characters are good, some are unlikeable, and unredeemable while you have there counterparts. Variety of different characters and people actually die for their own choices and actions. There are consequences even for the MC. The MC himself is naïve and curious about the world considering his whole life has been in a coliseum. He makes mistakes and learns from them. A story of his journey and self discovery would definitely recommend, well deserved rating.
I don't think it's 5 but there are so many novels that have good ratings, even though they are bad, that this one deserves it. It has well-made characters and a world with potential
I wish I could give 10 stars for this novel this novel can almost be considered in the same level as published fantasy novels out there Characters are well designed we see lots of character growth
I really don't know what to say. This is a nice read for anyone who enjoys beast wars and incredible fights with blood baths. It even has pictures attached to it, so it helps you picture the story more.
I have no comments on this because it’s just WOW. Tbh I could never write well like this with so much description of each person and world. And I love the fact that you put pics for readers to easily imagine the description.😍 Love it💚
Well, to be honest -- I am not into fantasy stuff. BUT this story is so unique and amazing. The descriptions are so clear and crisp. I must say -- AUTHOR, KEEP UPLOADING MORE CHAPTERS!! Your readers wants more.
Hi author👋, Just read some chapters and I'm already loving it, the plot looks interesting the story telling is perfect I couldn't stop myself from reading more keep up with your good work best of luck💚
Incredible story with characters that reflect their own personalities. Beautiful descriptions and the pictures illustrate well the author's world backround. The main character is engaging and I look forward to seeing where he takes me. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Well...where to start? Oh my god! I loved the story from the get go, well I started to read the first chapter I was like "the world building is amazing" and "the author is emphasizing the darkness of the setting, I wonder why?" and then I knew. Not going to lie, my tolerance for heavy themes had went down over the years and I thought I was over the phase. But now, I feel like I am 14-15 again, readong things I shouldn't. The gore. The nudity The slavery. I hate it all, and so I love to read it all😶🙄 Mor! I want more! 😂
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A must read book!! I love the pics author had attached in between, it helps clear the understanding better. Cecily is beautiful beyond words, but arrogant at the same time. Author has truly succeeded in creating a fascinating world background!! Guys do give it a read!!🙌🤗
I like the character arc for Ryu. The world building is impressive to say the least! Miunovels has indeed put in a lot of effort into describing the scenes and I love the pictures she adds to some of the scenes, it makes it all come alive. I would totally want to read on to find out what happens. Keep up the good work author!
Worldbuilding: World-building is one of the best web novels so far based on my reading experience. It had vivid imagery, a well-detailed description of each place, and an enlivened atmosphere, especially on the coliseum scene. Even this novel has a lot of variety with races such as human, elf, and many more. Character: I do like that all the characters in this novel are very diverse, not only the race, but they appear too. Each of them is very distinct from one another. I am also very gladful that the author gives some pictures about the character's appearance which is very impressive. Even the personality of the characters is also distinct too. However, there is one nitpicky opinion from mine and I am very sorry to say this. Sometimes the author put's an infodump to describe the character's personality or the introduction such as the background. Instead, I want the character introduction more into showing such as either on dialogue and action that the character did. So it can make the character more flesh out and fascinating. As for the main character, Ryu, I actually really like his cold personality and his less-talking demeanor. However, I believe the author will show more context about his backstory and even a significant development that I can't wait to see later chapters. Another praise I want to give is the very smooth and fluid writing. Especially on the sentence structuring, the imaginative word usages, and even the good grammar. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and this is one that has very good potential on the top ranking in Webnovel. Thank you and keep up the good work!!!
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Warning for those thinking of reading, stopped at chp 29. The mc is mate bonded to a spoil abusive princess, basically he's like her dog that she can kick around because of it. If I knew this before hand I would never have read it, but since I didn't, I read a bit more than I normally would because of the potential I thought it had if only the author didn't decide to go in such an annoying direction. I may check back in the far in the future to see how it turns out once that distasteful element is gone.
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Interesting so far. I have only read the first few chapters, but what should I say? I am hooked. Mc's character design is pretty good. The setting is cool. Great work. Highly recommended.
