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Okay, a few chapters in and its about time to give a review! Once you get passed the beginning explanation, the story dives all in... The plot is good, although it would have been nice to not make me love her husband before you took him away, Author-san!🤧. The book is good, a lot of character potential, can't wait to see the brothers' conscious interaction with our FL! A recommended read.
This is a very cute story that is a tear-jerker. You put a lot of true emotions into your characters. You can feel the heartbreak inside Laura and her kids. It's very realistic and surreal. I love the pov side of the story which helps you feel and see through the characters. I only suggest that you fix the grammar and organize the writing style in the beginning chapter which is no biggie I did the same mistake in my first novel. Same soft grammar but it's an easy fix with some editing adjustments. The more you write the more it comes together so don't give up! ♥️♥️♥️♥️ Keep up the great work you have great potential to make this an entertaining read. I am so excited to see where this story goes. The first number one fan!!! I recommend this novel to anybody wanting a good read and give this new author a chance.
Hey I hope you haven't given up on your book. I've been waiting for some new chapters. Thank you for the power stones ❤️ your the best! Please, everyone give this new author a fair go. Everyone deserves a chance to shine.
Okay, a few chapters in and its about time to give a review! Once you get passed the beginning explanation, the story dives all in... The plot is good, although it would have been nice to not make me love her husband before you took him away, Author-san!🤧. The book is good, a lot of character potential, can't wait to see the brothers' conscious interaction with our FL! A recommended read.
This is a very cute story that is a tear-jerker. You put a lot of true emotions into your characters. You can feel the heartbreak inside Laura and her kids. It's very realistic and surreal. I love the pov side of the story which helps you feel and see through the characters. I only suggest that you fix the grammar and organize the writing style in the beginning chapter which is no biggie I did the same mistake in my first novel. Same soft grammar but it's an easy fix with some editing adjustments. The more you write the more it comes together so don't give up! ♥️♥️♥️♥️ Keep up the great work you have great potential to make this an entertaining read. I am so excited to see where this story goes. The first number one fan!!! I recommend this novel to anybody wanting a good read and give this new author a chance.
Hey I hope you haven't given up on your book. I've been waiting for some new chapters. Thank you for the power stones ❤️ your the best! Please, everyone give this new author a fair go. Everyone deserves a chance to shine.