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Interesting concept, lacklust plot. Story pacing is too fast, and plot holes pop up left and right. The story lacks exposition, and there is not enough context for a complex understanding of the characters and world background. Daniel, for example, has a system that makes him more money than 99.9% of people in the first four chapters. We don’t know where the system came from, how he acquired it, why he acquired it, and we don’t have any information on the background of the world like why modern names and brands are being used but a different type of coin (stellar coin) replaces the dollar, and libertopia replaces the name of the United States.
Great Job! I haven’t stopped reading since i started 👍🏽 PS Does he get Rachel back??
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Good Quality, Above average Story Development, Good Character Design, Great World Building.
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Is this translated from Chinese or an original story? It has that feel to it almost, but sort of misses the mark. The face slapping is less often, but the naming sense is similar. E-Country sounds like UK, while Libertopia is 100% the US. Liberty-Utopia shortened to Libertopia is kinda clever ngl. Currently have read up to chapter 29 as of writing. MC’s system just snowballs into another wish fulfillment OP system that gives exactly what he needs just before the next arc when he needs the ability. The viewers in his livestream seem to be very naive and have a below average IQ. The English names don’t exactly match this style that resembles urban Chinese system novels, but it’s slightly more unique this way. I don’t quite like how the currency is just called something-coin, but it’s easy to follow at least. There’s seggs, which is quite surprising. Overall, I would read to pass the time.
I JUST GOT DONE READING CHAPTER 145 AND I HAVE TO DAY ITS PRETTY GOOD!! I LIKE THE WAY THE PLOT IS FOR THE MOST PART EXCEPT THE SPOT WHERE AND I HAVE TO DAY ITS PRETTY GOOD!! I LIKE THE WAY THE PLOT IS PRETTY GOOD FOR THE MOST PART EXCEPT THE SPOT WHERE THE 3 GIRLS R ALL SPLIT UP! HE SHOULD GWT THEM ALL AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!! AND Y NOT HAVE THE SYSTEM OR THE MC HIMSELF COME UP WITH A WAY TO UNLOCK THE (DOORS IN UR HEAD) WITH OUT SIDE EFFECTS OR HAVE THE MC BE ABLE TO GIVE THE SYSTEM TO GIRLS AND THIS WAY THE MC CAN HELP THEM GET STRONGER AND THE GIRLS R ABLE TO GET A BUCH OF SKILLS TO HELP THEM!! AND HOW COME HE CANT GET ANOTHER GUN FROM THE SYSTEM LIKE THE GUN HE HAS NOW THIS WAY ITS A DULE WEAPONS!! AND HAVE THE SYSTEM ASSIGN DIFFERENT ABILITIES TO EACH GIRL SOCTHEY CAN MAKE THERE OWN MONEY LIKE THE MC OR LRT THEM HAVE THE SAME AS THE MC BUT LET THEM GO TO DIFFERENT PLACES THIS WAY THEY CAN MAKE WAY MORE MONEY AND THIS WAY THEY CAN BUY SOME STUFF THEY DONE NEED SO THEY CAN UNLOCK THE LANGUAGES THEY NEED OR HAVE THE SYSTEM OPEN A SHOP AND LET THEM BUY THINGS THEY NEED!!! MY PHONE IS BROKE SO I TEXT LIKE THIS
This book started out very good for the most part aside from some grammatical errors but this went from having an appraisal system in a world like our own that was unique and quite good to secret societies of superhumans and monsters from the mind of H.H. Holmes. Just feels like the author is forcing this change because now at chapter 170 the MC hasn't been to an auction in a long time and all he does is fight supernatural creatures.
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Although I haven't read very far yet I must say I really enjoy this novel. It is very unique, I like the urban feel and although the appraisal ability isn't new I like the way it is being used especially in an urban setting.
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Review at CH 70... FORCED PLOT.....well the story has been great up until now but the author decided to force the plot at this junction....Dan could have just dial the number of the Godfather but the author decided to force the plot for further chapters and if Daniel could kill the first guy on his land then he should have easily killed the second one too.
