Reviews of A Game Of Chess With A Vampire by AngelLily - Webnovel

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nkeeavenlymortal

I am at the latest chapter “13” and it’s time to give a well deserving review. This is a very good book in all honesty. The story line is just amazing, unpredictable and so good. I was hooked by the first few chapters. Oh my god! It’s different from the novels I have read here. The title alone proves that. Grammar: 10/10. I have not glimpsed any grammar mistakes. Shows that author proof read these chapters more than properly. Good job on that author! Character Development: From these thirteen chapter, i can assure you that the female lead is very sensible, knowledgeable, likable and very fit for the male lead regardless of her being a human. Not in strength, but mindset and intelligence. The Male lead? He is a very unique character. I guarantee you that he is not at all abusive. As a matter of fact, you guys will love him. I already do, myself. By unique, I mean that he behaves differently, you will get to find out when you pick up the book. Story development: So far loving it. It’s looking very good. World background: Urgh😩, its detailed, I love it! Including the characters. Their descriptions are chef kiss👌 10/10 All in all, this is authors best book in my opinion. It’s clear, she took her time with it because evrything is near perfection! More chapters please, author. Maybe a mass release? I 100% recommend. Give it a chance and thank me later😩👌 Also this books gives Italian Mafian movie vibes. Spoiler, it’s mafia as well.

1yr
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Michelle_Reece

I always look forward to anything AngelLily writes,but I'm very excited about this book.I have read 16 chapters and was hooked from the first chapter.I must say this is one of her best books,it hooks you in immediately and keeps you on your toes.So excited to see where this strory goes.Strong female lead as always and the male lead is a unique character.The relationship between the leads are very compelling.The grammar is perfect,I can see the growth in her writing.I can see sleepless nights and obsessing over reading this book.And praying for a lot of mass release.I would highly recommend reading this book and all of her other books.

1yr
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Melynn
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When I started to read this I can't put it down and waiting for the next update .AngelLily is a great author, mostly the FL at first they're weak, but actually they're smart, funny and strong. And a reliable one. And the ML are filthy-rich, handsome and powerful. That attracts me more..😘😊🤗

1yr
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Magnexindra

It is a slow burn tragic romance novel. There is barely kissing. Real snusnu hanky panky doesn’t start until chapter 360. There are lots misunderstandings that stem from two ADULTS not willing to listen when one speaks, and making a lot of assumptions about what the other is thinking. The way the ML is written, leads me to believe that he is on the ASD spectrum. And much of the FL’s stupidly can be explained by PTSD. The writing is mostly good. There is some carelessness with the names that get a bit annoying when audio reading. There are some world building inconsistencies that got on my nerves and it would have been better if less details were given. Is Edward a common Vampire or not? In once scene he needs to be fully covered and in another he’s chatting in the garden IN THE MORNING. How long is this moon cycle that every full moon the royals go into heat and their heat can last for a few weeks? So are royals in heat 75% of the time?

1mth
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cmaybeller

only with two pages from this book I started loving it

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ClaraJBong

The Author took usual tropes about vampires, mate bond and revenge and twisted them in a unique way. One of the top books if you are looking for a story where the male lead learns about emotions. Storytelling, story development, characters design, world building are fab! Well worth reading through sleepless nights!

7mth
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Cha_Ketha_Griffin

This book was such an AMAZING read. Thank you, author, for a fantastic story. This book has excellent grammar and in-depth detail. If you want to read another AMAZING book from this brilliant author, check out her new book, Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha. You won't be disappointed. It's the same BRILLIANT author, just a different pen name Peach BunBun. Go check her new book. Have a beautiful day, everyone.

9mth
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Linda1276

totally intense can't put it down love it❤️🔥[img=recommend][img=update]

10mth
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CeEE21
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Every character is unique and great. A very good story line too. I'm so glued to this book 🥰🥰💯💯

10mth
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Valoel

I love how Avelina and Draven get along. Their bond is heartwarming.

11mth
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Valoel

This story makes the readers captivated by Angel lily's spell. I spend all the FPs i havse on this book. IT IS AMAZING. Well done.

