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i binged this and its the best thing ive done the story is masterfully told the story grasps your attention from the beginning and keeps you entertained throughout the story never a dull or boring chapter.
absolutely one of the best naruto fanfiction's I've ever read really looking forward to what happens next.
This is a great story with significant character development, a wonderfully realized AU, and some quality writing that keeps you reading chapter after chapter. If you like Naruto and/or excellent worldbuilding in a fanfic, check this out. Thanks author!
TRUTH NO BS I LOVE THIS NOVEL BECAUSE IT HAS MINE LADY TSUNADE ONE HOT MAMA FROM NARUTO. I HATE NARUTO HOW CAN THEY RUIN TSUNADE SO MUCH LIKE ALL THE WOMEN IN NARUTO THOSE NARUTO ANIME HATE WOMEN. THIS NOVEL REDEEMS TSUNADE IN AN EPIC WAY THAT WILL BLOW YOUR MIND. THIS NOVEL IS A MERRYSUE STORY DONE RIGHT BY THE AUTHOR SO READ THIS NOVEL AND ENJOY TSUNADE EPIC IN THIS NOVEL.
overall average story...your other sorcerer supreme fanfic is unique and better.๐ฎโ๐จ๐
i always dislike it when the time travel arc comes up in naruto fics. it happens in all the big naruto fanfics and it always degrades the story imo. the novel is written very well, and i would rate up until the end of the 2nd shinobi war as 5 star. but the time travel fic and beyond that reach too far in scope and make a mess of things imo.
A histรณria รฉ incrรญvel,gostaria de ler atรฉ o final,e espero que a histรณria siga atรฉ a รฉpoca do anime ,Seria interessante ver as naรงรตes se juntando,sem contar que eles seriam ainda mais fortes que o original
La historia no se parece en nada a ninguna otra escrita o creada Ademรกs, incluye hechos de la historia original como base, sin embargo algunos hechos resultan un poco no creรญble.
I love your history, the development is so interesting, above all, the evolution you have given to Tsuna is very good, I like how the story is going, and the truth is I think it's great that Tsuna is the one who trains Naruto instead of Jiraya, when I saw Shippuden I honestly didn't see that Naru had learned much from him
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I really like this book and hopefully the ending will be satisfying๐ฏโฃ๏ธ
This is THE BEST naruto fanfic i have read in a while. No complaints so far. Its realy good.
En conclusiรณn es perfeco, me hace tener emociones,llore por la muerte de Tobi y hashi, me gusta como ella si se muestra como humana con su familia y como se desarrolla ella,muy buena,muy รบnico.
Love this. just hope they don't do the cliche where they try to breed Tsunade for wood release users. that always ruins fanfics for me. and I could see the her leaving Konoha with the Senju and Uzumaki clans if something like that happens
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So far so good, except for a few world background inaccuracies. Keep up the good work.
Look, not much to say about the world and general story as it's a Naruto Fanfic but otherwise the writing is good, the way the characters are fleshed out and changing compared to the older versions of them selves as well as the interactions between them is nice, it's especially nice to see a younger and less deranged Orochimaro.
deserved 5+ rating! it was awesome work! specially showing the actual images and being realistic love the work keep it up author and hope you don't drop this this work deserve every like possible
Take care and I hope that your health improves. I've really enjoyed what you've written so far. Looking forward to future chapters! =================================================================
Great story and mc cheat powers. Also will the mc Change the timeline in the future and meet all characters she see in the anime and manga .
Gonna read this and hope it isnโt a yuri, donโt want to have to skip another trashy tag on a novel Iโm interested in [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The grammar isn't really that good, I would give it a 3. Everything else is good though.
one of the best fanfic i am reading (1)it's story development is good and now we are gonna be introduced to the sanin generation. (2) writing quality keeps you addicted because if you read one paragraph then your mind will urge you to read the next paragraph. (3) character design is good because tsunade could have had those powers in Naruto series but you need to buff other characters aswell so far it's very good. (4) update stability is okay, the novel is so good that i want more chapters everytime. (5) world background is the same as Naruto world and i love Naruto so overall it's good and it has alot of potential.
i binged this and its the best thing ive done the story is masterfully told the story grasps your attention from the beginning and keeps you entertained throughout the story never a dull or boring chapter.
absolutely one of the best naruto fanfiction's I've ever read really looking forward to what happens next.