The writing is good, scenes are a little messy, but the captivating difference in each character shows your understanding of the plot. The development is stable. Overall, good job.
please read. I'm just going to clarify that the mate in here is an important plot point but the story doesnt revolve around it. this is about word buildings. lores. epic adventure. action with game elements sprinkled with slow romance. weak to strong mc and character development this is a long story with tons of charcaters and subplots. chapter 80 is hardly 1/8 of the story. do take it in mind when reading. a lot could still happen [img=recommend] if you like the story please add to library. votes, comments, reviews and gifts r always appreciated. [img=update] happy reading [img=recommend]
Writing Quality: it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole. Story Development: I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it. Character Design: The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits. Updating Stability: Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged. World Background: For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
one of the best book on this platform by far the world building is top notch along with just rt pace for the story all characters are unique and charecter development is excellent exept rt at the start where ryu charecter takes a sudden shift but it's not that problematic the side side charecter also hv their own life stories and u can feel they hv been built up with care and a lot of thinking the suspence in the story is quite good and the author is very profound in touching the rt emotion at the rt time am so glad I came across this bk ;) am still having some confusion about the mate bond stuff but ig it'll get explained later on the only dissapointment is the update stability I hv finished reading all the chs for almost 3 weeks but still no new chs author if u hv dropped the bk plz let me know tho its such a shame for such an awesome bk🥺
it was somewhat nice novel. great world building, the author make an interesting world. the main character start as weak character, but I really dint mind that because the author give a good development to the mc. keep writing, author.
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I found the novel very interesting indeed, please keep posting. It's been 2 months and I don't know if the Author dropped. Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
i hate you i hate Cecilia i hate your entire freakin concept Threw in the towel at chap 45, started skimming chapter after around chap 10, basically skipped entire chapters after 25 VERDICT: One of the best authora out here, i just hate your guts, it aint for me
Great character development throughout the book, all the interactions between the different characters are amazing and the plot and world building are one of the most interesting ive read.
Okay so I read 23 chapters, and a few reviews. And being a slave.. no thanks, you can say 'will be a turning point' and bs like this. Okay read it for 300 chapters and it would maybe be good, but I won't torture myself for what, 200 chapters?
Very good story...........,.,.,.,.,.,,,,,,,..,.,.,...,.,.....,,.,,...,,,,..,,,..,,........,,,..,,...,,,..,.,..,....,,......,..........,,,,......,,
so Basically MC is servant of rich lady. The master can basically kill her servant with a thought. I'm not reading this😂. ....................
hi author I hope you read this 😃 please....but anyways I love 💕 this book so much😄...but😐Ryu's mate is such a turn off TBH...I know things might change cause am still in volume one and the story goes on but whenever I read this book Cecily mistreats Ryu and she even hit Ferris for like helping hime why can't Ryu break the mate bond or something at least Ferris would deserve it unlike Cecily 😃it's such a good book but UHM Cecily doesn't deserve Ryu and the way Ryu blamed Ferris for saving that chic that she killed I honestly feel😐...can I say kinda betrayed that he sided with Cecily and not Ferris the person who ever cared enough about him🌄🥺
Enjoyable read however, people may get turned off from the beginning. MC has problems with his slavery and mate pairing to an unlikeable character(not main FMC). This is only prominent within the first volume and even after 20 chapters from the start, it lessens a considerable amount and was quite tolerable. The mate idea so far is a subplot to many different characters and doesn't entirely effect MC's decision making. It is well worth it to push onto Vol 2 and 3. *For people who don't like her, she hasn't been the main focus nor frequently appearing in vol 2 and 3.* The story itself is well written and fight scenes are good. There is a lot of gore and dark elements in the story. World building is slowly built and explained through conversations. There's not much info dumping if any. Some POV changes but not much for people who don't like them still good providing other characters thoughts. Characters are good, some are unlikeable, and unredeemable while you have there counterparts. Variety of different characters and people actually die for their own choices and actions. There are consequences even for the MC. The MC himself is naïve and curious about the world considering his whole life has been in a coliseum. He makes mistakes and learns from them. A story of his journey and self discovery would definitely recommend, well deserved rating.
I don't think it's 5 but there are so many novels that have good ratings, even though they are bad, that this one deserves it. It has well-made characters and a world with potential
I wish I could give 10 stars for this novel this novel can almost be considered in the same level as published fantasy novels out there Characters are well designed we see lots of character growth
I really don't know what to say. This is a nice read for anyone who enjoys beast wars and incredible fights with blood baths. It even has pictures attached to it, so it helps you picture the story more.
