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The characters are amazing. The plot is fast-paced and great. However, the author doing these annoying edits that are the last half of the chapter repeated jacking up the price makes it not worth spending the coins or the fast passes. if you're gonna do the chapter edits, then just re-release the chapter with the edit, and don't just stack on the same second half of the chapter.
I’ve read through 35 chapters as of currently, and I find it to be mediocre at best. The whole premise was great, and I especially liked the character’s backstory. However, the problem is the entirety of the plot is strange, and abnormal. First of all, the dynamic between Lily and the main character doesn’t make much sense. His “flirting” was just him praying on her backstory. It didn’t make sense, and realistically, is not how you acquire any type of relationship– friendship or not. It’s even more unnatural how close they get– within a span of 2 chapters. Moving on to the writing quality, to say the least, it’s lackluster. The dialogue between characters is no better. The whole problem is that the characters are just not realistic, they’re uncanny. Yes, mc’s relationship with mom does have a reasonable depth to them, but the way he perceives, addresses, and dotes on others, is uncanny. They’re plenty of novels with wonderful diction and style, and this is certainly not one of them. I’m not expecting collegial level writing, but a version of writing that incorporates clean grammar that doesn’t force readers to reread a sentence because of how strangely it was formatted. Regarding just about stability of updates, and world background, I don’t have much to say.
I've caught up. currently chapter max 247. so here's my review: It's a massive rollercoaster ride but worth it. there are many spelling and grammar mistakes but it's more along the lines of what I view as mistypes and nothing major. I look forward to reading more.
Love the story and the characters The world building and writing style are so simple and captivating
I'm starting to feel bad because I see many works that deserve to have readers and lots of potential, I just hope it doesn't have a harem, because here I come to see a dragon become the strongest and on his journey of discovery not a boy who Every time he sees a girl he always thinks the same thing, not the typical Chinese MC who only knows how to hide and say "low profile is my religion" or something like "because of my family I will become stronger" I just hope there is an MC with PERSONALITY OWN that he decides to do things based on it and not for external reasons, well now let's read, I will give it 4 stars for the romance that will be forced and I know it without reading it.
love the story 💯 worth a read,the only downsight is about the less chps i hope author can do 2 chps per day or likely 14-15 chps per week then it will be great 👍.really recommended to everyone.
Hey guys, author here. this is a new review mainly to tell you somethings.i understand that grammatical errors exist at some points in the book I promise that next year, I'll try to get it properly edited thanks for your support so far, and happy New year
This is more unique than Miraculous ladybug. Not that it has similarities but this story is more well driven
I have to tell you that you are a great inspiration for me, good job and good continuation. Your story and parcours is a great model to learn from
Asher and Elsa, two of a kind! can't wait to see what the future holds for them
I saw this story on facebook and I love the story so far. Added to my collection to keep me updated with the updates. The author is also friendly and I love him for that. Please keep on writing! 🥰✨
First, the world building of the story is quite excellent, it holds so much potential for the story to expand further and give more plotlines to the story. Second, the writing quality is simple but has well detailed narration that makes it very intriguing to read. Third, the story is quite fast-paced and mostly focuses on the character development of the Main character. It is nice and makes the story easy to follow but at the cause of losing the development for the female lead or the lighting dragon. After all, the lighting dragon is quite a mystery in the plotline of the story. I only read a few chapters yet so my review might change after reading some more. Overall, this book is really interesting. Keep up the good work.
I just strarted reading Webnovel, this was one if the first novel I mistakenly came by, and it has been good, I wished it had more chapters in ground, the story is not just circled at meta powers, but it starts branching out into Mana, and other stuff, it's a good read
As a fellow author, I am impressed my the progression of this book, it has been nice from the start, My Dave character is Elsa, she really is the best aid one could ask for an their journey.
Overall a great book, but I will hold back details of my review till he crosses the hundred chapter mark, but I do recommend this book
the story plot is overall good, it has a hidden message, that there is always more to come, like the world of Elsa, we're Meta came from, how is Mana there. the story of the celestials and more, am loving this book the more I read
This novel is new so not many chapters have been published yet. Due to this i'll concentrate on the avaiable ones. The story is interesting with a good character design, keeping in mind the current amount of chapters. I hope to see some character development in the future tho. The world building is ok, as of know we had only three places so far: home town and surroundings, the trial grounds and now the academy. The grammar is good sometimes mistakes will occur words that don't make sense in the sentence are the majority, speeling mistakes are very few. Elements i personaly liked would be how the author dealt with the inheritance/system the ML inherited, making it not broken or overpowered. Additionaly the power watches they have to wear, at this point it's own classic feature. Hopefully we will get some chapters with his nonhuman part, i came looking for dragons so i wanna see/read some!
this book is great, the plot is amazing, just started it and I can't stopneed more updates please 🙏🙏
interesting read but... turned out to be a harem pretty much or just the MC wanting another relationship while already married (divorced in the end).
