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This one of the best lotr fics I have ever read. I never felt bored reading it, nor could I predict how the story would go. The MC is an absolute a##hole, but also charasmatic, funny, and relatable. The only issue that I could see someone having with this fic (outside of some of the jokes) would be with how how short the chapters are. I honestly don't have an issue with it. The author does a good job making each chapter satisfying to read despite the lack of length.
The story is quite good. My only issue is that i came into it expecting it to be serious and have a plot line/goal but it does not. Theres no problem with that it just isnt what i expected when first clicking to read the story. Its full of humorous (orc big and strong) type jokes and whatnot but there doesnt seem to be an actual goal or flow to the story. MC absolutely rekts Talion, and then does it again, and again, and again….you get the idea. Thats ALL that happens storywise lol I’m currently 15 chapters into the story and will come back to read more at a later date. I think its worth the read if you know what to expect before hand.
can't recommend this enough, good writing, the story will keep you hooked [img=recommend]
This is a extremely solid fanfic the author has a solid understanding of the background, made sure that any debatable lore was made clear fleshed out in a good way and has kept the story and character both true to there buildup.
Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, I believe that this story idea has not fully been explored. I think the Thrag should use this opportunity to devlop orchish culture and society with schools, currency and a more civilan lifestyle for a regular orc with orcish spin. If you want orcs to be seen as a still evil and only male race maybe make it so that orcs can breed with different races of women like from goblin slayer, maybe giving more incentive to go raiding to capture women for faster gestation time and or women having a litter than longer single breeding pod.
well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others.well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others.well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others.
I really like the story and keep it up the way you have created the story makes a vivid setting for your merciles warlord uruk who combines humour bloodshed kingdom building and monster pets (the most important) The only issue is i want more
Sweet! So Sweet, The Sweetest Sweet thats ever Sweet'd. FLUFFY TOWELS! FLUFFY TOWELS! Sweeeet~ /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more,
shadow of mordor is basically grunts wet dream, sexy elven booty, brutal homies to turn into even more brutal homies of grimdark warhammer proportions. dark lords to brutalize and take the place of. Just an all around good time to be had with insane oversized beasties to tame, eat, and make cool stuff out of. with what seems to be a faith/following based power up system mordor will quickly turn from raving chaotic lunatics loosly slapped together in the shape of a cohesive army into a pinical of military industrial complex glory.
it very cool, very cool indeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeed
Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, I believe that this story idea has not fully been explored. I think the Thrag should use this opportunity to devlop orchish culture and society with schools, currency and a more civilan lifestyle for a regular orc with orcish spin. If you want orcs to be seen as a still evil and only male race maybe make it so that orcs can breed with different races of women like from goblin slayer, maybe giving more incentive to go raiding to capture women for faster gestation time and or women having a litter than longer single breeding pod.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Please please please please please
This one of the best lotr fics I have ever read. I never felt bored reading it, nor could I predict how the story would go. The MC is an absolute a##hole, but also charasmatic, funny, and relatable. The only issue that I could see someone having with this fic (outside of some of the jokes) would be with how how short the chapters are. I honestly don't have an issue with it. The author does a good job making each chapter satisfying to read despite the lack of length.
The story is quite good. My only issue is that i came into it expecting it to be serious and have a plot line/goal but it does not. Theres no problem with that it just isnt what i expected when first clicking to read the story. Its full of humorous (orc big and strong) type jokes and whatnot but there doesnt seem to be an actual goal or flow to the story. MC absolutely rekts Talion, and then does it again, and again, and again….you get the idea. Thats ALL that happens storywise lol I’m currently 15 chapters into the story and will come back to read more at a later date. I think its worth the read if you know what to expect before hand.
can't recommend this enough, good writing, the story will keep you hooked [img=recommend]
This is a extremely solid fanfic the author has a solid understanding of the background, made sure that any debatable lore was made clear fleshed out in a good way and has kept the story and character both true to there buildup.
Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, I believe that this story idea has not fully been explored. I think the Thrag should use this opportunity to devlop orchish culture and society with schools, currency and a more civilan lifestyle for a regular orc with orcish spin. If you want orcs to be seen as a still evil and only male race maybe make it so that orcs can breed with different races of women like from goblin slayer, maybe giving more incentive to go raiding to capture women for faster gestation time and or women having a litter than longer single breeding pod.
well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others.well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others.well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others.
I really like the story and keep it up the way you have created the story makes a vivid setting for your merciles warlord uruk who combines humour bloodshed kingdom building and monster pets (the most important) The only issue is i want more
Sweet! So Sweet, The Sweetest Sweet thats ever Sweet'd. FLUFFY TOWELS! FLUFFY TOWELS! Sweeeet~ /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, Great first few chapters can't wait to see more,
shadow of mordor is basically grunts wet dream, sexy elven booty, brutal homies to turn into even more brutal homies of grimdark warhammer proportions. dark lords to brutalize and take the place of. Just an all around good time to be had with insane oversized beasties to tame, eat, and make cool stuff out of. with what seems to be a faith/following based power up system mordor will quickly turn from raving chaotic lunatics loosly slapped together in the shape of a cohesive army into a pinical of military industrial complex glory.
it very cool, very cool indeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeed
Great first few chapters can't wait to see more, I believe that this story idea has not fully been explored. I think the Thrag should use this opportunity to devlop orchish culture and society with schools, currency and a more civilan lifestyle for a regular orc with orcish spin. If you want orcs to be seen as a still evil and only male race maybe make it so that orcs can breed with different races of women like from goblin slayer, maybe giving more incentive to go raiding to capture women for faster gestation time and or women having a litter than longer single breeding pod.
JManM Never dissapoints ever His fics are always decent to a certain degree