I have no comments on this because it’s just WOW. Tbh I could never write well like this with so much description of each person and world. And I love the fact that you put pics for readers to easily imagine the description.😍 Love it💚
Well, to be honest -- I am not into fantasy stuff. BUT this story is so unique and amazing. The descriptions are so clear and crisp. I must say -- AUTHOR, KEEP UPLOADING MORE CHAPTERS!! Your readers wants more.
Hi author👋, Just read some chapters and I'm already loving it, the plot looks interesting the story telling is perfect I couldn't stop myself from reading more keep up with your good work best of luck💚
Incredible story with characters that reflect their own personalities. Beautiful descriptions and the pictures illustrate well the author's world backround. The main character is engaging and I look forward to seeing where he takes me. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Well...where to start? Oh my god! I loved the story from the get go, well I started to read the first chapter I was like "the world building is amazing" and "the author is emphasizing the darkness of the setting, I wonder why?" and then I knew. Not going to lie, my tolerance for heavy themes had went down over the years and I thought I was over the phase. But now, I feel like I am 14-15 again, readong things I shouldn't. The gore. The nudity The slavery. I hate it all, and so I love to read it all😶🙄 Mor! I want more! 😂
Reveal Spoiler A must read book!! I love the pics author had attached in between, it helps clear the understanding better. Cecily is beautiful beyond words, but arrogant at the same time. Author has truly succeeded in creating a fascinating world background!! Guys do give it a read!!🙌🤗
I like the character arc for Ryu. The world building is impressive to say the least! Miunovels has indeed put in a lot of effort into describing the scenes and I love the pictures she adds to some of the scenes, it makes it all come alive. I would totally want to read on to find out what happens. Keep up the good work author!
Worldbuilding: World-building is one of the best web novels so far based on my reading experience. It had vivid imagery, a well-detailed description of each place, and an enlivened atmosphere, especially on the coliseum scene. Even this novel has a lot of variety with races such as human, elf, and many more. Character: I do like that all the characters in this novel are very diverse, not only the race, but they appear too. Each of them is very distinct from one another. I am also very gladful that the author gives some pictures about the character's appearance which is very impressive. Even the personality of the characters is also distinct too. However, there is one nitpicky opinion from mine and I am very sorry to say this. Sometimes the author put's an infodump to describe the character's personality or the introduction such as the background. Instead, I want the character introduction more into showing such as either on dialogue and action that the character did. So it can make the character more flesh out and fascinating. As for the main character, Ryu, I actually really like his cold personality and his less-talking demeanor. However, I believe the author will show more context about his backstory and even a significant development that I can't wait to see later chapters. Another praise I want to give is the very smooth and fluid writing. Especially on the sentence structuring, the imaginative word usages, and even the good grammar. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and this is one that has very good potential on the top ranking in Webnovel. Thank you and keep up the good work!!!
Reveal Spoiler Good.......,..........................................................,..........................................................,..........................................................,...................................................
Warning for those thinking of reading, stopped at chp 29. The mc is mate bonded to a spoil abusive princess, basically he's like her dog that she can kick around because of it. If I knew this before hand I would never have read it, but since I didn't, I read a bit more than I normally would because of the potential I thought it had if only the author didn't decide to go in such an annoying direction. I may check back in the far in the future to see how it turns out once that distasteful element is gone.
Reveal Spoiler Interesting so far. I have only read the first few chapters, but what should I say? I am hooked. Mc's character design is pretty good. The setting is cool. Great work. Highly recommended.
The writing is good, scenes are a little messy, but the captivating difference in each character shows your understanding of the plot. The development is stable. Overall, good job.
please read. I'm just going to clarify that the mate in here is an important plot point but the story doesnt revolve around it. this is about word buildings. lores. epic adventure. action with game elements sprinkled with slow romance. weak to strong mc and character development this is a long story with tons of charcaters and subplots. chapter 80 is hardly 1/8 of the story. do take it in mind when reading. a lot could still happen [img=recommend] if you like the story please add to library. votes, comments, reviews and gifts r always appreciated. [img=update] happy reading [img=recommend]