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this is one of the best Naruto fanfiction I've ever read,please continue this!
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Author did you delete paragraphs cause I swear there were a 100+ chapters the last time I read your book
bruhhh.!!! i was reading it! i was on 44 chapter where izumi was confronted by orochimaru but u changed the sequences!! from where should i read! i am frustrated bro!
did you just remove 45 chapters __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Review after the story enters Shippuden: For readers who want completely civilian OC, it is not one of them, but close enough. It doesn't have many fights for mc, and in the first volume and now in shippuden, she seems to be more interested in money, getting strong people on her side, and plans to build Uzu. While the story may have its up and lows, I am giving the five stars because how legendarily she used Kotoamatsukami and Tsukuyomi in combination to get Orochimaru on her side. Though I don't like the karma that is probably going to be used to make Shiori an Otsutsuki in the future, I am satisfied as long as it brings more world building to politics, and just everything else, like how it justified civilian council, and all that stuff. I have put it in my second favourite after Goddess of Ice
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i haven't read many female mc novels but this one is my favourite female mc novel 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 💕💕💕💕💕😘😘
I kinda hate myself for liking this fic. It is a grooming fic about a thousand year old taking advantage of a small, innocent child and building him to be her perfect husbando… but I like it.
One of those fic that has good start .. but the development of plot and writing quality has deteriorated after chapter 60-70.. Give it a try if you want..maybe you'll like this story tho it has some inconsistencies and some parts are confusing specifically the Boruto time travel part..
I've caught up with the current chapter and I'mma say that this fanfic is a Hidden Gem below the hundreds of fanfics!! This Novel just showed how you could reveal something from the future to the past without causing too much commotions! Plus the Story seems like planned with the mc saving izumi to izumi being evil and then good again, great story development you did not just follow the Canon but also made your own villain the mc is not weak yet also not to op!!
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Review at Volume 3.5, chapter 109. Writing quality is good, with not many grammatical and spelling mistakes. Story development is GOD tier. The butterfly flaps its wings, and it is interesting and realistic. It even filled a major plothole in chapter 109. Character design is great. She doesn't remain constant, put develops in the story due to an event. Update stability is quite good. I doubt it will be dropped. World background is GOD tier, considering it is Naruto. Overall, a must read. I am actually liking it on par with Goddess of Ice fanfic, which I considered to be the peak till now.
I really like this story as it introduce lots of unique perspectives and realistic(fitting how everything works in Naruto) which is not some non existenting power system or forced relationships and intactions. Although I was not satisfied with ending of volume 2, author immediately fixed all issues related to that with first chapter of volume 3 and made story reach a higher quality and more perfected in all aspects wise and most importantly Shiori's character development made this novel really captivating for because world of Naruto is cruel if you do not change or should I say develop more you can't achieve your goals and staying medicore means you will be not able achieve your goals and dreams so current develop of Shiori is in right path for me. Thanks for writing this story author, I wish good luck for you in writing your stories and waiting for more. I was reading this story from beginning and waited for writing a review till it reach a good amount of chapters and all I can say is this story is one of the best Naruto fanfiction which doesn't have repeated things.
It is the first fan fict I read and boy..I think the author is deleting all the bad reviews.The novel is not to my taste, but I can not imagine how it can be 4.7 stars.I am giving this 5 stars so that the author does not read it, and whoever read it goes into with bleach, ready to wash their eyes.
I honestly like the fic! And seriously, if there's something I don't like about the original work and how stupid Naruto is, then in my humble opinion this "fic" is already above the original work, like if the original work was made of this expensive premise it would be the perfect anime. I really hope for this fic and that Shiori continues to be the great protagonist she has been since the beginning!
Very good fanfic, and thank you author for making this fic, I really like it. 555555555555555555555555 555555555555555555555555 5555555555555555555555555 5555555555555555555555555 5555555555555555555555555
This is not for me, I stopped at chapter 50, I will give you the last three votes because is a good story just not my cup of tea. The only detail that I think you can better is in the character growth because going Yandere for Naruto and drawing conclusions is not manageable for readers after some time, it actually get annoying. PD: for those that want to start this is a good story but every time I try onto a Female Lead story I fail to keep my attention(happen to me also if a story is mass harem).
it's good to me until the end of volume 2, the author just feel it's good idea to push izumi to become villains? it's just so forced that development isn't even funny. it's seems like author didn't know how to use existing villains to use so author created one and it seems author make mc live too easy at early chapter so author make this development. PS. and the author seems too scared of his decision making that development will effect the reader so he chose to mass update
Heya! I really like your Fanfic, so I will be writing a fic where my MC will corrupt Sasuke. Keep up the good work!
Thoroughly enjoyed the starting chapters but the novel soon gets boring. Nice concept but not so good story progression.
I love it, it has great quality writing, consistent updates, concept of story development is better than some fanfic, the character design is good too, and of course the world background is Naruto, one of my favorite anime/manga of all time.
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the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius
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this is great............................................................................................................................................................. .......
5 star for this one. 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
my english is very bad, but I have to type to say haw amazing this store is becase Im afraid it get droped if a dont, so I hope this is enouth to give the stars it deserved
This fanfiction has developed in a good way, I mean I like it where you show Naruto's strength and emotional development in detail and I think the storyline is right , the storyline should be tagged 'slice of life' which I know and then don't forget the development of the side characters which makes me appreciate your work, good job
Overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this is one of the best Naruto fanfiction I've ever read,please continue this!
