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I really enjoyed this novel and got a bit disappointed being caught up with the story and I am excited about how he will train and defeat the dragon and I hope to see him more mature and powerful in future chapters. Great work author please don't drop and drag the story or make it Harem and I am excited what the future of MC holds.
Really sad that the novwl got dropped, i really liked it🥺 ....hope the author starts picking the novel up again.......🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
So I read it till author signed the contract I have to say the writing is a bit good and you can read it only if you haven't read The Novel's extra , only then you would think this novel as quite good as the scenarios , characters with only changing their names and even dialogues are copied ,so I would recommend you to read "The Novel's extra " more than this, but I would commend author for merging the story , not perfectly but good and I don't know if author is deleting reviews which talks about his copying as I haven't seen an single review talking about this , I would continue reading this novel hoping author stops copying after getting contracted . I will come back to this review to respond after reading till the latest update if it remains that is.
So far this is one of the best novels I have ever read. The world building is awesome. The MC is not OP from the first chapter but actually needs to but in an effort to compensate for is average talent. The english is very good as well. Sadly though, the author doesn't update this masterpiece any longer...
Is this related to Supreme Magus? The father of modern magic is Lith Verhan? Either that or the author was a avid reader of Supreme Magus. Author like to used the names of famous characters from other stories.
Writing Quality: 4.5 out of 5There's a lot to improve with the Writing Quality, nonetheless impressive work so far.Story Development: 4.5 out of 5Same here.Character Design: 4.5 out of 5Same here too.Updating Stability: 4.5 out of 5I want more chapters, of course.World Background: 4.5 out of 5Give it more background.
For someone who claims to be a former mercenary who faced various things and was reborn, it's really strange (and frustrating to read) to see MC often nervous like a pubescent teenager when taking lessons at the academy or facing teachers... where is his mentality as an MC regressors. it's bloody boring.. (I stopped at chapter 31 btw)
MC is supposed to be 28 year old reincarnate but he is more childish than the other kids and his experience is pretty much useless ......
The story development is incredible!There is a potential love story and I can't wait for it to come out! 😁 I hope that the author can churn out more chapters faster.But I don't mean to put pressure on the author.
Seems like the author likes to give out redundant information for the sole purpose of adding more chapters. I only made it to the 10th chapter and really it was like 4 or 5 chapters of actual unique information. There was one 3 chapter stretch when he revived that info was repeated multiple times and could have just been one chapter.
A unique regression story that has a good storyline is rare nowadays. I'm 100 chapters in and still want more (too bad I caught up to it). This is one of the novels that made me start reading in "Webnovel", time to commence chapter-stacking. You're doing a great job author.👌
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Stayed as interesting to you realize the only difference between your average fantasy novel and this one is the Indian names for the kingdoms, warrior classes etc. The reason I hate this MC is the same reason I hate most second chance MC's. They continue to act like children even though they've experienced "the depths of despair" before. He's also the master of bad plans. Read till ch 74, and so far it seems deus ex machina is his only skill
Just a question before i start reading.There is a summon tag, does that mean he will summon people/animal or not?
A pleasant surprise. I'm liking the story, interesting charecters. Please don't drop it, I'm looking forward to reading further Also, while it must be said, there are others in the same genre, tbh, with so many light novels out now, it's not surprising
nothing new .Old reincarnation days at accademy ,magic , adventure and some love interest . If you bored and nothing to read them u can give it a try.
Wow, I read only 10 chapters but already I addicted, It's surprising to write Death itself that way, Ruind's Noble or trash character is always amusing to read.. world building and character development top notch. I am hoping to see its webtoon version. it's maybe shameless to post here, He he, Please read my original work: "Sejin I love you". Thank you.
Feel quite bland for me. The MC seems a bit clumsy not likeable, and other extra doesn't feel like living character. Maybe it would be really good if the story tell in 3rd POV. Well anyways the writing quality and plot story quite well, at least above average 👌
Writing the review once again after 70 chapters. Firstly let's talk about pros. 1. The story seems fresh which doesn't follow the generic novel theme of making the mc overpowered without any reason. 2. All the supporting characters seems to have their own backstory, which gives a sense of familiarity to the reader instead of just considering them as extra characters. 3. The writing quality so far is good with very little grammatical errors, which is hard to find in webnovel these days. 4. THIS NOVEL IS NOT HAREM. 5. The author is very interactive, listen to his readers and takes suggestions which are very good from my perspective. Now coming to the cons. 1. Some two chapters from the novel seem very familiar to a certain novel, although the author has corrected himself and is developing his own story, I had to mention that. 2. The story progress is very slow, which may lead the readers to annoyance. 3. The author tends to repeat the MC goals every now and then which may seem very repetitive. That's all. This is my view of the novel. I would say pretty good, a solid 9/10.Let's see how the story progress and I will be back to write the review once again after 150 chapters. Good luck author keep up the good work.
