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Not much to review on from the first chapter but it's a nice start, the mc is great and confident and the story so far seems promising, though you need to update more often
It just doesn't look like this is your first novel. You have a good control of your words and really love the initial development of the plot. It keeps the reader hooked.
there is 0 chester so I only read synopsis but iIlike the topic and I think world background would be good 😊
Honestly, it doesn't look like you are a new writer. Your skills are very good. I like how characters are written especially the conversations. By the way, your synopsis is super good! I hope you keep writing.
Hey guys! This is my first novel and I would love if you give it a try. This novel will certainly be entertaining with a great MC and world development! Thank you for your time!
Wow! A perfect, confident MC and a great world building. Finally the dialogues are bombs. This novel has everything! If you also enjoy the interactions between the characters, go ahead and read this. You will not be disappointed!
A confident MC is nice to see. From just the first chapters I can tell that much to love about the protagonist and the world he inhabits. I look forward to seeing how the author develops this further.
Not much to review on from the first chapter but it's a nice start, the mc is great and confident and the story so far seems promising, though you need to update more often
It just doesn't look like this is your first novel. You have a good control of your words and really love the initial development of the plot. It keeps the reader hooked.
there is 0 chester so I only read synopsis but iIlike the topic and I think world background would be good 😊
Honestly, it doesn't look like you are a new writer. Your skills are very good. I like how characters are written especially the conversations. By the way, your synopsis is super good! I hope you keep writing.
Hey guys! This is my first novel and I would love if you give it a try. This novel will certainly be entertaining with a great MC and world development! Thank you for your time!
Wow! A perfect, confident MC and a great world building. Finally the dialogues are bombs. This novel has everything! If you also enjoy the interactions between the characters, go ahead and read this. You will not be disappointed!
A confident MC is nice to see. From just the first chapters I can tell that much to love about the protagonist and the world he inhabits. I look forward to seeing how the author develops this further.