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this novel made me quit my Corn addiction, a solid 10/9 the writing is better the story is even better and the novel is amazing.
Great story. Actually great, and I mean it. So many people nowadays are published who couldn't tell a Shakespeare book from a Spongebob. But you, Mr. Void, are most certainly not in that category. I am blessed that this book is available for free, as not many books of its calibre are. Keep up the amazing work, you will do great things in the future, I am sure of it. Definitely a name to keep an eye on.
I love this book to bits am already addicted and I can't get enough.Keep the chapters coming I love it
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
I really like where you are going with this, but the story is a little bit too rushed.. slow down and think about it. Don’t follow other stories, make your own unique world.. make us want to adventure with you through this world of yours.. open our eyes to your world author..
The essence plot and pacing this story contains has a potential to reach heights.But I like the mentality of the MC it just mature like his age not like other novel MC.But the their is just I spelling mistake I got and is "precent" in 3rd chapter and nothing else.The writing is good, but it's slow progression sometimes like explaining his powers.That's all, but I felt nostalgia when I realize that the Mc name is Nexus and he is now a Soul.I was Awe, it is the greatest co-incident and you can check my bio it had something interesting . .
so far it is good......................................................................................................................................
eeeeee! I'm like totally in love already with this book. I don't read sci-fi books often but I have to read this! I recommend this book 🥰✨✨💓
hello to everyone who reads this.I'm actually very new to writing so i there will be mistakes along the way if any of you do find mistakes in any of my chapters please point it out so i can fix it.I'm also available for any questions regarding my Novel.
this novel made me quit my Corn addiction, a solid 10/9 the writing is better the story is even better and the novel is amazing.
Great story. Actually great, and I mean it. So many people nowadays are published who couldn't tell a Shakespeare book from a Spongebob. But you, Mr. Void, are most certainly not in that category. I am blessed that this book is available for free, as not many books of its calibre are. Keep up the amazing work, you will do great things in the future, I am sure of it. Definitely a name to keep an eye on.
I love this book to bits am already addicted and I can't get enough.Keep the chapters coming I love it
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
I really like where you are going with this, but the story is a little bit too rushed.. slow down and think about it. Don’t follow other stories, make your own unique world.. make us want to adventure with you through this world of yours.. open our eyes to your world author..
The essence plot and pacing this story contains has a potential to reach heights.But I like the mentality of the MC it just mature like his age not like other novel MC.But the their is just I spelling mistake I got and is "precent" in 3rd chapter and nothing else.The writing is good, but it's slow progression sometimes like explaining his powers.That's all, but I felt nostalgia when I realize that the Mc name is Nexus and he is now a Soul.I was Awe, it is the greatest co-incident and you can check my bio it had something interesting . .
so far it is good......................................................................................................................................
eeeeee! I'm like totally in love already with this book. I don't read sci-fi books often but I have to read this! I recommend this book 🥰✨✨💓
hello to everyone who reads this.I'm actually very new to writing so i there will be mistakes along the way if any of you do find mistakes in any of my chapters please point it out so i can fix it.I'm also available for any questions regarding my Novel.