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this is probably one of the best fanfics I have ever read, and I hope he can go with Quinn to the academy diskizd or something.
I don't know what i was expecting but it is nowhere near the level of original. But its still good enough ig. Not my cup of tea nowadays
Finally after many Days I read a good fanfic it's good its not to unrealistic And the MC is good but I need more moments and more of his personality He only trains And tries to be the strongest I think he should be more vocal he is very quite make some characters he can interact with and have a fun Banter And joke and talk around
Amazing book tbvh. it's just as good-if not better-as the original. please don't drop 😁
One of the few vampire system fanfic and o boy it is good i mean GOOD just the qi teaching if you know what i mean[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I've never actually read my vampire system, but the only thing I can say is that this is a really good work of art. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Its pretty good. The way author writes and the grammar can improve though. Besides that there isn't much character development so far but the mc is getting stronger. Weak to strong.
so far the best story ever ..! amazing writing skills ,and I am looking forward to the new chapter updates ..!
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I'm starting to like this fan fiction. It's faithful to the lore and the the only problem I might have is the pacing is a little fast.
good fanfiction story I recommend this good character development please author dont drop this
I don't care what you have to do continue the story I want a my vampire system story please.
i think it's overall a good fanfiction if you can i would really like if you could try making fanfiction for 'my werewolf system' with mc that have similar personality
I haven't even read it till now, but it's a 5 star just for being a MYS fic while there is no other fic for this novel.
This is great, always loved MVS and this fanfic does it justice, really like how the mc uses the system to its full potential and is smart, only problem I could point out is that there not enough chapters and I want more, keep up the good work [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins]
I like the story ...........................................................................................................................
Its pretty good. Keep it up. ..............................................................................................................................................
The story so far is great. (c21) For my stones worth I am enjoying it so far more than the original, so if the quality remains the same going foreward I forsee something truely great developing here.
the story is good I hope to see how you develop it.................................. ................................................................ ................................................
why is this better than my vampire system?!! and if you ask why because he's a hybrid!
I like the book you did marvelous work author the book was so well written and the story keeps getting intresting. And Thanks author for your hard work. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
It’s alright, but it’s not for me. Mc likes to teach everyone how to use qi but the author excuses it by saying because he was a teacher before now he will teach everyone. his first blooded is some random dude who one cares about because we just randomly met him a few chapters ago, don’t even know the dudes personality. The interactions between characters is kinda dull so even with the 40+ chapters i read i still didn’t feel a connection with the mc. Few grammatical mistakes but nothing that ruins the story. The author describes thing’s decently well. The powers seem interesting, mc also had some smart moments like when he made the portal. The potential is there but at the moment all it is is potential. Overall i think it’s not bad but it just doesn’t stand out to me. Best of luck to the Author. [img=recommend]
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this is probably one of the best fanfics I have ever read, and I hope he can go with Quinn to the academy diskizd or something.
I don't know what i was expecting but it is nowhere near the level of original. But its still good enough ig. Not my cup of tea nowadays
Finally after many Days I read a good fanfic it's good its not to unrealistic And the MC is good but I need more moments and more of his personality He only trains And tries to be the strongest I think he should be more vocal he is very quite make some characters he can interact with and have a fun Banter And joke and talk around
Amazing book tbvh. it's just as good-if not better-as the original. please don't drop 😁
One of the few vampire system fanfic and o boy it is good i mean GOOD just the qi teaching if you know what i mean[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I've never actually read my vampire system, but the only thing I can say is that this is a really good work of art. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Its pretty good. The way author writes and the grammar can improve though. Besides that there isn't much character development so far but the mc is getting stronger. Weak to strong.
so far the best story ever ..! amazing writing skills ,and I am looking forward to the new chapter updates ..!
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I'm starting to like this fan fiction. It's faithful to the lore and the the only problem I might have is the pacing is a little fast.
good fanfiction story I recommend this good character development please author dont drop this
I don't care what you have to do continue the story I want a my vampire system story please.
i think it's overall a good fanfiction if you can i would really like if you could try making fanfiction for 'my werewolf system' with mc that have similar personality
I haven't even read it till now, but it's a 5 star just for being a MYS fic while there is no other fic for this novel.
This is great, always loved MVS and this fanfic does it justice, really like how the mc uses the system to its full potential and is smart, only problem I could point out is that there not enough chapters and I want more, keep up the good work [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins]
I like the story ...........................................................................................................................
Its pretty good. Keep it up. ..............................................................................................................................................
The story so far is great. (c21) For my stones worth I am enjoying it so far more than the original, so if the quality remains the same going foreward I forsee something truely great developing here.
the story is good I hope to see how you develop it.................................. ................................................................ ................................................
why is this better than my vampire system?!! and if you ask why because he's a hybrid!
I like the book you did marvelous work author the book was so well written and the story keeps getting intresting. And Thanks author for your hard work. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
It’s alright, but it’s not for me. Mc likes to teach everyone how to use qi but the author excuses it by saying because he was a teacher before now he will teach everyone. his first blooded is some random dude who one cares about because we just randomly met him a few chapters ago, don’t even know the dudes personality. The interactions between characters is kinda dull so even with the 40+ chapters i read i still didn’t feel a connection with the mc. Few grammatical mistakes but nothing that ruins the story. The author describes thing’s decently well. The powers seem interesting, mc also had some smart moments like when he made the portal. The potential is there but at the moment all it is is potential. Overall i think it’s not bad but it just doesn’t stand out to me. Best of luck to the Author. [img=recommend]
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