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Love. Heartbreak. And a... birthday.
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Dude you just nailed it... I love this one shot story very much... ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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I want to tran this novel to Burmese. Cuz I think that is very good. The writing is soft and gentle.Please give me permission๐โค๏ธ[img=recommend]
The story was beautifully written and the emotions were well placed . I liked the ending , there is such a scarcity of true love , I really liked it though it was a tragedy , it filled my heart ,thank you author for giving this gem[img=recommend]
As usual..A very good grammar and vocabulary..The revealing is so touchful and sad ๐ ..i really want to say more about this story but i have to leave that for the future readers and let them read this masterpiece๐ Tq for this oneshot !!
This was such a sweet story. Even though it was a bit sad.๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ขโค๐๐ข
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I hope to see more of one shot or a continuation of this. Hehe. Prequel. Sequel. Whatever you call it. I am delighted to read this like some sort of a heroin piercing through my heart.
This was very lovely. I almost cried at the end since the ending was so sweet but also very sad. I hope you keep making more of these. You have a very beautifu way of showing emotion in the stories >_<
Sweet and tragic, really well done too, a very good and memorable oneshot that takes just about 5 minutes to read. ......................................................................
๐ Good story One chapter, but itโs enough to tell this short story. Good grammar, nice writing. I just stumbled across this. Good read ๐
It was refreshing, I loved it because of it was a story with a different plot, your writing skills are amazing, it was a beautiful story story.
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at fist I was so sad that he is alone in this world... but they found each other... Short and sweet. I love this one ๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐโค๏ธ๐โฃ๏ธ๐๐ค๐โฅ๏ธ๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐
Wonderful One shot...Wonderful One shot...Wonderful One shot...Wonderful One shot...Wonderful One shot...Wonderful One shot...Wonderful One shot...Wonderful One shot...
Exceptional Grammar, your way of writing is beautiful by fully immersing yourself in the story, I could say more of the pros & cons, but I'm just lazy. Tip- Don't use big words when small ones work, like on the word 'detract' when 'distract' works. Rather a short review than my usual. Be optimistic, every Novelist needs it.