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The book has good story and the characters are also very interesting overall I like this book
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Loving the FL evolution. The plot is gr8 - overcoming the horrible marriage to meeting nicoli. interesting story however it feels like there are many chapters with filler and i am scrolling on to get back to the story. I understand that it is likely an issue on my part and that that aspect is not my cup of tea. Still I find myself wanting to read more and find out about these characters! I look forward to seeing how serpent ties into it all and if nico blocks them from FL and her evil family gets what they deserve 👿 thank you author 🙏🏵️❣️
almost everything about this novel is good, the only thing i have against this novel is that holy mother of god, the pace is almost frustratingly slow, 400+ chaps and we only took one step. can you believe that?
I love this book! And I love how you delve into the psyche of the characters. Ariana is so real with her mental health struggles and determination to overcome them. Not only Ari but Nico and even Noah have been portrayed in a 3d manner. Good job author 💕
I hope this gets to be a finished book. I really hope she's not dumb enough to go back with her scum husband & his family. Holding a gun saying shoot me because I can't live without u. please, he's using reverse psychology
I like the story.... Ita very nice. Slow story.... Lots of story in between. Very descriptive....
stumbled across this one now caught here 😜 loving the story line so far cheers
This book is a great read, I love to how the chapter leave you anticipating the next
I like the story so far but i really hate her stupid husband Noah. Like, the audacity! I want to beat him up he should get his emotions straightened out. Justice for FL! I hope he goes bald! Great book Author san keep the chapters coming!
A very well written novel can't wait to read the new chapters. A great work by the Author very captivating. The transition from a weak and humble woman to a strong and practical person Ari has it all
I am enjoying your novel It is a pleasant change from the norm. I hope Ari tames Nico or moves on to a decent man. Noah is a monster. And her sister and mom need to dropped in a well.
realmente me gustaría que no se quede con Noah, lo siento soy alguien rencorosa y aunque Nicolai pueda parecer un desgraciado , en sus encuentros y aún con sus oscuras razones la ha tratado mucho mejor que él ... si no, soltera mejor uwu por favor
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This book is TOTALLY CAPTIVATING😍 I got invested from the very start. Great job dear author❤️❤️❤️
I know what good novel look like from the start , and this one is for sure not a good but an amazing one 🔥🔥🤍
Already chomping at the bit for more chapters! I am a huge fan of this author and cannot wait for my newest favorite story to post!
Poor Ari, my heart aches for her, her dayum sister i hope all her hair falls off and thst Noah, to grovel till old age, justice for our sweet fl, overall, its a really interesting book even though it has only 6 or so chapters, Fairy San, we, I need some chapters, i cant wait for Noah to realize his mistakes. Hope yall enjoyed it like i did
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I love the book very much and the story very much but I would like a few more chapters that are free. Nevertheless, I love the book keep it up
The book has good story and the characters are also very interesting overall I like this book
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Loving the FL evolution. The plot is gr8 - overcoming the horrible marriage to meeting nicoli. interesting story however it feels like there are many chapters with filler and i am scrolling on to get back to the story. I understand that it is likely an issue on my part and that that aspect is not my cup of tea. Still I find myself wanting to read more and find out about these characters! I look forward to seeing how serpent ties into it all and if nico blocks them from FL and her evil family gets what they deserve 👿 thank you author 🙏🏵️❣️
almost everything about this novel is good, the only thing i have against this novel is that holy mother of god, the pace is almost frustratingly slow, 400+ chaps and we only took one step. can you believe that?
I love this book! And I love how you delve into the psyche of the characters. Ariana is so real with her mental health struggles and determination to overcome them. Not only Ari but Nico and even Noah have been portrayed in a 3d manner. Good job author 💕
I hope this gets to be a finished book. I really hope she's not dumb enough to go back with her scum husband & his family. Holding a gun saying shoot me because I can't live without u. please, he's using reverse psychology
I like the story.... Ita very nice. Slow story.... Lots of story in between. Very descriptive....
stumbled across this one now caught here 😜 loving the story line so far cheers
This book is a great read, I love to how the chapter leave you anticipating the next
I like the story so far but i really hate her stupid husband Noah. Like, the audacity! I want to beat him up he should get his emotions straightened out. Justice for FL! I hope he goes bald! Great book Author san keep the chapters coming!
A very well written novel can't wait to read the new chapters. A great work by the Author very captivating. The transition from a weak and humble woman to a strong and practical person Ari has it all
I am enjoying your novel It is a pleasant change from the norm. I hope Ari tames Nico or moves on to a decent man. Noah is a monster. And her sister and mom need to dropped in a well.
realmente me gustaría que no se quede con Noah, lo siento soy alguien rencorosa y aunque Nicolai pueda parecer un desgraciado , en sus encuentros y aún con sus oscuras razones la ha tratado mucho mejor que él ... si no, soltera mejor uwu por favor
Reveal Spoiler This book is TOTALLY CAPTIVATING😍 I got invested from the very start. Great job dear author❤️❤️❤️
I know what good novel look like from the start , and this one is for sure not a good but an amazing one 🔥🔥🤍
Already chomping at the bit for more chapters! I am a huge fan of this author and cannot wait for my newest favorite story to post!
Poor Ari, my heart aches for her, her dayum sister i hope all her hair falls off and thst Noah, to grovel till old age, justice for our sweet fl, overall, its a really interesting book even though it has only 6 or so chapters, Fairy San, we, I need some chapters, i cant wait for Noah to realize his mistakes. Hope yall enjoyed it like i did
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I love the book very much and the story very much but I would like a few more chapters that are free. Nevertheless, I love the book keep it up