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:D I like this story so far. The plot is promising and enjoyable to read! Keep it up, author! More chaaapterssss!!!
First of all, I have to say I really, really feel sorry for Aria and Avery. Because they were the daughters of the ML's enemy, their lives were hunted. I won't elaborate more about the author's writing because like the other book, Hide Me, Mr. Billionaire, her writing is good already. Even the action scenes were thrilling enough! Back to the characters, I'm anxious to see how Aria would fall in love with the ML, Prince after being betrayed by her lover, Bryce. If she knew that Prince and Bryce were in cahoot to bring her down (and even killed the twin sister that she didn't know), her soul would be crushed. Until now, I just hope the poor lady could be happy and free of worries with her unborn child. She shouldn't be entangled in this web of lies and deceit. All the best, author!
The first chapter didn't give an idea at all. It seems like I want something more since it's a contemporary romance. I'm expecting of something like readers can be hooked up by just reading the synopsis and especially the first pub chapter. The story is a bit tremulous for me. In short, it's not intriguing. That's all, just keep on writing author!
Nobody can actually stop me from reading this book. It excite me all down to the core like it's a natural thing to read. I want to read it even more.
Well author, to say the least about this story is comical. I love the story plotline and how twisted it's getting. The characters are well structured and well formidable. Nice work author.
wow! ! lovely work.... written by a wonderful person😁😁. . great work Author 😊😊 wish to read more from you 🤗🤗 keep up the good work 💓💓💓
It surely is an intriguing story. I liked the way things suddenly changed after chapter 1 and I loved the way you wrote the fighting scene between avery and prince. Good work author
The story plot is good, the characters are developing themselves by what the author wrote. There is not much going on aside from trying to kill, yet, it is interesting if there were more chapters to read on.
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A good read. Loved the ending author's thought you put, made me think over the chapters again. I was a tad bit bummed when Avery died though...
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the story is interesting, flowing well, and engaging. It opens with a banging chapter 1 that makes you want more. All the best luck for the author.
The preceding chapters were all well written, hooking enough the reader wanting more of it. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters to be unveil and will definitely go back to reading it again. Kudos writer!
First of all, just like the author's other novel, this one is promising. I like how interesting the story line. I like the female lead, ngl. Looking forward! Good job, author!!
:D I like this story so far. The plot is promising and enjoyable to read! Keep it up, author! More chaaapterssss!!!
First of all, I have to say I really, really feel sorry for Aria and Avery. Because they were the daughters of the ML's enemy, their lives were hunted. I won't elaborate more about the author's writing because like the other book, Hide Me, Mr. Billionaire, her writing is good already. Even the action scenes were thrilling enough! Back to the characters, I'm anxious to see how Aria would fall in love with the ML, Prince after being betrayed by her lover, Bryce. If she knew that Prince and Bryce were in cahoot to bring her down (and even killed the twin sister that she didn't know), her soul would be crushed. Until now, I just hope the poor lady could be happy and free of worries with her unborn child. She shouldn't be entangled in this web of lies and deceit. All the best, author!
The first chapter didn't give an idea at all. It seems like I want something more since it's a contemporary romance. I'm expecting of something like readers can be hooked up by just reading the synopsis and especially the first pub chapter. The story is a bit tremulous for me. In short, it's not intriguing. That's all, just keep on writing author!
Nobody can actually stop me from reading this book. It excite me all down to the core like it's a natural thing to read. I want to read it even more.
Well author, to say the least about this story is comical. I love the story plotline and how twisted it's getting. The characters are well structured and well formidable. Nice work author.
wow! ! lovely work.... written by a wonderful person😁😁. . great work Author 😊😊 wish to read more from you 🤗🤗 keep up the good work 💓💓💓
It surely is an intriguing story. I liked the way things suddenly changed after chapter 1 and I loved the way you wrote the fighting scene between avery and prince. Good work author
The story plot is good, the characters are developing themselves by what the author wrote. There is not much going on aside from trying to kill, yet, it is interesting if there were more chapters to read on.
Reveal Spoiler A good read. Loved the ending author's thought you put, made me think over the chapters again. I was a tad bit bummed when Avery died though...
Reveal Spoiler the story is interesting, flowing well, and engaging. It opens with a banging chapter 1 that makes you want more. All the best luck for the author.
The preceding chapters were all well written, hooking enough the reader wanting more of it. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters to be unveil and will definitely go back to reading it again. Kudos writer!
First of all, just like the author's other novel, this one is promising. I like how interesting the story line. I like the female lead, ngl. Looking forward! Good job, author!!