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I like the background of kaguya and mc be childhood friends. As well as mc being smart. That's all, keep writing [img=recommend][img=recommend]
saya tau clan otsusuki itu buruk, tapi setidaknya ya Mc jangan terlalu kaku dan mengikuti sifat sejati otsusuki seperti mengorbankan teman sebagai sumber daya, yah dan saya harap kan disini MC setelah 4 tahun, dia akan pergi, yah saya harap MC pergi itu berkeliling dunia sambil memanen buah cakra atau engga mengepulkan kekuatan untuk menjadi dewa otsusuki
I like the background in the world of Naruto with the power of Otsutsuki, I hope this fanfic will continue to progress, not on hiatus, let alone be deleted immediately, I'm just giving advice, never take useless criticism to heart, this is your fanfic, you have the final right to make this fanfic like what, make it with your imagination, don't criticize other people especially those that don't make sense
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Aaaaaaa bagus sekali. Tema otsutsuki terbaik yang saya tahu. Lanjutkan sampai ahir, dan semangat. Ckck yooooo ayo ayo penulis ku ingin kamu banyak update.
I like the background of kaguya and mc be childhood friends. As well as mc being smart. That's all, keep writing [img=recommend][img=recommend]
saya tau clan otsusuki itu buruk, tapi setidaknya ya Mc jangan terlalu kaku dan mengikuti sifat sejati otsusuki seperti mengorbankan teman sebagai sumber daya, yah dan saya harap kan disini MC setelah 4 tahun, dia akan pergi, yah saya harap MC pergi itu berkeliling dunia sambil memanen buah cakra atau engga mengepulkan kekuatan untuk menjadi dewa otsusuki
I like the background in the world of Naruto with the power of Otsutsuki, I hope this fanfic will continue to progress, not on hiatus, let alone be deleted immediately, I'm just giving advice, never take useless criticism to heart, this is your fanfic, you have the final right to make this fanfic like what, make it with your imagination, don't criticize other people especially those that don't make sense
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Aaaaaaa bagus sekali. Tema otsutsuki terbaik yang saya tahu. Lanjutkan sampai ahir, dan semangat. Ckck yooooo ayo ayo penulis ku ingin kamu banyak update.