It was fun at the beginning, but there were quite a few repetitive chapters in the early stages. It wasn't until chapter 101 that the main plot truly began. The later plot developments were satisfying, and overall, it's a decent novel. Keep up the good work, author!
Pretty unexpected, but it's a beautiful novel. Unfortunately, webnovel does not support translation, if you buy chapters. So i can't read it. Also English is not my native language, I don't want to waste my time just for translation words that I don't understand. Good job writer.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
This review is write at CH19. Writing quality and update is good, Story develop is a bit boring? it like there was no main goal yet at this point it about mc get rich and learning about his ability and due to MC character that was a bit careless and bit dumb? it make story seem not make sense because the story make other character lower their brain to match MC, And World Background is just normal modern now?. But if you want novel that not serious and enjoy this one is OK!. -Suggest : The chat stream is so stupid they not look real at all, The real chat is so toxic and very smart, Try to think that you are a viewer your self and watch a guy on stream and this streamer don't chat with you in nonsense topic to entertain you and only chat with you when he was going to show his smart and 7in10 of the time if streamer don't answer chat they will chat ridiculous among them self, What kind of chat that still ask the streamer that only shake your head almost entire time.
Hello guys, author here. After 15 days of updating, my book is finally going to be premium. First off, I want to extend my gratitude to all of you who have been supportive and have read up to the latest chapter. The original intention of my writing is to bring joy to all of you. If my novel has brought you some happiness, then all my efforts are worthwhile. Your appreciation of my stories brings me an enormous sense of accomplishment. Now that the book is entering the publication phase, I hope you will continue to support me and subscribe to my upcoming chapters. Your subscriptions are the most important motivation for me to strive to write better stories! Moreover, I hope all readers can feel free to comment. I will try my best to interact with you, helping you understand more about the background and setting of this book. If you have any good suggestions, please write them in the comment section, I will definitely take a look. In conclusion, I hope you will continue subscribing and supporting. Also, you can vote for me with Power Stones, for which I would be immensely grateful! I will work even harder to bring you more interesting stories!
Interesting concept, lacklust plot. Story pacing is too fast, and plot holes pop up left and right. The story lacks exposition, and there is not enough context for a complex understanding of the characters and world background. Daniel, for example, has a system that makes him more money than 99.9% of people in the first four chapters. We don’t know where the system came from, how he acquired it, why he acquired it, and we don’t have any information on the background of the world like why modern names and brands are being used but a different type of coin (stellar coin) replaces the dollar, and libertopia replaces the name of the United States.
Great Job! I haven’t stopped reading since i started 👍🏽 PS Does he get Rachel back??
Reveal Spoiler Good Quality, Above average Story Development, Good Character Design, Great World Building.
Experience the awe-inspiring tale penned by an exceptional author. Are you seeking a captivating trailer video that befits your remarkable book? Connect with me on FB at "TRANMAXX PRO" for more info
Is this translated from Chinese or an original story? It has that feel to it almost, but sort of misses the mark. The face slapping is less often, but the naming sense is similar. E-Country sounds like UK, while Libertopia is 100% the US. Liberty-Utopia shortened to Libertopia is kinda clever ngl. Currently have read up to chapter 29 as of writing. MC’s system just snowballs into another wish fulfillment OP system that gives exactly what he needs just before the next arc when he needs the ability. The viewers in his livestream seem to be very naive and have a below average IQ. The English names don’t exactly match this style that resembles urban Chinese system novels, but it’s slightly more unique this way. I don’t quite like how the currency is just called something-coin, but it’s easy to follow at least. There’s seggs, which is quite surprising. Overall, I would read to pass the time.
