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Bit late to the party but I genuinely enjoyed reading this after having trouble finding stuff that interested me on this app. Stayed up later than I know I should have to finish reading it. Its a shame that its not being updated anymore but it looks like the authors moved on to bigger projects. The overall writing quality is good with some easily fixable mistakes that didnt entirely break the immersion. As I mentioned earlier its not being updated anymore but its still worth a read despite that. I dont have much to say about the story being in the state that its in except good job. I do realize that the mc is technically older than the age of his body but he does come off a bit whiny at times but it can be overlooked with minor consequence. I was actually quite delighted to see that the mc went out of japan and actually did something a bit unheard of being that she might have actually joined the military if the story was alowed to progress past than what is currently out. apparently there was more out beforehand but unfortunately I missed it so I cant really comment on anything past chapter 20(?). I wont try to beg the author to come back to write more and im thankful that he managed to sate some of the current boredom I’ve been suffering from. Be well author and keep up the good work, I’ll be checking out your other works after I check over this review for spelling mistakes that are bound to happen.
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Its a nice story but it doesnt feel like a MHA fanfic. The only characters that appeared are in short cameos that have barely anything to do with the story. And the Mc seems to be having its own adventure completely unrelated, and it doesnt have quirks as its main focus, or heroes and villains. everything that makes mha isnt there,
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Hi, author here. This is far from droped and who knows why, but I always loved this one. Out of all my works this one was special for me. I liked it even more than my Dark Souls fic, so I want to give it a end someday.
This story is really good and have potential. There is just that one thing that really irked me about the FF. The part where the mother of the MC was bashed throughout the fic. The father is the man of the house in the early chapters, he loved his children and his wife, then it changed so suddenly. Like really sudden, there maybe something that happened on the time skip but he suddenly don't love his wife as much as before the time skip. The author said that the father love her mother so much that he retired the hero job, but then boom, Sayo now wants to be a hero. The father gets back his desire to be a hero again. It happened around in that part of the story, the mother bashing begins. Technically the mother and the father only got married because of the quirk marriage that the father initiated the marriage by donating(?)/influencing the mother's family, she basically got sold. Throughout the story you can see how forceful the father is(example: He used his money and influence to get cops fired because they inconvenience his daughter, he let her daughter killed someone and made the law do nothing about it. He also get fired the cop who did his job by scolding the MC about her dog crippling someone, ETC.). The mother really didn't love the hero job, but it is true that she love her family very much. She only wants her family to be safe and don't be on the harms way, but she is really not good on how to do and say it. Well, the Mother got crazy by being ignored by everyone on the house, like literally ignored. The mother asks her daughters some question about the school and then they ignore her and looks at the dad instead and ask him about his day. Overall, the mother got crazy and then was send back to her parents. The rant is over. P.S. sorry about this long rant it just really irked and annoyed me about the mother bashing.
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Really good story, i like the premise, there are some mysteries, there is something dark behind the MC's past but its written very well, keeping the suspense alive, and the whole embracing the new gender thing isn't very exaggerated, i liked that as well, and his cough her attitude is nice, her style is good, but the mirko internship thing, i am honestly tired of it, almost all the MHA fanfics i have read recently have something to do with mirko, i wanted some other character, but that's my personal opinion, count it as a suggestion, the world building makes a lot of sense, and its not idealistic good job there as well, and although there are a few errors here and there, the overall flow of the story is very smooth and the pacing is very well done, all characters feel alive and not just forgotten after thier scene is over, you have a lot of talent, i'll be looking forward to your future works author-san
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to tell you the truth ididnt expect that this one is a yuri it made a little disappointed. i was expecting that in the near future she will have a baby and a husband.
I enjoyed how the familly acts like a real familly. They have issues like every family. The author took the freedoms to add on the world and it builds a nice story.
Overall the grammar needs work but my grammar is just as bad. However the author takes the fact that MHA barely talks about outher countries and uses it well. Hope to see more.
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Good story Good character development Interesting build up. But sadly the author flipped off his promise of pure yuri and made the mc bi. Just a heads up for you that don't want to read because of this. Don't waste your time.