this is a good novel but i don't like the system much i want the MC redo with his own hand rather than depend in some kind of system and some first chapters remind me about The Novel's Extra like he being different when choose weapon ( picking gun specially) and the squid test st i don't know
This is a good novel. However, i have one suggestion. The class names are too complicated and hard to remember. Unless the people understand the origin it will be hard to remember. So, i suggest changing it into something simpler like alpha, beta, delta or something. Also i forgot what the MC looks like or was it even explained? So can u lemme know the description of the MC please author?
similar synopsis and prologue as another manhwa check it " a low rank soldier becoming a monarch ". But I like this work too keep up[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Here comes the shameless Author😁. As the Author, I am giving myself a 5 star, got to believe in myself after all. I am leaving this review here not to increase my reviews but to let the readers intract with me. I am a new author so I know there will many mistakes and many things for me learn from. So if anyone feels like I am lacking in some area please do point it out by leaving a comment, I will try to improve myself and deliver a story that you guys will enjoy. As for the story...I will not say anything, Just read 10-14 chapters, I promise you will not regret it. Lastly, thanks for taking your time to read this. I hope you guys have a good day. P. S: This novel is my entry to webnovel 2023, so please vote and support the novel. !!! Give me your Powerstones !!!
A pleasant surprise for sure, an enjoyable read found in a random browsing. Whilst the regression genre is written to death at this point, I feel this novel has a good grasp on the fundamental aspects that make it enjoyable without getting too lost in their personal fantasy. Rebirth of the ruined noble (seen that same title at least 5 times) is the author's first fiction on webnovel but the author has shown great basic proficiency with english grammar, character writing and plot development. The novel is definitely worth a read for those who like the regression genre but be aware readers, the author has confidently started charging privilege with multiple tiers so be prepared to spend some coins once you start enjoying the novel.
I really enjoyed this novel and got a bit disappointed being caught up with the story and I am excited about how he will train and defeat the dragon and I hope to see him more mature and powerful in future chapters. Great work author please don't drop and drag the story or make it Harem and I am excited what the future of MC holds.
Really sad that the novwl got dropped, i really liked it🥺 ....hope the author starts picking the novel up again.......🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
So I read it till author signed the contract I have to say the writing is a bit good and you can read it only if you haven't read The Novel's extra , only then you would think this novel as quite good as the scenarios , characters with only changing their names and even dialogues are copied ,so I would recommend you to read "The Novel's extra " more than this, but I would commend author for merging the story , not perfectly but good and I don't know if author is deleting reviews which talks about his copying as I haven't seen an single review talking about this , I would continue reading this novel hoping author stops copying after getting contracted . I will come back to this review to respond after reading till the latest update if it remains that is.
So far this is one of the best novels I have ever read. The world building is awesome. The MC is not OP from the first chapter but actually needs to but in an effort to compensate for is average talent. The english is very good as well. Sadly though, the author doesn't update this masterpiece any longer...
Is this related to Supreme Magus? The father of modern magic is Lith Verhan? Either that or the author was a avid reader of Supreme Magus. Author like to used the names of famous characters from other stories.
Writing Quality: 4.5 out of 5There's a lot to improve with the Writing Quality, nonetheless impressive work so far.Story Development: 4.5 out of 5Same here.Character Design: 4.5 out of 5Same here too.Updating Stability: 4.5 out of 5I want more chapters, of course.World Background: 4.5 out of 5Give it more background.
For someone who claims to be a former mercenary who faced various things and was reborn, it's really strange (and frustrating to read) to see MC often nervous like a pubescent teenager when taking lessons at the academy or facing teachers... where is his mentality as an MC regressors. it's bloody boring.. (I stopped at chapter 31 btw)
MC is supposed to be 28 year old reincarnate but he is more childish than the other kids and his experience is pretty much useless ......
The story development is incredible!There is a potential love story and I can't wait for it to come out! 😁 I hope that the author can churn out more chapters faster.But I don't mean to put pressure on the author.
