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It's not a bad fic, just not for me. Advancing a few chapters I felt like I never left the synopsis. Everything is too shallow, too rushed. You explain things like "he looks like X, she looks like Y", "I wanted that, and so I did, end of story". And those are the reason for my low score in Story Development, Character Design and World Background. Again, not saying the story is bad just that it didn't catch me.
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Hey guys, I will try to bring this book to life. I am mostly writing this just for fun, so if the quality is not up to par, I would like to apologize in advance.
The story is good in every way, it just needs to improve the launch stability, I have nothing to criticize specifically about the story. Please don't give up on the story, I see a lot of potential in it.
It's not a bad fic, just not for me. Advancing a few chapters I felt like I never left the synopsis. Everything is too shallow, too rushed. You explain things like "he looks like X, she looks like Y", "I wanted that, and so I did, end of story". And those are the reason for my low score in Story Development, Character Design and World Background. Again, not saying the story is bad just that it didn't catch me.
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Reveal Spoiler Nice keep [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]🙂👍🙂🙂🙂🙂
Hey guys, I will try to bring this book to life. I am mostly writing this just for fun, so if the quality is not up to par, I would like to apologize in advance.
The story is good in every way, it just needs to improve the launch stability, I have nothing to criticize specifically about the story. Please don't give up on the story, I see a lot of potential in it.