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the story itself is very good and I like the fact it doesn't just focus on how much of a bombshell the MC is as the title would sugges, though the grammar could use a bit of work to make it sound more fluid, overall you have a great book here.
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Its rare to see FanFic with Genderbend Yuri(maybe?) genre. Careful author-san, there might be alot of readers who would review this 1-star saying "Genderbend?????" don't mind them and just keep writing please.
This is one of the best bnha fics I have ever read, although it is in the beginning, it is still one of the best !! Keep up the good work, author-san--
So far the novel is pretty good, and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!
Well I recommend this story for you who are looking for a good story. This story is one of my favourite and it's good, so try it and I hope you like this story like me
Gotta say author is doing amazing job. the story is great even with it being the beginning, cant wait for the next chapter to come out. keep ip the great work🥰🥰
This Novel is well executed. The writing Quality is nice and clean. Updating Stability Until now it is still stable. Story Development is Great, I really enjoyed the story. Character Design is different from the other MHA/BNHA Fanfic And surprisingly very interesting. World Background Although cliches are still good and worth reading. Overall this novel is a 4.8 star and can be readable
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What is there to say? The author is a good writer and even though this story is still in its early stages, I think this is going to be my favorite one of his books. So I will give it 10 out of 10 Fire Nation would invade again. With that being said I'll be in the corner rooting for yuri romance. I think Toga or Rumi would be a good choice.
look interesting 😊😊😊😊😊😚😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😎😎😎😎😎😎🙂😎😎🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗
I don't know how y'all like genderbend thingy but it disgusted me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I forst wrote a DC fanfic which i did not know enouph about and i l ow a lot of MHA and i quite like it. So here is my genderbender fanfic which Sayo Hitsugi.
mc is 3 years old killing ppl. stronger than even adults with average quirks.. stays that old for basically the entire story so far. i dont get why ppl get hyped readnig about children fighting.
Bit late to the party but I genuinely enjoyed reading this after having trouble finding stuff that interested me on this app. Stayed up later than I know I should have to finish reading it. Its a shame that its not being updated anymore but it looks like the authors moved on to bigger projects. The overall writing quality is good with some easily fixable mistakes that didnt entirely break the immersion. As I mentioned earlier its not being updated anymore but its still worth a read despite that. I dont have much to say about the story being in the state that its in except good job. I do realize that the mc is technically older than the age of his body but he does come off a bit whiny at times but it can be overlooked with minor consequence. I was actually quite delighted to see that the mc went out of japan and actually did something a bit unheard of being that she might have actually joined the military if the story was alowed to progress past than what is currently out. apparently there was more out beforehand but unfortunately I missed it so I cant really comment on anything past chapter 20(?). I wont try to beg the author to come back to write more and im thankful that he managed to sate some of the current boredom I’ve been suffering from. Be well author and keep up the good work, I’ll be checking out your other works after I check over this review for spelling mistakes that are bound to happen.
Was the entire content changed? Wasn't there the UA arc? jsjsjsndnsjsjsjnsnsjshsbsjsisisjshsbsjajsisuhshsnsjsjsusjsjsnsbjasjisisjshshshajs
Its a nice story but it doesnt feel like a MHA fanfic. The only characters that appeared are in short cameos that have barely anything to do with the story. And the Mc seems to be having its own adventure completely unrelated, and it doesnt have quirks as its main focus, or heroes and villains. everything that makes mha isnt there,
quite pleasant to read. ............................................................................................................................
Hi, author here. This is far from droped and who knows why, but I always loved this one. Out of all my works this one was special for me. I liked it even more than my Dark Souls fic, so I want to give it a end someday.
