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HP: The Guardian

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Author: BrownAmerican

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Magic. Thou are forsooth profound. None could comprehend thou. By thy grace, none shall.
Magic is a fickle being. In the hands of a scholar, it usher development. In the hands of a madman, it brings destruction. To master magic in it's essence, however, would be impossible. If one did, however, he would be able to contend with death itself.
Charlus Potter has a gift. Having a gift, however, is often not enough. Can Charlus Potter use this gift for the betterment of the society, as well as his friends and family? Or will he succumb to the power like many before him?

Story is slow at first but picks up speed quickly. Recommendation to people who want to skip to the plot - read till chapter 15 and then skip to chapter 60.

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Harry Potter belongs to J K Rowling

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dysplex

Yes. Another non-harem. I've been finding gold mines of non-harems. Finally, people know what's right for them. Praise the no-harem Gods. I've found about 6 no harems so far, I'm still looking.

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AzureFlame0

LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT LONG LIVE THE NO-HAREM SECT

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SnowRose

This is a very interesting fanfiction centered in the Harry Potter world. Its not your typical ‘Hogwarts’ ‘Harry Potter’ centered story and instead heads down a new path which i respect the author for. Pros: -Unique when compared to other HP fanfics. -Still holds true to the HP world. -Interesting backstory for the main character and he was introduced pretty well. -Author is intentive to the readers feelings and while he makes mistakes, its clear he cares about the story’s progress going foward. Now the negative aspects arent game changing but they can be annoying at times. Thankfully its clear the author is trying to improve and is taking the readers thoughts into account. Cons: -Grammar can sometimes take a quality hit. An editor who went through the chapters and fixed them up could improve the story drastically. The word count could be increased per chapter and it would make the overall story more captivating. -The author tends to forget what he wrote sometimes which can lead to confusion. -Situations tend to jump out from seemingly no where. Characters and character backstorys seem to be interjected into the story at random points and dont really have any ‘sticking power’ they arent captivating and readers honestly dont really care about side characters they dont find interesting. Lucas and Lucifer are examples. The only characters i care about at this point are the MC, the original cast (Fleur), and the Magic Theory teacher is starting to get interesting. Hopefully the author will spend some more time trying to flesh out characters before moving the plot too far ahead where they become irrelevant. I personally would recommend slowing down updates, extending chapter length by about double its current length, and not worry about rushing things. I would pref the first 100 chapters be dedicated to character development so a firm base is established. Final thoughts: Read it. Its worth the read and it has potential to be a great HP story so long as the author continues to take readers suggestions while holding true to their own vision. It may be challenging but the end product would be something great.

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babruohohoho

it is very good I am really excited to see the the story develops!!!..................................................................👍👍👍👍😊😊😊

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Phoenix1998

Author. I really like this story. Dont listen to others. Write how you want to write. Author. I really like this story. Dont listen to others. Write how you want to write.

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SlothBYnature

The story takes way to long to get to the point and the author realised this rushing through the plot to get to where he wants it to be as a consequence to this He states that a lot of what he wrote could be skipped without you missing much

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lunaaaaaaa

YES!!!!! NO HAREM GANG !!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Arc1221

RELEASE MORE CHAPTERS. VERY NICE STORY.

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Maniacss

Nice one and keep it up kind of a very good story and the waY . . . . . . , . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Chaos_Swan_king

i love this already. i am simply speechless. I love the concept of the novel, the process of carrying it out, beautiful grammar and overall a very good novel. I recommend this to anyone who is fed up of boring fanfictions(It held me back from moving out of the whole fanfiction genre). Well, good luck and enjoy.

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Adi010

Nice Work! Don't focus on chapters just focus on the quality otherwise this piece of art will be ruined. ................................................................................................................................................

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A_British_Person

I was told to write a review. I’m not that good with words but I’ll try................Its good....like very good.................GOOOOOOD....

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DrOz9999

very good 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

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AvidReader962

At the moment there are not a lot of chapters released yet, but from what I have already read, the story is well written, the concept is very fun, and I am definitely excited to see what comes next. I think this story deserves a try to be sure, and at the moment, I doubt you will be disappointed giving it a try.

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lidag
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For now I can't tell if it's good or not I've readen the book because another autor recomended it The story is at the begininng and might be interesting but I can't tell yet I hope the story won't follow the "real" story and be genius but who know To be decided but for now it's intriging

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Lycarus

Hi, are you taking a break? Can you tell when you're coming back? your story is very good, i hope i can keep reading your books. not least because I hope to see more of his interaction and fleur. attentively awaiting your return.

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