11mth
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VANDANANAIR

wonderful gripping read putting you in a trance and curiosity to know more

11mth
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Elona_Elen

Hm, I'm not exactly reading for the romance because I've had my fill with romance. I'm simply reading and following for the incredible plot 10/10 plot so far. Ah, yes, for insight, this book is not a full on romance. Half of plot, half of romance.

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Chichi_Chamba

Intelligent, smart Male lead. Cautious, female lead who doesn't make rash decisions. In 107 chapters and so far, I love her. A few mistakes here and there, but shows she's still a human after all. Great book so far. Recommended

1yr
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Demitry_Lola

The quality of this book is completely worth the coins. Beautiful fine writing and grammar. Well-defined and well-structured sentences! I give you a 10/10 author. Great storyline that keeps both romance and plot balanced. I'm not into a full-on romance, so this book is just right for me.This is highly recommended for anyone looking for good book recommendations. You won't be disappointed. This book will most certainly keep me here in Webnovel for a while

1yr
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Vancouver_Melany

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Cha_Ketha_Griffin

I am in absolute LOVE with this book. The author puts her WHOLE HEART into this book. I wish that she would go back to two chapters a day instead of one 😭. One chapter is not enough, not long enough. But I know she had something going on in her life that is preventing that. I am gonna keep supporting and reading each chapter and rereading previous chapters. Because yes, this book is just that FANTASTIC. Thank you, author, for an AMAZING book. I am looking forward to the coming chapters. READ THIS BOOK, you won't be disappointed 😁

1yr
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Daoist1cbdZS

pretty good story and good character design

1yr
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Arizonapizza

So far loved it! Excellent writing! ✍️ highly recommended

1yr
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Esorya

The incredible writing style and vivid descriptions that literally painted images in my mind, and not to the mention, the well written characters and their interactions that always made me smile and giggle like crazy. Ahh I'm loving this!!

1yr
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Arinze_Olive

New fresh plot. Well written with great grammar. Very interesting characters. Sunshine×grumpy

1yr
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Babybili

Excellent writing✍️! Fresh plot and well-created characters👌❤️

1yr
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Iulia1
LV 14 Badge

what is the possibility to ready the whole book without waiting for all the daily chapters? where we cand find the whole book?

1yr
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Kewl_Enjo

This is my first review. I'm enchanted by the ML's mix of vulnerability, calculating intelligence, and stoicism. I'm hooked on the chess game, what's Valentine's goal, the ML' s reason for his differences- that mystery and why FL might or could be the death of him.Let's hope his Queen will win the game.

1yr
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nordeebag12

Excellent writing ✍️ looking forward for more of your books

1yr
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Ophelia_Filipi

I don’t really have a lot to say but I am speechless. The storyline is so interesting and the female lead is a such a brillian5 woman. Very compatible with the male lead even though he’s quite different. I really love the male lead. His character is something you probably never seen in a book. I can’t explain but if you do read the book you would understand. The grammar is very good as well

1yr
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nkeeavenlymortal

This is my second review on this boom and am at Chapter 130. This book is beyond amazing!! The plot! Chef kiss The male lead is a genius!!!!! he is so freaking smart and intelligent. Omg!! Y'all need to read this book. I have never felt so hyped up reading a book before!!!! Omg, the male lead!!! He is way more than I expected. He literally played with the characters as if they are under his control. BwhahahHah. They are literally under his control, yet they don't know.

1yr
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LeiaHolmes

This is a worth reading book without a doubt. It's 5 stars from me because it's on my list of books I would be willing to read again and not get bored with it. Both male lead are female lead are very well written and their interactions are so cute and lovely it will have you giggling over and over again

1yr
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cuttie_Mickey1968

can't believe i read this book within a day with coins i keep purchasing to make sure i reach to the last update because of the story line. It's amazing honestly . love your works

1yr
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The_Sweet_Sparrow

AngelLily has done it again and written a fascinating and beautiful story. There are excellently developed characters and a marvelous plot that leaves you speculating about what will happen next. FL has a subtle soft side; I think she will develop into a strong character. In contrast, the ML is possessive and seems uncompromising. I am curious to see where his story will lead us. The writing is astoundingly eloquent. The grammar is superb, along with the tone and flow. As of now, I think it deserves a five-star rating. 

