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Hmm, so let me start. The first chapter was a mess, like real real mess. too much info dump, Tbh I nearly fell asleep there. please change it a little. There are some minor grammar errors but that is unavoidable, so 4/5 on writing quality. Stability of updates: Well, 3-4 chaps a week is too low for me so, 3/5 there. Story development: Hmm, I have read till the beast tide chapter where the mc just tires himself out before the actual fight begins. The story seems interesting but not much has been done yet, 4/5 Character design: Well, tbh I really don't like the mc, he is too... idk depressed? I mean, just tell that in the synopsis, I don't like reading depressed mcs, my life is already sad enough, wouldn't want to add sadder things to it(but that is just my personal thinking) 3/5 World background: Well, normal apocalypse world, not much has been introduced but it seems okay. People can tame beasts here, so that's cool as well. 4/5 Well, that's it for me, as for the readers reading this, you can try this novel if you want. A cool story.
i'm very excited for the next chapter! I like the cliffhanger too. The way the world sounds make it seem almost majestic yet pretty and the birds like they work together
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hello everyone why here to anyone looking to read this novel(in its current state) please try chapter 2 yes chapter 1 is a mess that I would like to hide under my stairs but I'm not at the level required to fix it yet I can promise it gets so much better in chapter 2 and beyond thank you for taking the time to read this and my novel
Hmm, so let me start. The first chapter was a mess, like real real mess. too much info dump, Tbh I nearly fell asleep there. please change it a little. There are some minor grammar errors but that is unavoidable, so 4/5 on writing quality. Stability of updates: Well, 3-4 chaps a week is too low for me so, 3/5 there. Story development: Hmm, I have read till the beast tide chapter where the mc just tires himself out before the actual fight begins. The story seems interesting but not much has been done yet, 4/5 Character design: Well, tbh I really don't like the mc, he is too... idk depressed? I mean, just tell that in the synopsis, I don't like reading depressed mcs, my life is already sad enough, wouldn't want to add sadder things to it(but that is just my personal thinking) 3/5 World background: Well, normal apocalypse world, not much has been introduced but it seems okay. People can tame beasts here, so that's cool as well. 4/5 Well, that's it for me, as for the readers reading this, you can try this novel if you want. A cool story.
i'm very excited for the next chapter! I like the cliffhanger too. The way the world sounds make it seem almost majestic yet pretty and the birds like they work together
Reveal Spoiler
hello everyone why here to anyone looking to read this novel(in its current state) please try chapter 2 yes chapter 1 is a mess that I would like to hide under my stairs but I'm not at the level required to fix it yet I can promise it gets so much better in chapter 2 and beyond thank you for taking the time to read this and my novel