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Trash
Reveal Spoiler Author did you delete paragraphs cause I swear there were a 100+ chapters the last time I read your book
bruhhh.!!! i was reading it! i was on 44 chapter where izumi was confronted by orochimaru but u changed the sequences!! from where should i read! i am frustrated bro!
did you just remove 45 chapters __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Review after the story enters Shippuden: For readers who want completely civilian OC, it is not one of them, but close enough. It doesn't have many fights for mc, and in the first volume and now in shippuden, she seems to be more interested in money, getting strong people on her side, and plans to build Uzu. While the story may have its up and lows, I am giving the five stars because how legendarily she used Kotoamatsukami and Tsukuyomi in combination to get Orochimaru on her side. Though I don't like the karma that is probably going to be used to make Shiori an Otsutsuki in the future, I am satisfied as long as it brings more world building to politics, and just everything else, like how it justified civilian council, and all that stuff. I have put it in my second favourite after Goddess of Ice
Reveal Spoiler i haven't read many female mc novels but this one is my favourite female mc novel 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 💕💕💕💕💕😘😘
I kinda hate myself for liking this fic. It is a grooming fic about a thousand year old taking advantage of a small, innocent child and building him to be her perfect husbando… but I like it.
One of those fic that has good start .. but the development of plot and writing quality has deteriorated after chapter 60-70.. Give it a try if you want..maybe you'll like this story tho it has some inconsistencies and some parts are confusing specifically the Boruto time travel part..
I've caught up with the current chapter and I'mma say that this fanfic is a Hidden Gem below the hundreds of fanfics!! This Novel just showed how you could reveal something from the future to the past without causing too much commotions! Plus the Story seems like planned with the mc saving izumi to izumi being evil and then good again, great story development you did not just follow the Canon but also made your own villain the mc is not weak yet also not to op!!
Reveal Spoiler Review at Volume 3.5, chapter 109. Writing quality is good, with not many grammatical and spelling mistakes. Story development is GOD tier. The butterfly flaps its wings, and it is interesting and realistic. It even filled a major plothole in chapter 109. Character design is great. She doesn't remain constant, put develops in the story due to an event. Update stability is quite good. I doubt it will be dropped. World background is GOD tier, considering it is Naruto. Overall, a must read. I am actually liking it on par with Goddess of Ice fanfic, which I considered to be the peak till now.
I really like this story as it introduce lots of unique perspectives and realistic(fitting how everything works in Naruto) which is not some non existenting power system or forced relationships and intactions. Although I was not satisfied with ending of volume 2, author immediately fixed all issues related to that with first chapter of volume 3 and made story reach a higher quality and more perfected in all aspects wise and most importantly Shiori's character development made this novel really captivating for because world of Naruto is cruel if you do not change or should I say develop more you can't achieve your goals and staying medicore means you will be not able achieve your goals and dreams so current develop of Shiori is in right path for me. Thanks for writing this story author, I wish good luck for you in writing your stories and waiting for more. I was reading this story from beginning and waited for writing a review till it reach a good amount of chapters and all I can say is this story is one of the best Naruto fanfiction which doesn't have repeated things.
It is the first fan fict I read and boy..I think the author is deleting all the bad reviews.The novel is not to my taste, but I can not imagine how it can be 4.7 stars.I am giving this 5 stars so that the author does not read it, and whoever read it goes into with bleach, ready to wash their eyes.
I honestly like the fic! And seriously, if there's something I don't like about the original work and how stupid Naruto is, then in my humble opinion this "fic" is already above the original work, like if the original work was made of this expensive premise it would be the perfect anime. I really hope for this fic and that Shiori continues to be the great protagonist she has been since the beginning!
Very good fanfic, and thank you author for making this fic, I really like it. 555555555555555555555555 555555555555555555555555 5555555555555555555555555 5555555555555555555555555 5555555555555555555555555
This is not for me, I stopped at chapter 50, I will give you the last three votes because is a good story just not my cup of tea. The only detail that I think you can better is in the character growth because going Yandere for Naruto and drawing conclusions is not manageable for readers after some time, it actually get annoying. PD: for those that want to start this is a good story but every time I try onto a Female Lead story I fail to keep my attention(happen to me also if a story is mass harem).
it's good to me until the end of volume 2, the author just feel it's good idea to push izumi to become villains? it's just so forced that development isn't even funny. it's seems like author didn't know how to use existing villains to use so author created one and it seems author make mc live too easy at early chapter so author make this development. PS. and the author seems too scared of his decision making that development will effect the reader so he chose to mass update
Heya! I really like your Fanfic, so I will be writing a fic where my MC will corrupt Sasuke. Keep up the good work!
Thoroughly enjoyed the starting chapters but the novel soon gets boring. Nice concept but not so good story progression.
I love it, it has great quality writing, consistent updates, concept of story development is better than some fanfic, the character design is good too, and of course the world background is Naruto, one of my favorite anime/manga of all time.
deleted reviews................ and paid promotion................. instant 1 starrrr.................................................................
the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius, the idea for the story is genius
Una de las mejores lecturas...........................................................................................................................................................
this is great............................................................................................................................................................. .......
5 star for this one. 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
my english is very bad, but I have to type to say haw amazing this store is becase Im afraid it get droped if a dont, so I hope this is enouth to give the stars it deserved
This fanfiction has developed in a good way, I mean I like it where you show Naruto's strength and emotional development in detail and I think the storyline is right , the storyline should be tagged 'slice of life' which I know and then don't forget the development of the side characters which makes me appreciate your work, good job