Seems like the author likes to give out redundant information for the sole purpose of adding more chapters. I only made it to the 10th chapter and really it was like 4 or 5 chapters of actual unique information. There was one 3 chapter stretch when he revived that info was repeated multiple times and could have just been one chapter.
A unique regression story that has a good storyline is rare nowadays. I'm 100 chapters in and still want more (too bad I caught up to it). This is one of the novels that made me start reading in "Webnovel", time to commence chapter-stacking. You're doing a great job author.👌
.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,. .. .,.,.,.,..,.,,..,.,.,.,..,
Stayed as interesting to you realize the only difference between your average fantasy novel and this one is the Indian names for the kingdoms, warrior classes etc. The reason I hate this MC is the same reason I hate most second chance MC's. They continue to act like children even though they've experienced "the depths of despair" before. He's also the master of bad plans. Read till ch 74, and so far it seems deus ex machina is his only skill
Just a question before i start reading.There is a summon tag, does that mean he will summon people/animal or not?
A pleasant surprise. I'm liking the story, interesting charecters. Please don't drop it, I'm looking forward to reading further Also, while it must be said, there are others in the same genre, tbh, with so many light novels out now, it's not surprising
nothing new .Old reincarnation days at accademy ,magic , adventure and some love interest . If you bored and nothing to read them u can give it a try.
Wow, I read only 10 chapters but already I addicted, It's surprising to write Death itself that way, Ruind's Noble or trash character is always amusing to read.. world building and character development top notch. I am hoping to see its webtoon version. it's maybe shameless to post here, He he, Please read my original work: "Sejin I love you". Thank you.
Feel quite bland for me. The MC seems a bit clumsy not likeable, and other extra doesn't feel like living character. Maybe it would be really good if the story tell in 3rd POV. Well anyways the writing quality and plot story quite well, at least above average 👌
Writing the review once again after 70 chapters. Firstly let's talk about pros. 1. The story seems fresh which doesn't follow the generic novel theme of making the mc overpowered without any reason. 2. All the supporting characters seems to have their own backstory, which gives a sense of familiarity to the reader instead of just considering them as extra characters. 3. The writing quality so far is good with very little grammatical errors, which is hard to find in webnovel these days. 4. THIS NOVEL IS NOT HAREM. 5. The author is very interactive, listen to his readers and takes suggestions which are very good from my perspective. Now coming to the cons. 1. Some two chapters from the novel seem very familiar to a certain novel, although the author has corrected himself and is developing his own story, I had to mention that. 2. The story progress is very slow, which may lead the readers to annoyance. 3. The author tends to repeat the MC goals every now and then which may seem very repetitive. That's all. This is my view of the novel. I would say pretty good, a solid 9/10.Let's see how the story progress and I will be back to write the review once again after 150 chapters. Good luck author keep up the good work.
this is a good novel but i don't like the system much i want the MC redo with his own hand rather than depend in some kind of system and some first chapters remind me about The Novel's Extra like he being different when choose weapon ( picking gun specially) and the squid test st i don't know
This is a good novel. However, i have one suggestion. The class names are too complicated and hard to remember. Unless the people understand the origin it will be hard to remember. So, i suggest changing it into something simpler like alpha, beta, delta or something. Also i forgot what the MC looks like or was it even explained? So can u lemme know the description of the MC please author?
similar synopsis and prologue as another manhwa check it " a low rank soldier becoming a monarch ". But I like this work too keep up[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Here comes the shameless Author😁. As the Author, I am giving myself a 5 star, got to believe in myself after all. I am leaving this review here not to increase my reviews but to let the readers intract with me. I am a new author so I know there will many mistakes and many things for me learn from. So if anyone feels like I am lacking in some area please do point it out by leaving a comment, I will try to improve myself and deliver a story that you guys will enjoy. As for the story...I will not say anything, Just read 10-14 chapters, I promise you will not regret it. Lastly, thanks for taking your time to read this. I hope you guys have a good day. P. S: This novel is my entry to webnovel 2023, so please vote and support the novel. !!! Give me your Powerstones !!!
A pleasant surprise for sure, an enjoyable read found in a random browsing. Whilst the regression genre is written to death at this point, I feel this novel has a good grasp on the fundamental aspects that make it enjoyable without getting too lost in their personal fantasy. Rebirth of the ruined noble (seen that same title at least 5 times) is the author's first fiction on webnovel but the author has shown great basic proficiency with english grammar, character writing and plot development. The novel is definitely worth a read for those who like the regression genre but be aware readers, the author has confidently started charging privilege with multiple tiers so be prepared to spend some coins once you start enjoying the novel.