The characters are amazing. The plot is fast-paced and great. However, the author doing these annoying edits that are the last half of the chapter repeated jacking up the price makes it not worth spending the coins or the fast passes. if you're gonna do the chapter edits, then just re-release the chapter with the edit, and don't just stack on the same second half of the chapter.
I’ve read through 35 chapters as of currently, and I find it to be mediocre at best. The whole premise was great, and I especially liked the character’s backstory. However, the problem is the entirety of the plot is strange, and abnormal. First of all, the dynamic between Lily and the main character doesn’t make much sense. His “flirting” was just him praying on her backstory. It didn’t make sense, and realistically, is not how you acquire any type of relationship– friendship or not. It’s even more unnatural how close they get– within a span of 2 chapters. Moving on to the writing quality, to say the least, it’s lackluster. The dialogue between characters is no better. The whole problem is that the characters are just not realistic, they’re uncanny. Yes, mc’s relationship with mom does have a reasonable depth to them, but the way he perceives, addresses, and dotes on others, is uncanny. They’re plenty of novels with wonderful diction and style, and this is certainly not one of them. I’m not expecting collegial level writing, but a version of writing that incorporates clean grammar that doesn’t force readers to reread a sentence because of how strangely it was formatted. Regarding just about stability of updates, and world background, I don’t have much to say.
I've caught up. currently chapter max 247. so here's my review: It's a massive rollercoaster ride but worth it. there are many spelling and grammar mistakes but it's more along the lines of what I view as mistypes and nothing major. I look forward to reading more.
Love the story and the characters The world building and writing style are so simple and captivating
I'm starting to feel bad because I see many works that deserve to have readers and lots of potential, I just hope it doesn't have a harem, because here I come to see a dragon become the strongest and on his journey of discovery not a boy who Every time he sees a girl he always thinks the same thing, not the typical Chinese MC who only knows how to hide and say "low profile is my religion" or something like "because of my family I will become stronger" I just hope there is an MC with PERSONALITY OWN that he decides to do things based on it and not for external reasons, well now let's read, I will give it 4 stars for the romance that will be forced and I know it without reading it.
love the story 💯 worth a read,the only downsight is about the less chps i hope author can do 2 chps per day or likely 14-15 chps per week then it will be great 👍.really recommended to everyone.
Hey guys, author here. this is a new review mainly to tell you somethings.i understand that grammatical errors exist at some points in the book I promise that next year, I'll try to get it properly edited thanks for your support so far, and happy New year
This is more unique than Miraculous ladybug. Not that it has similarities but this story is more well driven
I have to tell you that you are a great inspiration for me, good job and good continuation. Your story and parcours is a great model to learn from
Asher and Elsa, two of a kind! can't wait to see what the future holds for them
I saw this story on facebook and I love the story so far. Added to my collection to keep me updated with the updates. The author is also friendly and I love him for that. Please keep on writing! 🥰✨
First, the world building of the story is quite excellent, it holds so much potential for the story to expand further and give more plotlines to the story. Second, the writing quality is simple but has well detailed narration that makes it very intriguing to read. Third, the story is quite fast-paced and mostly focuses on the character development of the Main character. It is nice and makes the story easy to follow but at the cause of losing the development for the female lead or the lighting dragon. After all, the lighting dragon is quite a mystery in the plotline of the story. I only read a few chapters yet so my review might change after reading some more. Overall, this book is really interesting. Keep up the good work.
I just strarted reading Webnovel, this was one if the first novel I mistakenly came by, and it has been good, I wished it had more chapters in ground, the story is not just circled at meta powers, but it starts branching out into Mana, and other stuff, it's a good read
As a fellow author, I am impressed my the progression of this book, it has been nice from the start, My Dave character is Elsa, she really is the best aid one could ask for an their journey.
Overall a great book, but I will hold back details of my review till he crosses the hundred chapter mark, but I do recommend this book
the story plot is overall good, it has a hidden message, that there is always more to come, like the world of Elsa, we're Meta came from, how is Mana there. the story of the celestials and more, am loving this book the more I read
This novel is new so not many chapters have been published yet. Due to this i'll concentrate on the avaiable ones. The story is interesting with a good character design, keeping in mind the current amount of chapters. I hope to see some character development in the future tho. The world building is ok, as of know we had only three places so far: home town and surroundings, the trial grounds and now the academy. The grammar is good sometimes mistakes will occur words that don't make sense in the sentence are the majority, speeling mistakes are very few. Elements i personaly liked would be how the author dealt with the inheritance/system the ML inherited, making it not broken or overpowered. Additionaly the power watches they have to wear, at this point it's own classic feature. Hopefully we will get some chapters with his nonhuman part, i came looking for dragons so i wanna see/read some!
this book is great, the plot is amazing, just started it and I can't stopneed more updates please 🙏🙏
interesting read but... turned out to be a harem pretty much or just the MC wanting another relationship while already married (divorced in the end).