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Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
One of the best stories I've read definitely one of my top five, you don't know what you are missing please read if you lov fantasy, yuri, harem and goddesses you'll enjoy this ant wait for more love Rita
I say the only problem i have is your Grammar?? i guess, cuz I'm kinda confused every now and then. But overall it's still passable, I'm still at chap 26 soo, still gonna continue!
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 I'll give an honest review when i read it but for now, here, a free 5 ⭐ Star.
This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so. ...... The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc. Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid. Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting ) That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.
Lol. This gives out major gothic vibes to me and I hope you'll include more of the explorable elements of mythology or it'll feel like a missed opportunity
Well, I'm here form the other story and I like it so far. The MC aurora is a fresh start and doesn't seen as optimistic as the other one so that's already a huge plus for me. Also, the side characters are interesting and it's nice to see The MC not go for her primary love interest the first chance she got and actually sit back ans explore her options.
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Since it has potential and you asked for a feedback, I'll leave a good rating. This might change in the future depending on what happens in the story later
Not my favourite story from the author but it's fun to pass time and update schedule is great. Might drop later if the story doesn't interest me. It's not to my taste
Honestly, I'm just here for the yuri tag. Nothing else matters much to me here so take your guess and pick over it. Also, yuri is love and I'm loving it
I like this story so I'll recommend it to those who are looking for a good yuri fic that also has a decent enough plot. It's not all mindless and I like how the author is taking the time in establishing roles
I'm sad to see the author abandon their other world, even if it was brand new but I'm happy to see this new story as well. The summary is interesting enough
Great start love this authors writeing! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Welcome to this story. Now, a few things first before we dive in. (Ignore the rating. I'm the author so I think I get a free pass? I'll update this note once I'm deep enough in the story. Hope you all would stick around) 1) I hope you enjoy this story since it's only here as long as your people enjoy it. 2) I love feedback so I hope I'll get some from you. A comment, a PS , a collection anything goes. (It's a WPC entry so PS would be really appreciated) 3) Rating: it's rated mature and the good stuff would come once we are through with the setting. I don't beat around the bush but I also don't like to head in straight. I would take time to develop relationships so that they hold meaning. 4) Once again, I hope you all enjoy this and we have a nice journey ahead.
Is this really the end....?it's so sad.... i was hoping that aurora would be able to beat the abyss and be with rita in the end.
Reveal Spoiler Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
One of the best stories I've read definitely one of my top five, you don't know what you are missing please read if you lov fantasy, yuri, harem and goddesses you'll enjoy this ant wait for more love Rita
I say the only problem i have is your Grammar?? i guess, cuz I'm kinda confused every now and then. But overall it's still passable, I'm still at chap 26 soo, still gonna continue!
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 I'll give an honest review when i read it but for now, here, a free 5 ⭐ Star.
This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so. ...... The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc. Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid. Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting ) That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.
Lol. This gives out major gothic vibes to me and I hope you'll include more of the explorable elements of mythology or it'll feel like a missed opportunity
Well, I'm here form the other story and I like it so far. The MC aurora is a fresh start and doesn't seen as optimistic as the other one so that's already a huge plus for me. Also, the side characters are interesting and it's nice to see The MC not go for her primary love interest the first chance she got and actually sit back ans explore her options.
Reveal Spoiler Since it has potential and you asked for a feedback, I'll leave a good rating. This might change in the future depending on what happens in the story later
Not my favourite story from the author but it's fun to pass time and update schedule is great. Might drop later if the story doesn't interest me. It's not to my taste
Honestly, I'm just here for the yuri tag. Nothing else matters much to me here so take your guess and pick over it. Also, yuri is love and I'm loving it
I like this story so I'll recommend it to those who are looking for a good yuri fic that also has a decent enough plot. It's not all mindless and I like how the author is taking the time in establishing roles
I'm sad to see the author abandon their other world, even if it was brand new but I'm happy to see this new story as well. The summary is interesting enough
Great start love this authors writeing! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Welcome to this story. Now, a few things first before we dive in. (Ignore the rating. I'm the author so I think I get a free pass? I'll update this note once I'm deep enough in the story. Hope you all would stick around) 1) I hope you enjoy this story since it's only here as long as your people enjoy it. 2) I love feedback so I hope I'll get some from you. A comment, a PS , a collection anything goes. (It's a WPC entry so PS would be really appreciated) 3) Rating: it's rated mature and the good stuff would come once we are through with the setting. I don't beat around the bush but I also don't like to head in straight. I would take time to develop relationships so that they hold meaning. 4) Once again, I hope you all enjoy this and we have a nice journey ahead.
Is this really the end....?it's so sad.... i was hoping that aurora would be able to beat the abyss and be with rita in the end.
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