I JUST GOT DONE READING CHAPTER 145 AND I HAVE TO DAY ITS PRETTY GOOD!! I LIKE THE WAY THE PLOT IS FOR THE MOST PART EXCEPT THE SPOT WHERE AND I HAVE TO DAY ITS PRETTY GOOD!! I LIKE THE WAY THE PLOT IS PRETTY GOOD FOR THE MOST PART EXCEPT THE SPOT WHERE THE 3 GIRLS R ALL SPLIT UP! HE SHOULD GWT THEM ALL AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!! AND Y NOT HAVE THE SYSTEM OR THE MC HIMSELF COME UP WITH A WAY TO UNLOCK THE (DOORS IN UR HEAD) WITH OUT SIDE EFFECTS OR HAVE THE MC BE ABLE TO GIVE THE SYSTEM TO GIRLS AND THIS WAY THE MC CAN HELP THEM GET STRONGER AND THE GIRLS R ABLE TO GET A BUCH OF SKILLS TO HELP THEM!! AND HOW COME HE CANT GET ANOTHER GUN FROM THE SYSTEM LIKE THE GUN HE HAS NOW THIS WAY ITS A DULE WEAPONS!! AND HAVE THE SYSTEM ASSIGN DIFFERENT ABILITIES TO EACH GIRL SOCTHEY CAN MAKE THERE OWN MONEY LIKE THE MC OR LRT THEM HAVE THE SAME AS THE MC BUT LET THEM GO TO DIFFERENT PLACES THIS WAY THEY CAN MAKE WAY MORE MONEY AND THIS WAY THEY CAN BUY SOME STUFF THEY DONE NEED SO THEY CAN UNLOCK THE LANGUAGES THEY NEED OR HAVE THE SYSTEM OPEN A SHOP AND LET THEM BUY THINGS THEY NEED!!! MY PHONE IS BROKE SO I TEXT LIKE THIS
This book started out very good for the most part aside from some grammatical errors but this went from having an appraisal system in a world like our own that was unique and quite good to secret societies of superhumans and monsters from the mind of H.H. Holmes. Just feels like the author is forcing this change because now at chapter 170 the MC hasn't been to an auction in a long time and all he does is fight supernatural creatures.
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Although I haven't read very far yet I must say I really enjoy this novel. It is very unique, I like the urban feel and although the appraisal ability isn't new I like the way it is being used especially in an urban setting.
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Review at CH 70... FORCED PLOT.....well the story has been great up until now but the author decided to force the plot at this junction....Dan could have just dial the number of the Godfather but the author decided to force the plot for further chapters and if Daniel could kill the first guy on his land then he should have easily killed the second one too.
It was fun at the beginning, but there were quite a few repetitive chapters in the early stages. It wasn't until chapter 101 that the main plot truly began. The later plot developments were satisfying, and overall, it's a decent novel. Keep up the good work, author!
Pretty unexpected, but it's a beautiful novel. Unfortunately, webnovel does not support translation, if you buy chapters. So i can't read it. Also English is not my native language, I don't want to waste my time just for translation words that I don't understand. Good job writer.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
This review is write at CH19. Writing quality and update is good, Story develop is a bit boring? it like there was no main goal yet at this point it about mc get rich and learning about his ability and due to MC character that was a bit careless and bit dumb? it make story seem not make sense because the story make other character lower their brain to match MC, And World Background is just normal modern now?. But if you want novel that not serious and enjoy this one is OK!. -Suggest : The chat stream is so stupid they not look real at all, The real chat is so toxic and very smart, Try to think that you are a viewer your self and watch a guy on stream and this streamer don't chat with you in nonsense topic to entertain you and only chat with you when he was going to show his smart and 7in10 of the time if streamer don't answer chat they will chat ridiculous among them self, What kind of chat that still ask the streamer that only shake your head almost entire time.
Hello guys, author here. After 15 days of updating, my book is finally going to be premium. First off, I want to extend my gratitude to all of you who have been supportive and have read up to the latest chapter. The original intention of my writing is to bring joy to all of you. If my novel has brought you some happiness, then all my efforts are worthwhile. Your appreciation of my stories brings me an enormous sense of accomplishment. Now that the book is entering the publication phase, I hope you will continue to support me and subscribe to my upcoming chapters. Your subscriptions are the most important motivation for me to strive to write better stories! Moreover, I hope all readers can feel free to comment. I will try my best to interact with you, helping you understand more about the background and setting of this book. If you have any good suggestions, please write them in the comment section, I will definitely take a look. In conclusion, I hope you will continue subscribing and supporting. Also, you can vote for me with Power Stones, for which I would be immensely grateful! I will work even harder to bring you more interesting stories!