As I said in the past, this story is written NOT to be a serious writing. This story written in my break time between my busy schedule.
And also I already said, I did NOT accept NITPICKING on the story. After all I gain NO MONETARY benefit.
As this is the SECOND TIME this happens even tho it is NOT the same person that did the mistake, I'll stop posting if this happens for the THIRD TIME.
And as I said I only accept idea on how the STORY should PROGRESS.