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The story is written well, though it only has 2 chapters, I can say that this story has potential. I hope the author continue writing! keep up the good work
Still in the first few pages so I can't say much about the story yet. But the writing is good!
Very cool story. It might be a bit early to definitively rank everything, but I certainly like where it is going. The quality is fantastic, and I can really feel the world at work around the characters. I just have some recommendations from a fellow author. 1. Synopsis! It's actually one of the most important aspects of a novel. I'd heavily recommended adding one. 2. Your update speed isn't bad but webnovel usually prefers more chapters that are a bit smaller. You definitely don't have to, this is just some advice, but maybe break up some of the longer chaps into shorter ones.
The chapters are long enough and are written well. There's no confusion with the transition or the pacing. It goes well with the narrative. The author has made a good story. I will keep this story in my library to see how this story go. I am excited to see the next chapters. Thank you for introducing this wonderful work. Wish you best in your writing!
The story is written well, though it only has 2 chapters, I can say that this story has potential. I hope the author continue writing! keep up the good work
Still in the first few pages so I can't say much about the story yet. But the writing is good!
Very cool story. It might be a bit early to definitively rank everything, but I certainly like where it is going. The quality is fantastic, and I can really feel the world at work around the characters. I just have some recommendations from a fellow author. 1. Synopsis! It's actually one of the most important aspects of a novel. I'd heavily recommended adding one. 2. Your update speed isn't bad but webnovel usually prefers more chapters that are a bit smaller. You definitely don't have to, this is just some advice, but maybe break up some of the longer chaps into shorter ones.
The chapters are long enough and are written well. There's no confusion with the transition or the pacing. It goes well with the narrative. The author has made a good story. I will keep this story in my library to see how this story go. I am excited to see the next chapters. Thank you for introducing this wonderful work. Wish you best in your writing!