A new world to discover

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Pelperson

simply my own view of this an the author. i dont expect anything from this, nor do i think it's amazing. of course, i myself do love it but it's not perfect. a hobby is a hobby.

It's a pretty good novel so far about two girls exploring a world that is pretty much unknown to them. This world is slowly unraveled over time as the story progresses, and tidbits of lore continue to get added upon from the initial exposition. It's something that goes along with the premise of the story, and it's built on it quite nicely. The characters are quite memorable, especially the main ones and their backgrounds. Heck, the origins of this world (which is aligned with them) is quite unique, and I've never read anything like it. It's not perfect, of course. Don't expect this novel to be a masterpiece with no tropes, and let's agree, there is no such thing. There are also some issues of slow pacing, especially around the part where one of the main characters enters an academy, but that may be just to hammer in the details of the part. It was actually quick before this, time-skipping for some time in just a few chapters. There are also some characters that aren't expanded upon much (yet, I think), and I hope they are explored more down the line. In any case, don't let these stop you from reading it. It's still quite a good one to spend some time on to enjoy. In summary, if you want a medieval fantasy novel with a world that is being explored as the story progresses, with unforgettable main protagonists that share origins with the said world, as well as unique ideas interconnected with each other, then this might be for you. It's not a long read as it currently is, but it has great potential. Looking forward to read more chapters!

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Airkiller

Amazing 😍 just the beginning of the novel makes me excited for the rest 👏👏 Great work The story is definitely extremely detailed and am certain that the Author put his/her dedication to make this, it's finely wrote down to the last detail 👍

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Over_Lord_2139

Am not done with it yet but it's As interesting as it can be I hope to complete it soon [img=recommend] I'm not actually a fan of reading novels But this one is one in a million [img=recommend] I hope to see more

Definitely a good read and is being updated at regular times. Gonna be waiting out for newer chapters and I'm excited for where the story is headed.

10/10 😘😘😘😘 loves from crit you doing good pelperson 😘😘😘😂😂😂 i need to write more otherwise the rate doesnt count 140 minimum words 😂😂😂😂😂