This story is really good and have potential. There is just that one thing that really irked me about the FF. The part where the mother of the MC was bashed throughout the fic. The father is the man of the house in the early chapters, he loved his children and his wife, then it changed so suddenly. Like really sudden, there maybe something that happened on the time skip but he suddenly don't love his wife as much as before the time skip. The author said that the father love her mother so much that he retired the hero job, but then boom, Sayo now wants to be a hero. The father gets back his desire to be a hero again. It happened around in that part of the story, the mother bashing begins. Technically the mother and the father only got married because of the quirk marriage that the father initiated the marriage by donating(?)/influencing the mother's family, she basically got sold. Throughout the story you can see how forceful the father is(example: He used his money and influence to get cops fired because they inconvenience his daughter, he let her daughter killed someone and made the law do nothing about it. He also get fired the cop who did his job by scolding the MC about her dog crippling someone, ETC.). The mother really didn't love the hero job, but it is true that she love her family very much. She only wants her family to be safe and don't be on the harms way, but she is really not good on how to do and say it. Well, the Mother got crazy by being ignored by everyone on the house, like literally ignored. The mother asks her daughters some question about the school and then they ignore her and looks at the dad instead and ask him about his day. Overall, the mother got crazy and then was send back to her parents. The rant is over. P.S. sorry about this long rant it just really irked and annoyed me about the mother bashing.
Reveal Spoiler Really good story, i like the premise, there are some mysteries, there is something dark behind the MC's past but its written very well, keeping the suspense alive, and the whole embracing the new gender thing isn't very exaggerated, i liked that as well, and his cough her attitude is nice, her style is good, but the mirko internship thing, i am honestly tired of it, almost all the MHA fanfics i have read recently have something to do with mirko, i wanted some other character, but that's my personal opinion, count it as a suggestion, the world building makes a lot of sense, and its not idealistic good job there as well, and although there are a few errors here and there, the overall flow of the story is very smooth and the pacing is very well done, all characters feel alive and not just forgotten after thier scene is over, you have a lot of talent, i'll be looking forward to your future works author-san
Reveal Spoiler to tell you the truth ididnt expect that this one is a yuri it made a little disappointed. i was expecting that in the near future she will have a baby and a husband.
I enjoyed how the familly acts like a real familly. They have issues like every family. The author took the freedoms to add on the world and it builds a nice story.
Overall the grammar needs work but my grammar is just as bad. However the author takes the fact that MHA barely talks about outher countries and uses it well. Hope to see more.
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Good story Good character development Interesting build up. But sadly the author flipped off his promise of pure yuri and made the mc bi. Just a heads up for you that don't want to read because of this. Don't waste your time.
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the story itself is very good and I like the fact it doesn't just focus on how much of a bombshell the MC is as the title would sugges, though the grammar could use a bit of work to make it sound more fluid, overall you have a great book here.
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Its rare to see FanFic with Genderbend Yuri(maybe?) genre. Careful author-san, there might be alot of readers who would review this 1-star saying "Genderbend?????" don't mind them and just keep writing please.
This is one of the best bnha fics I have ever read, although it is in the beginning, it is still one of the best !! Keep up the good work, author-san--
So far the novel is pretty good, and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!
Well I recommend this story for you who are looking for a good story. This story is one of my favourite and it's good, so try it and I hope you like this story like me
Gotta say author is doing amazing job. the story is great even with it being the beginning, cant wait for the next chapter to come out. keep ip the great work🥰🥰
This Novel is well executed. The writing Quality is nice and clean. Updating Stability Until now it is still stable. Story Development is Great, I really enjoyed the story. Character Design is different from the other MHA/BNHA Fanfic And surprisingly very interesting. World Background Although cliches are still good and worth reading. Overall this novel is a 4.8 star and can be readable
Cool KEKW ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,............................................,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.
What is there to say? The author is a good writer and even though this story is still in its early stages, I think this is going to be my favorite one of his books. So I will give it 10 out of 10 Fire Nation would invade again. With that being said I'll be in the corner rooting for yuri romance. I think Toga or Rumi would be a good choice.
look interesting 😊😊😊😊😊😚😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😎😎😎😎😎😎🙂😎😎🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗
I don't know how y'all like genderbend thingy but it disgusted me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I forst wrote a DC fanfic which i did not know enouph about and i l ow a lot of MHA and i quite like it. So here is my genderbender fanfic which Sayo Hitsugi.
mc is 3 years old killing ppl. stronger than even adults with average quirks.. stays that old for basically the entire story so far. i dont get why ppl get hyped readnig about children fighting.