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1yr
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nkeeavenlymortal

I am at the latest chapter “13” and it’s time to give a well deserving review. This is a very good book in all honesty. The story line is just amazing, unpredictable and so good. I was hooked by the first few chapters. Oh my god! It’s different from the novels I have read here. The title alone proves that. Grammar: 10/10. I have not glimpsed any grammar mistakes. Shows that author proof read these chapters more than properly. Good job on that author! Character Development: From these thirteen chapter, i can assure you that the female lead is very sensible, knowledgeable, likable and very fit for the male lead regardless of her being a human. Not in strength, but mindset and intelligence. The Male lead? He is a very unique character. I guarantee you that he is not at all abusive. As a matter of fact, you guys will love him. I already do, myself. By unique, I mean that he behaves differently, you will get to find out when you pick up the book. Story development: So far loving it. It’s looking very good. World background: Urgh😩, its detailed, I love it! Including the characters. Their descriptions are chef kiss👌 10/10 All in all, this is authors best book in my opinion. It’s clear, she took her time with it because evrything is near perfection! More chapters please, author. Maybe a mass release? I 100% recommend. Give it a chance and thank me later😩👌 Also this books gives Italian Mafian movie vibes. Spoiler, it’s mafia as well.

1yr
View 3 Replies
Michelle_Reece

I always look forward to anything AngelLily writes,but I'm very excited about this book.I have read 16 chapters and was hooked from the first chapter.I must say this is one of her best books,it hooks you in immediately and keeps you on your toes.So excited to see where this strory goes.Strong female lead as always and the male lead is a unique character.The relationship between the leads are very compelling.The grammar is perfect,I can see the growth in her writing.I can see sleepless nights and obsessing over reading this book.And praying for a lot of mass release.I would highly recommend reading this book and all of her other books.

1yr
View 2 Replies
Melynn
LV 13 Badge

When I started to read this I can't put it down and waiting for the next update .AngelLily is a great author, mostly the FL at first they're weak, but actually they're smart, funny and strong. And a reliable one. And the ML are filthy-rich, handsome and powerful. That attracts me more..😘😊🤗

1yr
View 2 Replies
Magnexindra

It is a slow burn tragic romance novel. There is barely kissing. Real snusnu hanky panky doesn’t start until chapter 360. There are lots misunderstandings that stem from two ADULTS not willing to listen when one speaks, and making a lot of assumptions about what the other is thinking. The way the ML is written, leads me to believe that he is on the ASD spectrum. And much of the FL’s stupidly can be explained by PTSD. The writing is mostly good. There is some carelessness with the names that get a bit annoying when audio reading. There are some world building inconsistencies that got on my nerves and it would have been better if less details were given. Is Edward a common Vampire or not? In once scene he needs to be fully covered and in another he’s chatting in the garden IN THE MORNING. How long is this moon cycle that every full moon the royals go into heat and their heat can last for a few weeks? So are royals in heat 75% of the time?

1mth
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cmaybeller

only with two pages from this book I started loving it

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6mth
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ClaraJBong

The Author took usual tropes about vampires, mate bond and revenge and twisted them in a unique way. One of the top books if you are looking for a story where the male lead learns about emotions. Storytelling, story development, characters design, world building are fab! Well worth reading through sleepless nights!

7mth
View 0 Replies
Cha_Ketha_Griffin

This book was such an AMAZING read. Thank you, author, for a fantastic story. This book has excellent grammar and in-depth detail. If you want to read another AMAZING book from this brilliant author, check out her new book, Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha. You won't be disappointed. It's the same BRILLIANT author, just a different pen name Peach BunBun. Go check her new book. Have a beautiful day, everyone.

9mth
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Linda1276

totally intense can't put it down love it❤️🔥[img=recommend][img=update]

10mth
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CeEE21
LV 14 Badge

Every character is unique and great. A very good story line too. I'm so glued to this book 🥰🥰💯💯

10mth
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Valoel

I love how Avelina and Draven get along. Their bond is heartwarming.

11mth
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Valoel

This story makes the readers captivated by Angel lily's spell. I spend all the FPs i havse on this book. IT IS AMAZING. Well done.

