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Write a reviewI liked the concept the story is translated well enough for me. It stays true to its name this story is about a person who is grinding and the only thing I don't like is the"shit talent" concept in a uchiha body of all the bodies it genetically is not possible
Oh, God, what's wrong with this fic... Mc is so pathetic. The talent of the Uchiha body he possesses now is outright waste (like seriously? There is also another fic with the same concept with simulation shit, though that one is still readable) He got a grind system and despite that, his talent absolutely sucks! Come on, he's Uchiha, for fk sake. They are Warring Era's top level Shinobi Clan! Mc is 8 and his chakra got completely used up after doing 4 attempts in Clone Technique, which he still failed in the end. Tch... Update Stabilityβ5
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the writing is very boring, not much happens but a lot of text is written. {needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, }
Is this the same story as Uchiha with proficiency system. Guess you both started translating the story at the same time
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If you want to publish a "polished" MTL story, the least you can do is include the RAW story name in the story synopsis.
trust me when i say this this story stretches tf out and when they say grind they mean it, grinding up skills is 70 percent of the story. Quite literally some chapters is just planning how to grind, doesnt get much better but does get worse.
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What is the original chinese fanfic name? Why haven't you written it in the synopsis? Well it doesn't take master degree to find out why? if you use few of your brain cells to know the answers.πππ
Whats the original name of this novel? Also i read this somewhere before not sure if it was webnovel
Not bad, but there are some pretty crucial chapters that are just reuploads of a previous chapter, and the actual chapter is missing. This makes it a little annoying to read, but hopefully It will get fixed.
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Roman is nice, what is raw? ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .............. . . . .... . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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NEVER GIVE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I liked the concept the story is translated well enough for me. It stays true to its name this story is about a person who is grinding and the only thing I don't like is the"shit talent" concept in a uchiha body of all the bodies it genetically is not possible
Oh, God, what's wrong with this fic... Mc is so pathetic. The talent of the Uchiha body he possesses now is outright waste (like seriously? There is also another fic with the same concept with simulation shit, though that one is still readable) He got a grind system and despite that, his talent absolutely sucks! Come on, he's Uchiha, for fk sake. They are Warring Era's top level Shinobi Clan! Mc is 8 and his chakra got completely used up after doing 4 attempts in Clone Technique, which he still failed in the end. Tch... Update Stabilityβ5
[img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
the writing is very boring, not much happens but a lot of text is written. {needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, }
Is this the same story as Uchiha with proficiency system. Guess you both started translating the story at the same time
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If you want to publish a "polished" MTL story, the least you can do is include the RAW story name in the story synopsis.
trust me when i say this this story stretches tf out and when they say grind they mean it, grinding up skills is 70 percent of the story. Quite literally some chapters is just planning how to grind, doesnt get much better but does get worse.
[img=Relaxed][img=Sigh][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
What is the original chinese fanfic name? Why haven't you written it in the synopsis? Well it doesn't take master degree to find out why? if you use few of your brain cells to know the answers.πππ
Whats the original name of this novel? Also i read this somewhere before not sure if it was webnovel
Not bad, but there are some pretty crucial chapters that are just reuploads of a previous chapter, and the actual chapter is missing. This makes it a little annoying to read, but hopefully It will get fixed.
π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―
Roman is nice, what is raw? ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .............. . . . .... . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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