This is a great story with significant character development, a wonderfully realized AU, and some quality writing that keeps you reading chapter after chapter. If you like Naruto and/or excellent worldbuilding in a fanfic, check this out. Thanks author!
TRUTH NO BS I LOVE THIS NOVEL BECAUSE IT HAS MINE LADY TSUNADE ONE HOT MAMA FROM NARUTO. I HATE NARUTO HOW CAN THEY RUIN TSUNADE SO MUCH LIKE ALL THE WOMEN IN NARUTO THOSE NARUTO ANIME HATE WOMEN. THIS NOVEL REDEEMS TSUNADE IN AN EPIC WAY THAT WILL BLOW YOUR MIND. THIS NOVEL IS A MERRYSUE STORY DONE RIGHT BY THE AUTHOR SO READ THIS NOVEL AND ENJOY TSUNADE EPIC IN THIS NOVEL.
overall average story...your other sorcerer supreme fanfic is unique and better.๐ฎโ๐จ๐
i always dislike it when the time travel arc comes up in naruto fics. it happens in all the big naruto fanfics and it always degrades the story imo. the novel is written very well, and i would rate up until the end of the 2nd shinobi war as 5 star. but the time travel fic and beyond that reach too far in scope and make a mess of things imo.
A histรณria รฉ incrรญvel,gostaria de ler atรฉ o final,e espero que a histรณria siga atรฉ a รฉpoca do anime ,Seria interessante ver as naรงรตes se juntando,sem contar que eles seriam ainda mais fortes que o original
La historia no se parece en nada a ninguna otra escrita o creada Ademรกs, incluye hechos de la historia original como base, sin embargo algunos hechos resultan un poco no creรญble.
I love your history, the development is so interesting, above all, the evolution you have given to Tsuna is very good, I like how the story is going, and the truth is I think it's great that Tsuna is the one who trains Naruto instead of Jiraya, when I saw Shippuden I honestly didn't see that Naru had learned much from him
Reveal Spoiler I really like this book and hopefully the ending will be satisfying๐ฏโฃ๏ธ
This is THE BEST naruto fanfic i have read in a while. No complaints so far. Its realy good.
En conclusiรณn es perfeco, me hace tener emociones,llore por la muerte de Tobi y hashi, me gusta como ella si se muestra como humana con su familia y como se desarrolla ella,muy buena,muy รบnico.
Love this. just hope they don't do the cliche where they try to breed Tsunade for wood release users. that always ruins fanfics for me. and I could see the her leaving Konoha with the Senju and Uzumaki clans if something like that happens
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So far so good, except for a few world background inaccuracies. Keep up the good work.
Look, not much to say about the world and general story as it's a Naruto Fanfic but otherwise the writing is good, the way the characters are fleshed out and changing compared to the older versions of them selves as well as the interactions between them is nice, it's especially nice to see a younger and less deranged Orochimaro.
deserved 5+ rating! it was awesome work! specially showing the actual images and being realistic love the work keep it up author and hope you don't drop this this work deserve every like possible
Take care and I hope that your health improves. I've really enjoyed what you've written so far. Looking forward to future chapters! =================================================================
Great story and mc cheat powers. Also will the mc Change the timeline in the future and meet all characters she see in the anime and manga .
Gonna read this and hope it isnโt a yuri, donโt want to have to skip another trashy tag on a novel Iโm interested in [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Muito bom quero mais .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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The grammar isn't really that good, I would give it a 3. Everything else is good though.
one of the best fanfic i am reading (1)it's story development is good and now we are gonna be introduced to the sanin generation. (2) writing quality keeps you addicted because if you read one paragraph then your mind will urge you to read the next paragraph. (3) character design is good because tsunade could have had those powers in Naruto series but you need to buff other characters aswell so far it's very good. (4) update stability is okay, the novel is so good that i want more chapters everytime. (5) world background is the same as Naruto world and i love Naruto so overall it's good and it has alot of potential.