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I gave my power stones, I hope for more chapters............................................................................................................................................
So I have not played Elden Ring before nor have I watched a single playthrough of it until a day ago and I'm still on the first video since it's an hour long. I started reading fan fics of Elden Ring from Neonzangetsu until I found more, slowly getting the lore through bits and pieces. I gotta say I'm falling in love with the lore! Now we have this story which is really good and I love the romance between Alistair and Miquella. I realized i was bi later on in life but still leaning heavily towards women and still think it's weird to give bjs or receiving @n@l since I see myself in a dominant role if i was in gay relationship and i do know it'd be not fair for them but I'm still trying to get comfortable in this aspect of my life, I still love the story though and hope you can continue it. and the NSFW chapters are really good.
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Мне нравится сама история. Наблюдайте за развитием отношений главных героев и их отношений с остальным миром. Надеюсь, автор не откажется от этого проекта.
Author-san have you abandoned the (Natasha Symbiote) novel of yours will you ever continue it. Please tell me. Well, this novel is good.
A very wonderful novel with excellent dialogues The interaction between the characters is very good Thank you for the chapters, writer, and I hope you continue to write ❤️❤️ (Miquella is the best)
My dear author, please continue writing this masterpiece rich in culture! 😏😉 🤣 Man, this is amazing! Miq and Al are so well developed and so cute together. I hope you can tell me that you will also write about the lives of the other Alistairs spreading across the Omniverse? They are all men who have similar sexual interests to our Alistair.? Does the original Alistair know he is married to Miquella or how he reacted to it? Tell me, man, please, because this curiosity is killing me here!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
gooodddd ........................................................................................................................................ ...............................................................................................................................................
It's still a good story, don't let it drop...... ... ... . . . . . .....................................................................................
what can I say besides, this has Femboys, Miquella the thicc and cool unc Maliketh
author .... why are you gay ?.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shiiii the only BL fan fic I am reading and actually liking keep it going chief......................................................................................................................
FEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOY WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOO FEMBOY!!!!!!!! ITS PEAAAAAAAAAK
16 chapters and I'm most definitely didn't get dissapponted, the interaction between mc and Miquella was so beautifully cute i might as well die from diabetes 🥹 especially during and after that thighjob chapter
I'm loving the fic. The character development is great and I’m liking how the relationship is progressing so far. The pace feels perfect at the moment and I can’t wait for more chapters to be released. Keep up the amazing writing author!
Author please don't drop this book. I've been looking for a book like this since the dlc came out. So please as an avid Elden Ring fan don't let this one die
I didn't read it yet and I don't like gay stories(I'm straight it just feels weird to read it because I can't put myself in the Mc shoes)but the description especially the ending got me chucking so imma give it a try
you are great-good, this rat is pleased-happy, you must write-create more. You're many-diverse work good-great.
I gave my power stones, I hope for more chapters............................................................................................................................................
So I have not played Elden Ring before nor have I watched a single playthrough of it until a day ago and I'm still on the first video since it's an hour long. I started reading fan fics of Elden Ring from Neonzangetsu until I found more, slowly getting the lore through bits and pieces. I gotta say I'm falling in love with the lore! Now we have this story which is really good and I love the romance between Alistair and Miquella. I realized i was bi later on in life but still leaning heavily towards women and still think it's weird to give bjs or receiving @n@l since I see myself in a dominant role if i was in gay relationship and i do know it'd be not fair for them but I'm still trying to get comfortable in this aspect of my life, I still love the story though and hope you can continue it. and the NSFW chapters are really good.
Reveal Spoiler Мне нравится сама история. Наблюдайте за развитием отношений главных героев и их отношений с остальным миром. Надеюсь, автор не откажется от этого проекта.
Author-san have you abandoned the (Natasha Symbiote) novel of yours will you ever continue it. Please tell me. Well, this novel is good.
A very wonderful novel with excellent dialogues The interaction between the characters is very good Thank you for the chapters, writer, and I hope you continue to write ❤️❤️ (Miquella is the best)
My dear author, please continue writing this masterpiece rich in culture! 😏😉 🤣 Man, this is amazing! Miq and Al are so well developed and so cute together. I hope you can tell me that you will also write about the lives of the other Alistairs spreading across the Omniverse? They are all men who have similar sexual interests to our Alistair.? Does the original Alistair know he is married to Miquella or how he reacted to it? Tell me, man, please, because this curiosity is killing me here!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
gooodddd ........................................................................................................................................ ...............................................................................................................................................
It's still a good story, don't let it drop...... ... ... . . . . . .....................................................................................
what can I say besides, this has Femboys, Miquella the thicc and cool unc Maliketh
author .... why are you gay ?.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shiiii the only BL fan fic I am reading and actually liking keep it going chief......................................................................................................................
FEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOYFEMBOY WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOO FEMBOY!!!!!!!! ITS PEAAAAAAAAAK
16 chapters and I'm most definitely didn't get dissapponted, the interaction between mc and Miquella was so beautifully cute i might as well die from diabetes 🥹 especially during and after that thighjob chapter
I'm loving the fic. The character development is great and I’m liking how the relationship is progressing so far. The pace feels perfect at the moment and I can’t wait for more chapters to be released. Keep up the amazing writing author!
Author please don't drop this book. I've been looking for a book like this since the dlc came out. So please as an avid Elden Ring fan don't let this one die
I didn't read it yet and I don't like gay stories(I'm straight it just feels weird to read it because I can't put myself in the Mc shoes)but the description especially the ending got me chucking so imma give it a try
you are great-good, this rat is pleased-happy, you must write-create more. You're many-diverse work good-great.
really great story can't wait for more ^-^