One Piece: Rise of Valoria

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dark_wizard_6879

I see potential in this fanfic. hopes this motivate you

LV 3

Rando_M

Mcs fruit needs to be more explained it can’t just be a “dragon” fruit. And the pocket dimension ability just doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit

LV 3

Musyirok

overall it's good.. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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LGK_maore

awsemoe to the atmost rate i like the story progress till now ,,every chapter excits me more and more

LV 14

DragLord

Good novel, if he killed akainu it'll be an even better novel

LV 4

IndigoChild

if your looking for a fic with an epic tale being told then this is the one for you, it takes you on a journey with the protagonist, though pain and suffering, but aslo strangh, vengeance, and an unwavering will, you will be glued to it until you have to wait for more chapters

LV 4

Glebby_Boi

The story itself is great. It’s development and the MC’s character are progressing well. It feel unique and, overall, it’s an entertaining read. My only ick (not a major one and very personal one) is the overly descriptive writing style. I’m not sure if it’s due to potentially using GPT to assist in writing (or translating) the chapters or maybe that’s just how the author writes his thing. It results in moments where the author repeats himself when describing the MC’s thought-process or feelings and the cause of them at that moments in time in some of the earlier chapters. Not often though, but they are present. Again, it’s not a big deal and totally my opinion, but just sayin’. In conclusion, a good read.

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DaoistCEJSmI

Primero para esta aventura. Depósito la fe con un granito de arena (y para motivarte a que sigas esta magnifica obra muy poco vista en estas páginas) muy buen comienzo, espero verla terminada. No te desmotives en el tema de personas porque vendrán a su debido tiempo. Nada más que decir nos vemos y ojala la obra llegue lejos. Ánimos

LV 3

dark_wizard_6879

you should make the changes(when mc is a slave) arc longer it fells rushed

LV 1

Ayoub_AMZ

Author here with the usual shameless 5 stars. I'm a new author who loves reading and writing stories, please let me know if you have any suggestions, advice or questions.