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Before starting this review, I must clarify that I do not speak English and am reading this with Google Translate. I'm also only on the fourth chapter. From what I can tell, the text is well-written in terms of spelling, though it doesn’t make much sense so far. It feels as if the author is writing random conversations. A good comparison might be the dialogues of poorly translated Chinese novels, but without the Chinese names and generational curses. However, this could be due to Google translation, so please don't take this review as 100% reliable. Finally, it's worth noting that there are only 4 chapters, but there are fanfics where, by this point, you already know what they’re about, and they make you want to keep reading. So, that's not really an excuse. If you can, give it a chance; with the lack of "original" fanfiction, you might find something you like here—there is so much poorly translated content out there.
Before starting this review, I must clarify that I do not speak English and am reading this with Google Translate. I'm also only on the fourth chapter. From what I can tell, the text is well-written in terms of spelling, though it doesn’t make much sense so far. It feels as if the author is writing random conversations. A good comparison might be the dialogues of poorly translated Chinese novels, but without the Chinese names and generational curses. However, this could be due to Google translation, so please don't take this review as 100% reliable. Finally, it's worth noting that there are only 4 chapters, but there are fanfics where, by this point, you already know what they’re about, and they make you want to keep reading. So, that's not really an excuse. If you can, give it a chance; with the lack of "original" fanfiction, you might find something you like here—there is so much poorly translated content out there.