11mth
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VANDANANAIR

wonderful gripping read putting you in a trance and curiosity to know more

11mth
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Elona_Elen

Hm, I'm not exactly reading for the romance because I've had my fill with romance. I'm simply reading and following for the incredible plot 10/10 plot so far. Ah, yes, for insight, this book is not a full on romance. Half of plot, half of romance.

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1yr
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Chichi_Chamba

Intelligent, smart Male lead. Cautious, female lead who doesn't make rash decisions. In 107 chapters and so far, I love her. A few mistakes here and there, but shows she's still a human after all. Great book so far. Recommended

1yr
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Demitry_Lola

The quality of this book is completely worth the coins. Beautiful fine writing and grammar. Well-defined and well-structured sentences! I give you a 10/10 author. Great storyline that keeps both romance and plot balanced. I'm not into a full-on romance, so this book is just right for me.This is highly recommended for anyone looking for good book recommendations. You won't be disappointed. This book will most certainly keep me here in Webnovel for a while

1yr
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Vancouver_Melany

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1yr
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Cha_Ketha_Griffin

I am in absolute LOVE with this book. The author puts her WHOLE HEART into this book. I wish that she would go back to two chapters a day instead of one 😭. One chapter is not enough, not long enough. But I know she had something going on in her life that is preventing that. I am gonna keep supporting and reading each chapter and rereading previous chapters. Because yes, this book is just that FANTASTIC. Thank you, author, for an AMAZING book. I am looking forward to the coming chapters. READ THIS BOOK, you won't be disappointed 😁

1yr
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Daoist1cbdZS

pretty good story and good character design

1yr
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Arizonapizza

So far loved it! Excellent writing! ✍️ highly recommended

1yr
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Esorya

The incredible writing style and vivid descriptions that literally painted images in my mind, and not to the mention, the well written characters and their interactions that always made me smile and giggle like crazy. Ahh I'm loving this!!

1yr
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Arinze_Olive

New fresh plot. Well written with great grammar. Very interesting characters. Sunshine×grumpy

1yr
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Babybili

Excellent writing✍️! Fresh plot and well-created characters👌❤️

1yr
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Iulia1
LV 14 Badge

what is the possibility to ready the whole book without waiting for all the daily chapters? where we cand find the whole book?

1yr
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Kewl_Enjo

This is my first review. I'm enchanted by the ML's mix of vulnerability, calculating intelligence, and stoicism. I'm hooked on the chess game, what's Valentine's goal, the ML' s reason for his differences- that mystery and why FL might or could be the death of him.Let's hope his Queen will win the game.

1yr
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nordeebag12

Excellent writing ✍️ looking forward for more of your books

1yr
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Ophelia_Filipi

I don’t really have a lot to say but I am speechless. The storyline is so interesting and the female lead is a such a brillian5 woman. Very compatible with the male lead even though he’s quite different. I really love the male lead. His character is something you probably never seen in a book. I can’t explain but if you do read the book you would understand. The grammar is very good as well

1yr
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nkeeavenlymortal

This is my second review on this boom and am at Chapter 130. This book is beyond amazing!! The plot! Chef kiss The male lead is a genius!!!!! he is so freaking smart and intelligent. Omg!! Y'all need to read this book. I have never felt so hyped up reading a book before!!!! Omg, the male lead!!! He is way more than I expected. He literally played with the characters as if they are under his control. BwhahahHah. They are literally under his control, yet they don't know.

1yr
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LeiaHolmes

This is a worth reading book without a doubt. It's 5 stars from me because it's on my list of books I would be willing to read again and not get bored with it. Both male lead are female lead are very well written and their interactions are so cute and lovely it will have you giggling over and over again

1yr
View 0 Replies
cuttie_Mickey1968

can't believe i read this book within a day with coins i keep purchasing to make sure i reach to the last update because of the story line. It's amazing honestly . love your works

1yr
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The_Sweet_Sparrow

AngelLily has done it again and written a fascinating and beautiful story. There are excellently developed characters and a marvelous plot that leaves you speculating about what will happen next. FL has a subtle soft side; I think she will develop into a strong character. In contrast, the ML is possessive and seems uncompromising. I am curious to see where his story will lead us. The writing is astoundingly eloquent. The grammar is superb, along with the tone and flow. As of now, I think it deserves a five-star rating. 

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1yr
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