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well i have only read the starting chapters and this one looks promising so kinda gonna stack chapters then gonna read them together so author please dont stop writing or drop the works surely and slowly we will support you
Great concept, I just hate how blatant the use of AI is, the wording and structure of paragraphs are garbage, the cliched motivation of the main charactor ticks me off. If you corrected the horrible structure and wording of the story, then used less generic senarios I might consider reading past the 3rd chapter.
The usual face slapping kinda story(little less chinese tho), turn off your brain if you want to enjoy it, some parts were so childish I even laughed at how absurd they were. Overall, the design, settings ,world development are cliches I enjoy so the read can be somewhat fun. recommended to pass time.
The story is nice, especially since the mc has a system which, although difficult, still helps quite a bit in the end, on the other hand I noticed some inconsistencies or logical errors, and even certain gaps. it's especially annoying when you pay for the chapters (note that the author reacted very quickly, and understand the problem) I'm going to finish the chapters that I had already purchased and see if I continue with them. ps: author, I talk at the beginning of this review about the fact that he is not interested in Noelle, I can understand that at 27 years old looking for someone more mature, but not feeling anything, for an attractive young girl Who has the majority of the bed? really ^^ 27/18 there is nothing shocking
I have found the story that I was looking for. Author, please don't drop the book. I will support you by reading slowly, unlocking chapters with a free pass, and contributing stones. After I finish reading, I will write a detailed review. Again don't this novel ever please.
Honestly a very exciting book. The beginning resonated with me, and while the earlier chapters might seem a bit clunky, once you reach the 7th-10th chapter, you’ll like the story a lot more! Highly recommend!
Hi, Author here, thank you for clicking on my book, here’s my honest review on it. It’s my first time writing a book, and it’s been a great experience for me, so please bear with me if the chapters are below your standards, or not to your taste. I know it might not seem very enjoyable at first but I’m sure if you stick around long enough, you will enjoy the storyline and plot. And if you’re one of the people who do enjoy it, done hesitate to add the book to your library and send it power stones. Thank you.
well i have only read the starting chapters and this one looks promising so kinda gonna stack chapters then gonna read them together so author please dont stop writing or drop the works surely and slowly we will support you
Great concept, I just hate how blatant the use of AI is, the wording and structure of paragraphs are garbage, the cliched motivation of the main charactor ticks me off. If you corrected the horrible structure and wording of the story, then used less generic senarios I might consider reading past the 3rd chapter.
The usual face slapping kinda story(little less chinese tho), turn off your brain if you want to enjoy it, some parts were so childish I even laughed at how absurd they were. Overall, the design, settings ,world development are cliches I enjoy so the read can be somewhat fun. recommended to pass time.
The story is nice, especially since the mc has a system which, although difficult, still helps quite a bit in the end, on the other hand I noticed some inconsistencies or logical errors, and even certain gaps. it's especially annoying when you pay for the chapters (note that the author reacted very quickly, and understand the problem) I'm going to finish the chapters that I had already purchased and see if I continue with them. ps: author, I talk at the beginning of this review about the fact that he is not interested in Noelle, I can understand that at 27 years old looking for someone more mature, but not feeling anything, for an attractive young girl Who has the majority of the bed? really ^^ 27/18 there is nothing shocking
I have found the story that I was looking for. Author, please don't drop the book. I will support you by reading slowly, unlocking chapters with a free pass, and contributing stones. After I finish reading, I will write a detailed review. Again don't this novel ever please.
Honestly a very exciting book. The beginning resonated with me, and while the earlier chapters might seem a bit clunky, once you reach the 7th-10th chapter, you’ll like the story a lot more! Highly recommend!
Hi, Author here, thank you for clicking on my book, here’s my honest review on it. It’s my first time writing a book, and it’s been a great experience for me, so please bear with me if the chapters are below your standards, or not to your taste. I know it might not seem very enjoyable at first but I’m sure if you stick around long enough, you will enjoy the storyline and plot. And if you’re one of the people who do enjoy it, done hesitate to add the book to your library and send it power stones. Thank you.